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Posted: 13 years ago
#61
well arnav you didnt think that it would be this easy to go back you still havent appreciated khushi fully yet or your family for that matter
hard isnt it when you are at the receiving end of hate by the woman you love this is how khushi felt when you keep saying things to hurt her
well this was good about time arnav gets a taste of his own medicine
thanx for pm do continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#62
Beautiful... :)
the thing that definitely struck a chord in my heart was arnavs realisation of how money was the prime importance in THIS new world he was thrown into...
Luvd it.. :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#63
I can't believe I've missed this! its like inception, but its not inception! <3 I love this! :D I love this chapter the most probably Arnav f i n a l l y realised he is a pain in the ass! but a nice pain in the ass! however I love the use of supernatural in this ;) lets see if he goes back to them

And actually really and truly that's all his household want from him, the money, they are only living like that because off him, haven't seen any of them lift a finger unless it was for a pooja thaali or something else related to a temple! I especially have this angst going for Anjali in the serial its like open your god-damn eyes woman! But I like this SS! please do update soon :D

-Aashifa
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Posted: 13 years ago
#64
oh so Arnav finallyyy realised his shortcomings!! 😃

i think he wil wake up d nxt morning in d hotel or in HIS wolrd, HIS house 😕
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Posted: 13 years ago
#65
Wow Khushi Is Like A Mini Verison Of
ASR. Hehe Poor Arnav I Feel Sorry For Him.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#66
Well at least he has learnt to be grateful for all that he has now lost!!!! And. Ow he will truely realise the importance of his Khushi and his family in his life and hopefully appreciate when and if he gets back to his world!!!!

Thanks for wonderful chapter and PM
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Posted: 13 years ago
#67
ZeeJay!!! 🤗 🤗 🤗

wow...this SS is so unique...i've never read anything like it...n trust me, i read a lot of fanfictions on iF😆 gosh, wot have u turned shantivan into?!! not only arnav's, even my head was spinning with questions n doubts 😆 m glad that characters' havent swapped personalities cuz real arnav is spiteful but not as much as this khushi, he just doesnt let out his emotions! so m guessing, as arnav hinted, that the characters have become the opposite thier real self...thats why the hatred from khushi here is real, cuz in the real world her love is real...i hope i'm making sense...

m still confused abt the shyam-khushi relation in this world n wot shyam did to save arnav...though arnav's realisation of shyam's truth made it all worth it! 😃 castiel's reverse psychology doing wonders! 😎

m all intrigued wid ur plot...so many twists, m loving it!!! 😃cant wait for them to unfold...tho m guessing u r gonna tease us a while longer before we get to see the light 😆

and do i even need to say - i LOVED the anjali in the alternate world...esp the way she blasted shyamu 🤣 how i wait for such a scene in IPK!!

sorry for the late comment...u know m just as lazy as u 😆 pls keep pming me...look forward to it..

lotsa love 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
#68
Loved how you showed the contrast bw two worlds and how arnav realises that if this is true here then its false in his real world! Time for few wake up calls buddy! Hang in there , hopefully u wont have to suffer more than u deserve unlike khushi who always got ten times worse.

C ya...update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#69

Change of TITLE! I thought this would be better :)

Chapter 5- She Is Evil

Arnav jerked awake as water splashed on his face, filling his nostrils and ears. 'What the hell!' he spluttered wiping his face as looked up to find Khushi standing with an empty jug and a stupid smile plastered on her face.

'Watch It Khushi!' He warned. 'It really won't do you any good!'

'Not my fault that you were calling out my name like a desperate lover' Khushi sneered in response.

Arnav did a double take at her words and clenched his jaws 'I did not'

'You did' Khushi glared.

Arnav noticed she was ready to go somewhere sporting a pretty white dress.

'Where are you going?' he asked surprised.

'None of your business' she retorted. 'What you should worry about, are those files' she said pointing at a pile of files cluttered on the side table. 'I want them done when I am back'.

Arnav stood infront of her blocking her path. 'Where are you going?' he asked again patiently.

'Arnav cut it out' Khushi sighed.

'Answer me first' he said with an air of arrogance. He knew that was the only way he could deal with her.

'God Arnav! I am going to see NK, now Move' she replied trying to get past him but failing.

'You aren't even ashamed to say that, what are you made of Khushi?' he asked surprised. 'Or maybe I don't wanna know' Arnav gibed stepping aside allowing her to pass.

'What's with you? You are making an issue out of nothing' Khushi sighed staring at him as if he had gone mad. She couldn't leave now, not unless she figured what was wrong with Arnav.

'I am sorry but aren't you the one having an extra-marital affair right now?'

'You always knew that Arnav, what's the problem with it now?' Khushi asked confused.

Arnav gulped realizing that there was way more to the whole deal than he had thought. So he was supposed to know that Khushi was dating NK. She could be easily lying but then why would she?

'Arnav seriously what's with you?' Khushi asked a crossing her arms together as she gazed at him.

'What would happen to me? You are getting late. Better hurry' he said non-chalantly hoping to end the topic here. He didn't want to talk to her now, anyways he couldn't stand this version of Khushi.

'No' Khushi stayed focusing on him now 'Eversince you have returned something is really off with you. I just remember that I yelled at you But that I always do' She shrugged.

'You said it, you always do, nothing wrong, Go now' Arnav replied getting agitated. One thing didn't change, Both the Khushi's were equally adamant! Arnav frowned realizing he just compared his Khushi with the one standing infront of him.

'Damn it! Tell me what's wrong!?' Khushi yelled turning him around as he kept looking anywhere but at her.

'Arnav!?' Khushi asked agitated.

