HELP! swaron SS!(update page 18) - Page 12

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Posted: 13 years ago
awww amazing wow loved it
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Posted: 13 years ago
Whoa...interesting...read all the parts in one go...
part1
awesome...sharon's saying you cannot hide things from me...and then
she says muhje shivam se pyaar hua tha...🤔(jhoot tha bt still)
part2
sharon saying who am i and swayam ka ans ssshhh sharon
and then the topic is closed...this is nt forum and then the i hate u..i love you too part..drooling saaf karna padega...swayam the drama queen
(i fell off my chair while reading this)🤣
part3
uhhoo...accident...and swayam protected sharon hw sweet of him...wonderfully described
part 4
again AWESOME.and the song...one of my fav😍

update soon
Edited by Rutu - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome !! Loved the story !
Do add me to ur PM list :)
Sweet and caring Sharon..aaye haaye 😳
Hurt Swayam 🥺 😭
Update soon !
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Posted: 13 years ago
Swayammm!!! Baat suna karo! Kabhi kabhi acha hota he! :P kulfi faluda, acha update tha! I lykd it! Abhi u knw I'm very lazy to chota cmnt se kaam chala! :P
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Posted: 13 years ago
really INTERESTIN pm!! me d NEXT update and i'll spam it if yu wanna! :D
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hello all! I am alive! :D I have been announcing it everywhere! :P I am very very sorry for the late update, but please try to understand, I had my exams. I would have given a note but I thought I would've managed giving a few updates. Sadly that wasn't possible...:( I really am very sorry.

So finally the update is here, I tried to make it as long as possible. Hope you like it. :)

P.S: I just read my previous update, and realised how awfully written it was! So many typos, and grammatical errors. :| I am extremely sorry about that. But I am not going to correct it now..:P

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Swayam's POV:

She is walking right behind me, oddly enough. I could have never imagined, that Sharon would someday walk behind ME! I kept striding, pretending that she wasn't there and the dance and kiss never happened. But my stupid mind kept wandering back to it. The way she was so close to me, her fragrance, the touch of her hair-

Shut up! For the love of god, shut up! I kept scolding my mind. I couldn't let it get to me. But my brain didn't agree I guess..It kept arguing with me.

It's my fault, I shouldn't have kissed her. I reasoned.

She kissed you back didn't she? The voice replied.

That could be her hormones! It doesn't prove that she likes me the way I do.

That kiss cannot be categorised, under hormonal attraction.

Ugh! This is so frustrating! Sometimes, I think, why am I so smart? And why the hell am I in the debate team?! After some time I finally managed to shut down the irritating voice, and focused on where we were going.

Sw: Sharon, I think we should reach my house in about ten minutes or so..I said curtly.

Sh: what?!

Her voice almost sounded sad, but I don't think that is possible. She coughed and spoke again.

Sh: I-I mean..thank, thank god! Thank god hum pohoch gae! She stuttered.

I rolled my eyes and kept walking. What dies she think of herself?

Sw: o hello! Mujhe tumhaare saath rehne ka koi shauk nai hai..
Sh: swayam, meri baat toh Suno, about the k-k-k..
Sw: oh Sharukh Khan part two! What kkk? Jo bolna hai saaf saaf bolo.
Sh: Swayam, mein woh..tum...mein..hum...dance..phir..woh..kiss... She stuttered out awkwardly.

I turned around, and looked at her embarrassed face. If I wasn't sulking I might have found her face cute. BUT! I don't.

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Sharon's POV:

He turned around abruptly, looking at me. I know he would never fight back. Sharon, Kuch toh Karna padega. Think, think think! Find a way fast! That's when the imaginary light bulb, flickered over my head.

Sh: Swayam, tumne jo kiya..tumhe woh nai Karna chaiye tha! I spat in fake anger.
Sw: wait a minute..what?! Did I get that right?
Sh: yes you did. I said, you shouldn't have kissed me, when I didn't want you to. I replied.

I crossed my fingers, hoping that my plan wouldn't backfire.

Sw: yeah right!
Sh: you should apologise to me. Right now! I said.
Sw: apologise?! Not possible, the fault is yours too! Fine, I can understand I shouldn't have kissed you, but why did you kiss me back haan? Bolo!

