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Azzmaira

@kookoo864

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Posted: 12 years ago

#91

I feel so sad for khushi, its like she is alone in a crowd...
Thanks for pm!

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Shay

@shay1990

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Posted: 12 years ago

#92

Originally posted by: Maddy1270
what a beautiful portrayal of friendship and companionship... love how they share in each other's happiness... the teasing banter amongst all is very realistic... keen to know what arnav's reaction will be to khushi leaving, even though he is yet to accept even if only to himself that he has feelings for her! loved the manner in which you depicted the pull they feel toward each other

Thank you once again Maddy... You leave me speechless 😊

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kriti_atharv

@kriti_atharv

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Posted: 12 years ago

#93

oh wow awsuuum update hun...they are soo comfortable with each other...loved it very much n thnx 4da pm...

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...Penknife...

@...Penknife...

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Posted: 12 years ago

#94

beautiful update...so she is going home...uh ooh

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723461

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Posted: 12 years ago

#95

Okay.

So i knew that i just HAD to comment. This is one of those stories...like a gem amidst sand.

Every word, so thoughtful and the introductions at the beginning of every chapter...i was just greedily taking it all in.

The way you write is fantabulous. One of the best writers here.

Arnav and khushi are my favourites...i can cry at how pefect khushi is illustrated here...a crazy, beautiful but still broken girl

Loved it, and thankyou so much for writing this!

Edited by Madafterarhi - 12 years ago

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Shobhana

@-Shobhu21-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#96

Caught up with your updates finally !!

And these past two were just so good !
And dont at all worry about the pace, cause seriously, Im loving it !

The bond that Arnav and Khushi have come in terms with ! Wonderfully written !
And the slow walk on the beach !

And the kind of comradeship you showed between the sibling pairs here ! I loved it ! And ya, the pace again, makes the story seem more real than you think !

But the last line, and Khushi's dream have me scared ! I hope she doesnt have to do something that affects her so badly !
And as for Arnav, he surely is falling for her slowly and so is she !

Loved this 1

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Shay

@shay1990

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Posted: 12 years ago

#97

Originally posted by: -Shobhu21-
Caught up with your updates finally !!

And these past two were just so good !
And dont at all worry about the pace, cause seriously, Im loving it !

The bond that Arnav and Khushi have come in terms with ! Wonderfully written !
And the slow walk on the beach !

And the kind of comradeship you showed between the sibling pairs here ! I loved it ! And ya, the pace again, makes the story seem more real than you think !

But the last line, and Khushi's dream have me scared ! I hope she doesnt have to do something that affects her so badly !
And as for Arnav, he surely is falling for her slowly and so is she !

Loved this 1

I'm so so SO glad you're enjoying this one! It really does mean a lot.
I will try and update a bit more often