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neha512

@neha512

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Posted: 13 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: nafisa_kazi
osheen, nice buildup...do go on...thank u...

dr its neha not osheen she is my friend

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deepali1022

@deepali1022

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Posted: 13 years ago

#52

hey...neha...!!!!

its nyc one i really liked it...!!!!

a little bit diffrnt bt ech n evry charactr is clearly potrait...!!!!

i really liked dev...his feelings towards his brothr is highly respectabl...!!!

maan agreed to dadi ma regarding his marrig dis early...dis shows his respct n gratitude towards his family...!!!

*in short i luv'd whole concept*

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TanuDDian

@TanuDDian

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Posted: 13 years ago

#53

awesome ...

just love it...

continue soon

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Shefali16

@Shefali16

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Posted: 13 years ago

#54

Vry nyc startng...
u write wel..
keep writing

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neha512

@neha512

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Posted: 13 years ago

#55

PART 3

at night
handa mansion
meera's room

geet: am not gonna leave that man who is gonna marry me said in gritted teeth
meera:geet just calm down yaar
geet:how can i be cool you know my hatred toward those selfish lusty men and its reason too(wth absolute anger and a little pain)
meera:geet its 8 yrs just forget that night till when are you gonna bind urself with past see i went forward with yash na then why are you not trying
geet:meera its not so easy to forget i tried but its not possible that incident made a bubbly and caring geet a rockhearted girl...its just impossible
meera:may be after marriage your view changes
geet:i dont think this marriage is ever gona happen i will keep extending time and one day that guy will marry some1 else
meera:and what will u say to dadu its his wish
geet:i said i wont refuse but that guy can refuse na so i m not breaking my promise and smirks
meera:u are realy a devil,always finds a loophole said smilingly
geet:chal now go to sleep horror night byee
par kya jane ye ki iski khwaish kabhi puri ho nhi skti thi kyu ki unse kuch aur hi manzoor tha

in dadu's room

mom:dad why did you say that some rishta had come for her
dadu:beta i knew she will not agree for this marriage in this lifetime and she is just going out of our hands...i wanted her to be a women like you who cares for every1,a sweet ad mature person...but in her stubbornness she is hiding d real geet and for bringing that real proncess said a lie bcoz i know after this stroke thing this wont be able to refuse me
mom:but i know her she will find a way to go out of this mess
dadu:bete she is my poti afterall my blood runs in her veins i know her too well thats why i m not gonna give her much time i hav a plan and boy i had selected savitri's grand son u knw him right she liked geet too and its her who gave me this marriage proposal few days back
mom:dad i hope d boy iscapable enough to handle our toofan said smilingly
dadu;well he is i had personaly seen him ,,,he is the perfact man we could ever ask for her,,,now let me ask savitri about our next step she's is quite eager for this marriage
and both smiles
dadu calls dadi and decides their next step

in khurana mansion
maan's room
maan st:i never thaught that i had to marry some1 else but i cant even refuse dadi too,,,i had to now forget geet but kya use bhulaya ja sakta h shayad nhi wo mera wo hissa h jo mai kabhi alag khud se nhi kar skta,,,but i know for the sake of the girl i had too move on if i cant love her atleast i can be true in our relation...yes i will marry her give her all rights as my wife shayad 1 din apne dil me bhi koi jagah de pau
wo meri shahat thi shaq na tha
dono ki ruh me koi fark na tha
mehsus kia to ye pata chala
sach me
uspar mera koi haq na tha
he was going to bed when he heard a knock
dadi: maan i forgot to give yu the snap of girl atlest see her till me arrage your meeting
maan:dadi you liked her whats the need
dadi:maan are you happy with my decision
maan: yes dadi accha i will see it
dadi went away with a smirk: maan i know you will never see her snap thats gud too afterall jo jhatka you will get on ur SR you will never forget how can you think that i wont know about ur ladylove son i am ur dadi and the only person who knows u in and out

next day
a bomb was blasted on both children

at dinner table
dadi:maan me and ur mom had went to pandit asking about auspicious date of ur engagement and shaadi but he said either marriage could be in next 2 days or after 8 years and since my heealth is not good these days we decided to keep marriage in next 2 days without any engagement just little marriage rituals are you fine with that
maan:hmm giving a weak smile and left the room

in handa mansion

dadu :geet come take a seat near me
geet you trust ur dadu enough that he will not choose a wrong person for you
geet yes dadu but y r u asking now we just talked about it yesterday
dadu:actualy u know na how much i believe in kundalis and according to that ur marriage could be after 2 days or after 8 years and u know my health so we decided marriage in next 2 days i hope its fine with u said dadu smiling inwardly
geet:ok dadu as u say
geet agreed internaly fuming in anger st:gosh my plan failed but dot worry i will think of something else shadi to hojaegi but his life willl be hell and smirked

precap:haldi and mehandi
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