I smirked inwardly. Gosh! I am too good! Well done Sharon.

Sh: I kissed you back, because..well, because, umm...I don't know. I kept playing along.
Sw: who are you fooling Sharon? Why can't you just admit it!
Sh: what do I admit? I asked innocently.
Sw: that..that..that, you like me! He said in agitation.
Sh: no way! I don't like you..not even a bit! I made a face at him.

I saw his face drop, all the anger and irritation slowly, turning into realisation. Then pain. And then back to square one, emotionless. Bah!! Why is this guy such an idiot! My plan, backfired! Why god! Why? Mere saath hi aisa kyu hota hai? I looked upto the heavens.

Sh: swayam, tum Suno toh-

Ahh! Again! He just walked off! Why does this happen always? Phir baat bina sune chala Gaya!

Sh: SWAYYAMM! I shrieked.

He turned around quickly, looking at me wide eyed. He couldn't always just walk away. I walked upto him, and jabbed me finger on his chest.

Sh: you, *poke* will *poke* listen *poke* to me! I finished with another very hard jab. But he didn't even flinch.

Sw: Kuch sunne ko baaki nai hai Sharon.
Sh: oh shut up! Stop behaving like this! What is this? Some sick Hindi daily soap? Where people keep misunderstanding each other?
Sw: Sharon? Tum theek toh ho? Kahin tumharre sar pe chot toh nai lagi? Aisi beheki beheki baatein kyu kar rahi ho?

Sh: stop acting smart okay! You know it na, ki mujhe yeh nai passand?!
Sw: kya nai passand?

Sh: arrey! Yeh, yeh jo tum aise emotionless face leke chale jaate ho! Why don't you argue with me?! Kya hogya hai tumhe? Why don't you shout at me?! Why can't you stop being such s dumbass and just speak for once! Point out when I am wrong!
Do anything, but don't stop talking to me!

Sw: tumhe kya farak padhta hai, ki mein tumse baat kar ya nai Karu?
Sh: you idiot! Why don't you understand? I don't want you, as in the mushy mushy, soft and fragile you! I want that fighter, who will protect me, that swayam which I had seen that day in the old staircase. What happened to you Swayam?
Sw: what? You..you..you want me? He asked cutely?

Sh: yes! You idiot! I have fallen for you! I have fallen for a weakling, for a guy who can't even speak up and say when someone is wrong, who can't stand for himself! I have fallen in love with a freak!

I vented out all my frustration, panting. God! It felt so good, to finally say what I feel. I teared up, and looked at Swayam, who had a smug look planted on his face. His lips twitching upwards, dying to smile.

Sw: I knew it..I mean seriously, who wouldn't love a guy as sweet as me? Matlab mein hu hi itna smart and charming ki koi bhi ladki mujhse pyaar karegi. He smiled.

Sh: you! Impossible!

I started hitting him, and he kept standing still smiling down at me. He held my wrists gently.

Sh: I love you swayam. I said with confidence, and burst out crying.
Sw: I know. He said cockily.

I hit him again, this time hard enough to make him wince.

Sw: okay okay! Maarna band Karo. I love you too! He finally gave in.
Sh: tum bhot bure ho! I hate you!

I hugged him, as tight as possible. Like I would lose him if I let go. But the tears kept leaking out of my eyes, and drenching his now almost dry shirt again. He didn't let go though, stroked my hair gently, and kissed my forehead. I felt something warm on my cheek, and looked upto see that swayam was crying as well.

Sh: tum, ro rahe ho? I asked in disbelieve.
Sw: kyu? Rona kya sirf tum ladkiyon ko aata hai? He replied sweetly.

Sh: swayam, tumhe pata tha na ki mein tumse pya- mera matlab that I like you?
Sw: haan mujhe pata tha.. He said after thinking a little.
Sh: that means ki tum itni der se, mujhe buddhu bana rahe the? I pushed him back.

I looked at him accusingly, anger seeping in my nerves. Hoe dare he? Hoe dare hr pls with me like that?! I am Sharon Rai Prakash! No one messes with me.

Sw: Sharon, mein-
Sh: you!! How dare you?! Tumhaari himmat kaise hui? You jerk!

