HELP! swaron SS!(update page 18)

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manasi

@manasie23

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#91

Kritz u dun talk to me... Coming to the update awesome par yeh swayam kabhi puri baat sunta kyu nai :@

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Monica..

@Monica..

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#92

aaahh so u finallie updated..it was awesome..
Bht wait kraya..bt d update was rellie verie gud..swaron dance,kiss everythn..jus loved it..n pleezz update dis time soon

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tanuka

@Tanuka_TanHa

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#93

finally u decided to update , thank god 😛.

this part was awesome :) beautifully written !!

swaron dance and then their passionate kiss were so adorable ;) will be waiting for the next part, plz update soon this time.

Edited by tanukaswaron - 13 years ago

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Appu

@Parvathi12

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#94

u just redefined AWESOME... i loved it...esp the kiss.. hai hai... cant wait for the next ...

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shaani2209

@shaani2209

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#95

woaahhh this was awesome tomliboo...and thats one of my favorite songs😍...i loved the update..thanks for the pm :)

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LD-Radha

@LD-Radha

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#96

Loved the update and the choice of song😊 It was a perfect choice for a sweet scene like that!

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Shishir Darsh

@marauder

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#97

Whoa...i guess the wait was worth it. This was fabulous update. Loved every part of it and even more you added the song from Parinda. Simply loved the SwaRon dance and the kiss. But apart from that Sharon's pov were pleasant to read.

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Snowey

@Snowey

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#98

This was awesome. 👍🏼

I was scared that Swayam may be too unwell and Sharon would be in trouble in the next update. But pleasantly surprised that we got a beautiful dance and a perfect kiss. Why does Sharon always end up hurting Swayam, may be unintentionally but i don't think he can take it any longer. Hope the next update brings them together. Waiting for it already.

Loved the song BTW. 👏

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ABI

@ABBY92

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#99

The dance was beautiful and the kiss too...I can totally understand Swayam being upset with Sharon...Hope Sharon makes it up to him in the next update !!!