'You don't know' Arnav began overflowing with emotions he had tried to keep at bay. 'You have no idea damn it! How thankful I am to God today, I was stupid, I was crazy. I blamed her for all that you do! Hell She is not even one bit like you. I see it now, when I have met you; Her compassion, her care, her love, her kindness, her purity!'.

'Did you hit your head or something?' Khushi asked confused. She didn't know what she could make out of the passion Arnav seemed to emanate from every inch of him. Those angry tears, that regret written all over his face. Suddenly the man infront of him was Alien. This man was not the Arnav she unleashed her hate on, he was different. He was in control, he was strong..in every sense and he was admirable.

'Who are you?' she asked finding her own question ridiculous. Clichd, as if taken from a movie.

'My world has been turned upside down' Arnav confessed hoping she would understand. 'I don't know what the hell am I doing here, I don't know you, and I don't know what's happening around me!'

They both stayed quiet for a while. Something clicked in Khushi's mind and she smirked looking at Arnav and his wonderful act.

'Oh no it's not that' She simpered with joy as if she had solved a puzzle. 'I get it Arnav being a second heir is a bit of a drawback isn't it? Worried I might divorce you and marry NK? That's why you are so bothered by him all of a sudden. FYI you needn't worry. We had a deal and I am sticking to it. Let me remind you that my marriage with you is revenge on Akash and I am not done seeing his sorry face everyday, he deserves every bit of the hell he is in. He two-timed me with Payal And then how can i ever forget! that good for nothing Akash told Garima and Shashi that I am spoilt, that I should be married to you and sent away! I knew he wanted the money, that he never loved me or Payal. Arnav I ruined Payal..i had her wasted, I snatched this empire from her. I have everything and even you know very well that the moment I end my marriage with you Shashi and Garima will take it all from me. So for god sake be assured I will not leave you. But Don't you ever again dare to interfere between me and NK, as it's none of your business!' She rounded on him and prepared to leave the room her shoulders squared. Arnav glared at her having had enough of her nonsense, he pulled her by the arm and kept her firm in his grip while she struggled to get away.

'Thanks for telling me how much Evil you have inside you, how you have always hated your family, how you have ruined Payal's life, because my Khushi is far different, infact she is everything But you' he said looking down at her in disgust with pride swelling inside him. 'So Thank You. Thank you for telling me everything and Believe it or Not, am not the spineless, gullible joke of a husband you have. I am not the one you used to boss around. And so Khushi Kumari Gupta' he stalled realizing that he had never spitted so much venom in her name before 'don't show me your selfish face again'

He let go of his grip and noticed the red rim marks on her arms, feeling not an ounce of guilt as he walked away in his usual brooding style glad that he had given it all back to her leaving her speechless by his fair warning.

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A/N: Like It? Hit the tab. Love It? Review. Hate It? A MUST Review!! 😆

I learn through every FF, Positive criticism is welcomed :)

A few clarifications - Arnav mentioned God. I have an odd notion that Arnav does believe in God, he is just on a battle, for all that happened in the past. I feel Arnav is blinded by what has been snatched from him, his childhood and parents, because of which he hasn't come to appreciate what he has been given <3 This is exactly what i planned for Arnav in this SS :)

And It was high time Arnav gave it back to Khushi fair and square ;)

OHH Dang! I didn't mention next chapter Title! It's 'Because I Love Her'

Edited by TheWandmaker - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#70
OMG I Did reply to all of you! But i realise i dint post it! Aww it's all gone Now! :( :(

-- Me doing Reviews Again

@chhavi- Thanks dear, Arnav is getting a taste of his own medicine. I had the liberty to indulge in Supernatural theme unlike IPK writers! Haha! :D

@arhifrvr- Wow! You notice stuff! A writer's dream reader 😳 Thank You! means a lot:)

@Aashifa- Thanks, I am glad you found your way here, my circle of readers aint that big, maybe coz i rarely post in IPK forum :) I Love SPN so yeah i keep thinking abt them which is why the idea struck ;P
Anjali annoys me too, I Love writing her in this FF 🤣
Once again thanks for appreciating my work 🤗

@veena- Realization is the first step to Redemption :) There's more :D Stay tuned ! <3

@Artemis- That's Arnav getting a dose of his own medicine, i felt he should know what it feel slike to be bossed around 🤣 Thanks ! :)

@Honkytonk- Arnav is a layered character, parts of him are revealed to us :) More in next chapter :D If Arnav hates with a relish, you can imagine how his Love would be :)
Thank you for your kind and generous words 🤗

@Shilpiii 🤗 Awwh you know i wrote a lamba sa response But it's gone now 😭 I am sure you can relate with my lazyy soul 😒
Okay enough of my soap opera 😆 Coming to your review!

I guess it's my pure luck that you haven't come across such FF's :D
You have got the entire scenario right 👍🏼 And regarding Shyam-Khushi, I didn't elaborate on Shyaam as he is not central to the story. You see Shyaam is a Good Righteous man, such people make others feel apprehensive, it's that psychology with Khushi. Shyam being Arnav's friend sets her right when she goes aboard. It's with Anjali that he turns into a goody good husband and does what she asks. Also in this opposite world, Background Story isn't similar so yeah cook up a story for Anjali-Shyam marriage, i didn't bother to elaborate, lazy me 😳 😆
I knew you and nb would Love Anjali, Me too love her :D 🤣
and it's okie take your time, i am glad you are reading 🤗 Luv ya too <3

@Mayuri- thanks ! :)

@Shweta- Thanks for appreciating my work dear :) Glad you liked it :D Remember Castiel said to Arnav Watch, Observe and Learn ...he is in the third phase now :D

Thanks for your lovely reviews guys!🤗

Posted Chapter 5 abv
Edited by TheWandmaker - 13 years ago

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