With those last words I pounced on him, making both of su stumble on the dirty ground, splashing mud all over us. I started hitting him, but fell down instead.
He grabbed my waist making me stay in place.

Sw: tum, mujhe maarti kyu rehti ho? I heard him say.

But I was already too busy, to hear anything else. I was staring at him, ogling at his boyish features, that were lit up by a confused smile. His eyes, they weren't any unusual colour, but they were so deep that anyone could drown in them. His plain blackish brown eyes had such mystery in them that I could gaze into them all my life!

Sw: like something you see? He smirked evilly.
Sh: huh? I asked somewhat dazed.
Sw: take a picture it lasts longer. He remarked.
Sh: Way to break a cute moment! I rolled my eyes.
Sw: what? Moment? Look at my shirt, you are drooling Sharon! He burst out laughing at my expression.

Sh: shut up! Can't believe itne cute se chehre ke piche itna bada badmaash chupa hai!
Sw: gross! One thing Sharon, kabhi kissi ladke ko cute mat bolna. Ego ki dhajiyaan uda di. He made a face.
Sh: acha? I forgot, tumhaara ego toh itna bada hai ki tum toh ek room mein fit bhi nai aate hoge na?
Sw: dekhlo, tumne jhagda chalu kiya hai, ab mujhe may blame Karna!

Sh: what?! Meine chalu kiya? How could you say that swayam?
Sw: mujhe ek aur baat kehni hai!
Sh: kya?
Sw: tum bahot bhaari ho!
Sh: kya?!

I got to my feet hurriedly. Huffing in anger. This guy! Ugh! Idiot! Jerk! Gadha! Ullu!

Sw: sharon, man mein gaaliyan dene se Kuch nai hoga.. He smiled cutely.
Sh: how do you know? My mount was almost lying on the ground.
Sw: tum humesha bhul jaati ho na, ki tumhe mujhse zada ache se koi na jaanta..

I blushed and looked away. Oh god! Now I was blushing! I tried to control my smile by biting my lips and willed myself to be normal.

Sh: Dekho, I didn't start the fight okay?!
Sw: you did!
Sh: no I didn't!
Sw: yes!
Sh: no!
Sw: yes!
Sh: NO!
Sw: Yes!
Sh: FINE! be that way!

I think I did the most childish thing I could have ever done. I stomped my foot and started walking back into the jungle. But I was pulled back, and I hit swayam's chest.

Sw: tumhe ghar nai jaana?
Sh: nai. I whispered.
Sw: pakka?
Sh: a..bb..aa...mera matlab hai ki, haan! Haan jaana Haina!
Sw: toh phir uske liye iss taraf jaana hai, uss taraf nai.
Sh: chalo. I started walking.

We kept walking for a a while when we came to a two way road.

Sw: Sharon yahan se left lena hai. He spoke nonchalantly.
Sh: arrey! Nai! Right jaana hai.
Sw: Sharon left. He said tenderly.
Sh: swayam right.
Sw: yes I know I am right, toh ab chalo left!
Sh: no, you are wrong! We bed to go right!
Sw: left!
Sh: right!
Sw: left!
Sh: RIGHT!
Sw: LEFT!
SwaRon: FINE!

________________________The End______________________________

Mere dimaag mein iss SS ke liye aur koi idea nai hai. So I am ending it here. Agar koi ideas aye, then I will try to extend it. :)

Thanks for reading! All of you are amazing! :D
Cheers! :)
-Kritz


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Posted: 13 years ago
res..edited...
phew u updated...thanks for updating...main tojh iss SS ko bhul he gayi thi
it was awesome update...
SwaRon ka kabhi kuch nahi ho sakta😆...

and WHAT ur ending it here?????😲 na na u cant do that...u have to continue...
aage likho tomliboo...jaldi woh bhi...i wanna read further...
Edited by shaani2209 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
i hope you do continue but sweet update :D

Nikki <3
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update
Inka kuch nahi ho sakta
Pls continue it
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Posted: 13 years ago
That was a really cute way to end the SS !! I loved the way Sharon fought with him and then revealed that she likes him out of frustration !!! And still, this two continue to fight so adorably !!! Loved the whole update !!

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