FF: A Lifetime With You [Ch 6, Pg: 22]

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Posted: 13 years ago

#71

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lemme see ur comment! ☺️

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OnlyHope

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Posted: 13 years ago

#72

So I'm writing this comment AS I read Chapter 2..

OOOmmmGGG...their introduction...the way Asher's eyes set on her..and the way SHE noticed his eyes too..hayeee ANKHEIN..how beautiful of a connection this was..and eeeks..she's so much like you, which is like me 😳

He decided he liked her... already..and I LOVE what he likes her for..the BEAUTY comes LATER..

"she wasn't upfront' a little shy'well-mannered" like IS sab ke liye he likes her ☺️ Hayeee kahan hain aise larke 🤣 eeeks and then he wonders if he was attracted to her beauty or HER. Of course her ☺️ It's Khirad, afterall 😳

OOmggg, Asher is SO smart..Bride's sister serves groom's brother, hayeee...tez larka 🤣 and eeks the kashish part was beautiful ☺️

"He was everything she wasn't". That's how 2 people complete each other Embarrassed

^ how much more beautiful can this get. I'm ALREADY in love with them and abhi kuch hua bhi nahi in the story Embarrassed

Omg now they don't like each other 😒 and she's crying and her dress is spoiled 😒

-Chapter 3-

Aww both thinking of their marriage 😳

Telepathy at it's best!

The rukhsati scene makes me think of how it'd be at my shadi..like me and my sis 😳

Back to story 🤣

Love how Asher is noticing every little thing about Khirad 😳

Omg the sari...SAMe thing again..I'm waiting for a VERY close shadi in my family so I can wear a sari and my sis is waiting for me so she can wear one 🤣

Off-white and red/maroon would be beautiful <3

Hahahah @ Asher talking to himself that he'll make her wear the sari time and again. How cute☺️

"He decided she was perfect. Perfect for him."

^ ...and I faint ☺️

Dewar-bhabhi ka rishta is utterly sweet, I swear Embarrassed

OOmg omg omg omg

Areena, you can't do this to me..

AB to bilkul bhi nahi..

They're about to meet again Embarrassed

How amazing of a guy IS he.

Sachi wala perfect 😳

Continue sooon 😳

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.SilentPrincess

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Posted: 13 years ago

#73

Editedd! 😳

Now updateee!

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BlackStar

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Posted: 13 years ago

#74

Reeno, do you have your friend's original FF which I can read?

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-Grace-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#75

ok reading chapter 2 now

im gona comment as i read😆

inclusion of the past with every passing moment in his life is just an aww-moment lol

i love the part where he looked at his beauty products and didnt wana throw them out beautiful explanation of him not wanting change and the part where he saw his younger self in the mirror reminded me of veer-zaara where veer was shown to be a younger one from the eyes of zaara lol😆

YESSS you added raza lool they would always talk about him but never showed him in the show lool just like the mysterious Aman😆

hahaha Ayan Bhaijaan?? i LOVE that name lol😳

and when u described the sherwani and him styling his hair it made me visualize his look in dastaan

ohh god those were the days *dreamy eyes*

ok im loving the characters and love story of afsheen and ayan! so adorable😳 im trying to visualize Ayan and afsheen just reminds me of my phupo's friend lol she had the same name😆

ok seeing that khirad is afsheens sister and asher is ayan's brother im guessing shaadi mein hi kuch hoga lol

love how u introduced khirad, the last one to come and displaying amusing expressions lol

oooh so asher keeps staring at her aahh reminds me of hassan bano scenes hehehe

ok im in LOVEE like head over heels in love with the scene where they r standing face to face the way to described it i can visualize it and its just too awsome!

omgg im loving Asher!

awww asher wants to khirad?? missing her already how very adorable 😳

ouccchh he used her duppata that scene was beautifully written even tho with so much simplicity and minimal words it had such a nice affect👏

omgg khirad is crying poor girl!

this asher is so similar to ASR but in a good way this kind of attitude suits him waayyy more than the original ASR LMAO (meaning as i visualize it suits fawad more than barun idk, maybe because i like asher more lol)

pheww! finally read it

at first i was planning to read part of it as it seemed too long but then it got interesting and i decided to read the whole thing hehe

it was an amazing chapter <3