Your Love Broke Me ~ Arshi FF

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mishka007

@mishka007

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#181

Hi just read all the chapters and am intrigued with this, pls update soon

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Denaid

@Denaid

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#182

I read the entire story in one go, not here but in ur blog.. It's an amazingly intriguing story... Well written and balanced.. Loved it.. Thank u for writing and sharing it..

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crazyyfan

@crazyyfan

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#183

Just caught up with this FF and read the 38 chapters in one go !! Its so brilliantly written..The way you weaved the flashback and the present is unique and beautiful.Cant wait to read more !!

So off i go to the next thread >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

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SS88

@SS88

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#184

Oh I really like this FF. i read the first 25 chapters in a single sitting. You write really well .Esp the way you handle the narrative going to and fro between past and present. Will comment in detail once I've read the whole story :) But for now, I'm lovin' it :)

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Farah008

@Farah008

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#185

interesting...combination of present & past.

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Farah008

@Farah008

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#186

OMG!! So much of emotions!

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anera

@anera

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#187

hey plz update i just red this story in one go
plz
and pm me if u start it again

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mayabhi

@mayabhi

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#188

This is such a sweet story. I hope u won't abandon it. Wud like to read the whole story. Pls do update

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anu

@anu17

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#189

this is really lovely story

I read it one go

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vittoriA Giardano

@kbtr

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#190

Hey; for some reason WordPress is not letting me comment! Anyway,

I just finished reading the story in it's entirety. What a superb story it was. It had everything in it - childhood love, betrayal, jealousy, hatred, adventure, thrills, mystery, love, love,love...

I loved that Arnav was so persistent and determined to get back his love, Kushi. At first, I was a bit surprised that he would marry her sister. But after a while, it all made sense!

I absolutely loved your descriptions of their childhood together, and the conspiracy of the young Arnav against Radhika. Your description of Arnav when he fell in adoration with Kushi at the time of her birth was simply sensational. OMG! I could just imagine a sweet, chubby, little kid mesmerized by gorgeous pools of destiny! Hayi mardala!

The way you painted the picture of their childhood was magnificent. Oh yeah, "meiyaa naam Fushi Fingh Faizada...hahahah!! And Arnav's frustration...! Priceless!!

For a while, I was a bit tensed that Kushi would exonerate her sister, who was really a stranger. That any human being would be capable of hating so, but especially their own sister, boggles the mind! And so, in spite of misgivings, I'm glad that she did not change her statement. Loved how Arnav supported her throughout.

I really enjoyed your story and thank you for sharing it with me.