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Posted: 13 years ago
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Ohhh please continue!
I usually don't read stuff that people write on IF, but I kinda got hooked on this one.
I WANT to know what will happen next! PM me when it's done 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow this sounds sooo interesting deifnitly continue! :D
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Farah, why am I thinking of dark, brooding vampires???? Well, you have my attention, so please continue...
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nice start 👍🏼
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice start...
Do continue...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I like it.Can you PM me whenever you update it?
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Posted: 13 years ago
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superb beginning
would love to read more
thnx for the pm
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illumination in the darkness-part 2
It was a bright sunny morning; they arouse form their sleep and got dressed in new attire. She put on a plain reddish shirt and pants, the chromatic color resembling the hue of blood. On the other side, he was in a pain black leather jacket which was as black as a coal and black pants which is in a color that is lacking of hue. They got prepared for jogging and opened the door at the exact time. Arnav stared at her from bottom to the top. Realizing that he got caught gazing at her closely, he gets back to his sense right away. He started to feel uneasy, he sense an odor of fresh blood. He tries out to cover his nose but he did not.

Khushi: Are you okay?

Arnav: Ya I'm fine, well have you planned to ask me this question whenever you see me?

Khushi: No I didn't planned but you seriously don't look okay to me, do you need to see the doctor?

Arnav: thanks for your concern but if I'm not fine I would see the doctor

Khushi: by the way, you really haven't heard the loud cry last night?

Arnav: you know what I think?

Khushi: what?!

Arnav: I think you are the one who need to see the doctor, now excuse me I need to go jogging.

Khushi: I'm also going jogging, let's jog together, Kay?

Arnav: No!

Khushi: why? What happen?

Arnav: no I mean I want to jog alone.

Khushi: okay bye see you around.

Arnav: bye

He was proceeding when he heard Khushi murmuring to herself again

Khushi: weird person…Devi maiya how can you make someone so weird?

Arnav: is it fun?

Khushi: excuse me?

Arnav: talking to yourself like a pudding head …

Khushi: what do you mean?

He did not replied and turned away…

Khushi: did he just call me a pudding head? What the hell does he think of himself?

She went down and saw him jogging. His silky brown hair so wet, the sweat gradually run down from his forehead to his chin. She was so lost in him that she did not notice he was approaching towards her. He did not lay an eye on her and walk pass by her calmly.

Khushi: did he just ignore me, not even a single hi? Why would he say hi to you Khushi, you just met him last night! Stop being pudding head! Ouch, how can I use his language!!

After jogging, she ran to her room and quickly got changed.

Khushi: you are late Khushi! Today you are so dead! Now stop talking to yourself and run! Wait, does he need to go to work, what is his occupation? Stop thinking about that weird person! What are you doing with me, Devi maiya?

She went downstairs and saw a red Ferrari car parked in front of her apartment. In the first place, she thought it was Arnav's car however she saw familiar faces sitting in the car.

Khushi: payal, Akash, you guys here?

Akash: yup we were passing by and payal though we could pick you up as well

Khushi: aww thank you Akash, you are the best jiju in the world unlike others who just passes by without looking at you or saying hi.

Payal: who are you talking about Khushi?

Khushi: no one. Let's go we are getting late, by the way nice car jiju.

Akash: thanks

They were primed to set off; all the same arnav was observing them through the window. He caught sight of a man talking to Khushi; however he failed to notice payal. Consequently, his mind leads him to think of the negativity. His belief came out with the fact that khushi's boyfriend came to pick her up, however his heart insists to believe such fact.

Khushi's profession was a beautician. While she was carrying out with her duty, she saw him approaching towards the store. She was so hooked on him that consequently she failed to perceive that she was burning her customer's hair.

Customer: Ahh! What the hell do you think you are doing?!

Khushi: I'm sorry ma'am, I did not notice... I

Customer: Sorry can't fix my hair back

Khushi: sorry ma'am what can I do for it?

Customer: you need to pay…

While Khushi was apologizing for her blunder, her boss approached

Boss: yes, how may I help you ma'am?

Customer: who are you?

Boss: I'm the boss of this beauty salon

Customer: I'm glad you are here; your hair dresser burnt my hair…

Boss: I'm sorry ma'am if you do not mind, I may assign another hair dresser to shape your hair and we would not take in the cost.

Customer: now that's what I call a professional boss

Boss: thanks for the appreciation ma'am, please follow me.

Customer: this time I am not taking further actions, I expect there won't be next time

Khushi: yes ma'am

Khushi murmuring to herself: Khushi, stop thinking about that rakshas, how can he be here?

She was turning back when she bump into someone, it was man; his body was as hard as a stone.

Khushi: ouch!! Can't you see while walking??

She took a glance and recognizes arnav standing in front of her.

Khushi: you!! What are you doing here?

Arnav: it's a salon, anyone can come here…

Khushi: are you following me?

Arnav: why would I follow you, I came here to cut my hair.

Khushi: I'm sorry but we don't welcome customers like you

Arnav: like me? Oh I see, that's why the woman who scold you is still sitting here making her hair.

Boss: Khushi, is that the way you talk to the customers?

Khushi: I am sorry ma'am actually,

Boss: I want no excuse Khushi

Khushi: I'm sorry ma'am

Arnav: its okay I just need to cut hair could you please make it fast

Boss: ya sure sir… Khushi go do your work I will assign another hair dresser for this man

Arnav: No, I want her to cut my hair

Boss: sure sir... Khushi

Khushi: okay ma'am

When she was more or less about to get his hair done, she spot two dots on his neck, they resembled some sort of bites. She was inquisitive however she had no idea if it was the accurate time to question him. Although she didn't have close relations or were very familiar with him but her curiosity occupied her thoughts therefore, she wasn't able to concentrate on her work so she decided to bring up the interrogation.

Khushi: what are the two dots on your neck?

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auther's note: thank you everyone for encourging me to continue this FF.. i hope you will enjoy reading it in the future also. and please dont forget to like and comment :)
P.S for those who want pms, please buddy me because it will be very difficult for me to pm you one by one :)
thank you :D
Farah <3
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Posted: 13 years ago
#19
LOL
ARNAV is a vampire...!!!😆


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Posted: 13 years ago
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Arshi_ipkknd has pointed out that Arnav might be a Vampire...
Is it where the story is heading... smelling blood... two dots on the neck which looks like a bite mark... the screaming at night...

Did he just get infected the previous night ????

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