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Posted: 13 years ago
#21
okay when i saw thread 3 so i thot aise hi banaya and khola toh khula nhi and maine chod diya...

fir shaam ko dekha toh fir se khola and what i see ur speech...

i thot u saying ki u r not continuing...

fir neeche scroll and i find out an update...

so yippeee... at least pm toh kar deti yaarl...

so loved the update esp. how sharon guessed rey was awake...

their worry for each other in beginning was so good...

loved it...

waiting for next part
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Posted: 13 years ago
#22
Hey Deetha firstly congrats for ur family function...next congo for th third thread 👏 way to go - extremely glad to read ur baatcutter update after such a long time ... u know jab bhi word baatcutter dekho toh auto mind tumhare is ff pe jaata tha... so welcum bac with a bang 😊 luvd th KR MOMENTS of married bliss & happily luking forward to what th precap suggests ... ek chotasa wish tho - hope u don't avoid Swaron completely when u write that particular section 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
#23
yayyy back with a bang!!!!!😊😊
congrats for d 3rd thread dear⭐️👏
and d update was mindblowing jus luvd it😳😳
will b waiting for d next part😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#24


Wildcat congos shongos for the new thread 🥳
yay i m among the trio ye to double party time hai love u wildcat 🤗
nd update ke baare mai kya bolu wildcat ek to ur awesome writer vo sab ko pata hai the way u always keep the cute Kriyaansh moments i personally love it n Rey ka uthna god mujhe fir se vo yaad agaya but his love is with him na ab detail mai kya jau 😳 each and every line awesome superb...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#25
Yipeee...
Deetha ur back...
Luv u...Missed u...
M happy ur back...
Luvd d updt...
Lud d way dey feared of loosing each other...
Der romance ws so cute...
,waitin fr d nxt updt...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#26

EEEp... Deetha's back... 3rd thread... Congrats... u totally deserve it...

loved the update...

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Posted: 13 years ago
#27
finally u r back deetha and wat an update wow chummeshwari cant wait for d next update
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Posted: 13 years ago
#28
deeta congras for new tread
but angry u hve not pm me y
i thought u r busy
but anyways congras for new tread and yet i have not read ur update as soon as i finish i will comment on ur update
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: deetha


in the morning...

"kriya!!!!!! Kaha ho???? Kriya plzz'.waapis aajao ''I cant live with out u'''.kriya!!!!!!!!kriya!!!!!!!!"he moved uneasily and opened eyes suddenly to

Find his love in his own arms'.. he smiled at how he still feared of loosing her and found that she was going through the same ''''.. he pulled her closer and hugged her tight '.. she caught him tight still asleep'''. he smiled at her innocence and pulled back to see her face''' she slept peacefully in his arms''.. he kept on looking at her and thought abt how they suffered after getting separated 4r the second tym'''.he kept on looking at her face ''..her innocent face was driving him crazy''''..he tried 4r a lot but failed so he gently took her lips into his ''this was enough to wake her up'..she pushed him back

K: rey ye aap kya '''

she stopped in b/w noticing his intense gaze on her '''.. he slowly moved towards her and kissed her passionately''.she too gave up as she was sure he wont leave her'''..wat???really is it the reason ?? the answer was a big no''she loved the way he loved her and made her day more spl''''

they were kissing passionately when she heard a knock on the door'''..

sh: shona!!!!!!! Uthi ho kya??

Kriya pushed rey back ''..

K: sweetu who''''

Rey again pulled into a kiss''.she again pushed him'''

K: abhi uthi hun fresh hoke aati hun'''..

She said with much difficulty as rey was kissing all over her face'''''

Sh: rey!!!!!!!!!!

Kriyaansh were strtld'''..but kriya tried'''.

K: sweetu who so rahe hai''''

Sh: rey mujhe pata hai that ur awake '''''just leave shona '..kal poori raat ki tym kaafi nahi hai kya'''.chodo use''.ri8 nw!!!!!!!!!!

He growled under his breath n shouted''''.

R: shut up and get out''''.!!!!!!!!!

Sh: giggled''''.haa jaa rahi hun par shona remember u hv sm wrk ri8??? And she left''..

This was enough to bring back the hyper kriya she just jumped into the washroom

Rey cursed Sharon 4r being such a destroyer of his perfect morning''''

He hurriedly paced over the room setting smthing and finally went into the balcony'..and stared at the bright sun whom he saw with a smirk as if telling his love has more shine than his''''.

Kriya put on her batrobe and came out peeping into the room'''.she thanked universe ji ''..

K: thnk u universe rey yaha nahi hai'''..

She quickly checked if the door was closed and went to wardrobe to select the dress when he hugged her 4rm back which made her slightly jump in her place'''''

R: tum kaha mai wahan''''

He said in afilmy tone'''..

