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gkoolans

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Posted: 13 years ago

#61

oh desi! that was horribly tragic... 💔

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Hunnybunny3

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Posted: 13 years ago

#62

Shyam is a SICKO. Can't believe he made him do that. Poor Khushi :0(

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Syama Akshara Luna

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Posted: 13 years ago

#63

that was amazing!

intense! ⭐️

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Natasha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#64

WOW SPEECHLESS UR ARMAZING WITH WORDS UR JUST AWESOME BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN THE LAST PART WAS JUST WOW

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sakthi25

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Posted: 13 years ago

#65

😭 Really heart wenching lines... But does this happen during their hatred mode to each other or after realising their love?

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-zozo-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#66

OMG!!!!!

that was sooo... good!

you've out done your self, Sara!

it was a sad ending but loved it to bits!

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Sarah

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Posted: 13 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: ArhiAbhiya
res res res...ill comment once i finish my huge project:D...in an hour or so:D

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your FAV babbler is back ( i think )... what was that?...that was so heart-touching and overwhelming...and you know i almost cried when i was reading the part where arnav was making love to khushi ..."brutally"...u left me speechless:D...wow...wow ...wow...wow...u have proven to me that u can actually write any kind of FFs/SSs/OSs...be it hot, passionate, romance, suspense, mysterious, funny...etc etc etc ...u know what i mean:D... ABSOLUTELY GORGEOUS U ARE AND I LOVED IT!!!!!!!! ( UR WORK)

THANKYOU SO MUCH!!!

I'M SO EXCITED!

I'M SO GLAD YOU LIKED IT!

I'M SO EXCITED!!!!!!!