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vaishali

@Vaish24

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#51

loved it...

u described the pain very well...

update asap... :)

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Nimra

@Dazzling_Smile

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: kriyansh24
loved it...

u described the pain very well...

update asap... :)

itna sa comment??

uwahh uwaahhh :'(

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medha

@SavageMissMe

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#53

id been w8ing so long for the upd8 bt it was totally worth the w8.

truly awesome, the way u described the pain made it feel so real.

btw will kriyaansh meet at maharaja ka mehel?

cant w8 2 read on

do upd8 soon n pm me

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Misha

@Born2Dance

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#54

Res
Unres...

Nimmi...!!!!😲
Superb...!!!!👏
U r really a brilliant writer girl...😃
I mean...
Wooowww...!!!⭐️
It was fantastic...👏
D feelings wer sooo deep n strng...😭
Cnt wait fr d nxt part...
Please update ASAP...
Don make us waitin lik d Oder updates...
Pleaseee...

Edited by Born2Dance - 13 years ago

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Shweta

@Shweta-kriyansh

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#55

awesome...the dress and the song perfectly suited the situation...i guess the gal is kria...isnt it...spooky 1st update...it was quite eerie...see i told u...u cud create horror as well and as a matter of fact u have created horror and pain both in this update of urs...way to go!!!!!

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@Black_Stone

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#56

Heyy nimmi da update was awesum 👏

luvd da way u describes da girl's pain :-)

btw who was dat girl????

i guess she's kriya bt m nt sure

u've relle written it well sweets 😊

ty fr da pm

nd update soon

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achuAR

@achuAR

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#57

First of all I loved that frock😉😆

Scary scary update😵

still beautifully written👏

especially the song sequence..😊

plzz do update next part soon😛

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Nams

@..nams..

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#58

awsum update... boot ki kahani jaise lagi but it was great start..

dress selction was also gud nd so do the song !!

and rey n vikramjeet poor guys :P