R: baatcutter ''''

K: hmm'.

R: aaj tum mere pasand ki dress pehno na'''..

K: sure'''.she opened the wardrobe of sarees '''he closed it and lifted her frm back catching his fists tight into hers '''..he took her to the bed''''

R: teri dress waha nahi yaha hai'''.humasha tum mereliye dress nikalti ho so aaj mera turn''''

She looked at the dress'''.it was the same dress she wore when she entered st.louis 4r the 1st tym''''..

K: rey''.mai ye pehnon???

R: haan baatcutter'''..

K: rey aa bhi na bohut acha mazak karlete ho'''.

She said moving towards the wardrobe'''.

R: ( he flung on bed''') theek hai mat pehno'''par im telling dnt try to talk with me this whole day'''..

K: rey'''..(she said looking at him when he interrupted'''')

R: and I mean it '''he took the dress and layed down hugging it'''.

She went furiously and pulled the dressed and banged the washroom door behind her'''.he smiled at her''''.

And in few mins she is out and was abt to go to mirror when he blocked her way'''.

R: gussa ho???

She tried to go from another direction''''

R: mai toh tumhe bas pehle jaise dekhna chahta tha'''''(he said cutely which made her melt''.)

She smiled and soon found him kissing her'''again a knock/'''''

R: koun???( fully irritated'')

Sh: mai '..phir se!!!! she giggled''''

R: kya hai.???

Sh : bas kriya ko bulane aayi'''..

R: who naha rahi hai aate hi bahar push kardoonga k???

Sh: push mat karna bhejna who khaafi hai'''..

R: haa''..he growled'''

Sh: acha bas use ye bata ki meri kaam khatam ho gayi bas uski rehgayi and uski kaam mai mai abo i help nahi karne wali ''.even if her surprise is at risk'''.

R: surprise??? He looked at kriya confused ti find her already in thought of remembering''..

Sh: haan surprise''..im gng now bye'.

Rey looked at her who was still thinking'''

R: surprise?? Kaisi surprise?? Mereliya?? Kahi humari 2nd 1st ni8 ki planning toh nahi kar rahi ho ???

He asked grinning wide and in response got a hard hit on his head'''

R: ouch!!!! It hurts''..agar ye nahi toh aur kya''.?????

It then clicked to her'''.

K: hey universe ji mai aise kaise kar sakti hun'''kaise bhool sakti '''jhalli ho kriya tum bilkul''ab kya karogi'''.hey unverse ji mai kitni jhalli bangayi''''

All the while rey ran back of her trying to cmfrt and ask her'''..

R: arey''.suno toh sahi '''kriya kriya''''.BAATCUTTER!!!!!!!

He pulled her straight into him making her look at him'''

R: kya hua???

K: who''''mai aapkeliye aapki pasand ki kheer bana na chahti thi naashte mai''par mai toh bhool hi gayi ab kab banaungi aur kab cool karoongi'''..

R: kheer??? Tumhe kaise pata ki mujhe kheer pasand maine toh kabhi nahi bataya''

K: who maa ne bata ''''she answered blushing''''

R: acha toh pasand aur na pasand ki enquiries chal rahi hai''''par Sharon ko kaise pata ki aaj tum kheer banana chahti ho'''.

K: wo'''.kal jab aap so gaye the tab maine Sharon se chat kiya ki wo kaisi hai and all''tabhi humne decide ki mai aapkeliye kheer banaungi and Sharon swayam ki fav black coffee''.and sandwich''.par mai toh lae ho gayi''''.

R: arey itna sab jaanti ho par ye nahi jaanti ki mujhe garmagaram kheer pasand hai''''

He said pulling her more closer''''..

K: kya????...par phir bhi'''ab tym nahi hai na'''''

R: kyun nahi hai??? Acha ek kaam karo mai fresh hoke aata hun tab tak banalena''''

K: wow!!!!!!!! Thanku''..she gave a peck on his cheek and rushed down before he could think'''.

R: arey'''.baat cutter'''''.hmm'''bhaad mei gayi teri mrng romance ki plan and efforts''''chal jaldi tayyar hoja''baatcutter ki haat ki kheer''''who bhi pehli baar''''hmm. Taste toh jaroor karna padega''''chal rey rush now''''

He went to freshen up''''.


ur update as always awesome i loved it specially sharon scene theway sh was disturbing and spoiling rey beautiful morning with her baarcutter

ab sharon saali hai toh disturb toh karegi


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Posted: 13 years ago
#30
it was an awesum update... as always... loved the way Sharon disturbed KriYaansh Romance n Rey getting annoyed... KriSha's surprise... was luvly...aw!!!

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