kriyaansh- till death do us apart - Page 7

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Posted: 13 years ago
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heyyy awsummm update,,,,,,,,,,,thnkx 4d pm n waiting 4d date update soon😃😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow . . . Wat a cute story 😃

rey ne aakhir kriya ko vapis jaane se rok hi lia . . . . 🥳

hats off to gang & rdx 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow amazing and i m dying to read the next one thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
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chapter 6

Kriyas house

Kriya- oh god, maa toh chali gayi, ab yeh sochna padega ki aaj sham ko kya pehen ke jaaon? Patah nahin rey kya pehen raha hoga.

Suddenly her phone rings, its none other than rey

Kriya- hello, rey aap.

Rey- kriya, ready nahin hui abhi tak?

Kriya- nahin, who abhi abhi maan ko station chod ke wapas aayi hoon aur aapne toh bola tha ki date 7 o clock hai aur abhi toh 5 o clock hi hue hain. Ek minute rey, aapko kaise patah ki mein abhi teyaar nahin hui hoon?

Rey- who isliye, kyunki abhi mein tumhare khidki ke bahar khada hoon.

Kriya- kya?

Goes to the window

Kriya-rey aap yahan kya kar rahe hain, kisi ne dekh liya toh?

Rey- chill baatcutter, koi nahin dekhega. Mein toh tumhein bohot miss kar raha tha isliye aa gaya.

Kriya(blushing)-rey, abhi aap jao mujhe ready hona hai.

Rey-mere liye

Kriya (full on blushing now)-plz rey aap jao.

Rey- achcha theek hai, main jaa raha hoon par tumhare liye kuch laya hoon, who toh le lo

Kriya- mer liye? Kya hai ismein rey?

Rey- khol ke dekhlo

Kriya opens the package and finds a dress.

Kriya- bohot pretty hai rey

Rey-tumse zyaada nahin (lost in his dreamworld). Tum aajshaam ko yeh dress pehen na, thik hai baatcutter.

Kriya-okay rey, par ab aap jao aur mujhe ready hone do.

Kriyas dress

http://www.mycocktaildresses.com/cocktail-dresses/

Kriyas house 7 pm the bell has just rung, no points for guessing who it is.

Kriya(opening the door for him)-rey aap aa gaye.

Rey(lost in dreamland on seeing kriya)- beautiful

Kriya-kuch kaha aapne

Rey(full on masti mood)-haan mein bol raha tha ki theek lag rahi ho

Kriya-aap ko aur kuch nahin kehna

Rey- nahin, kyun tum kuch aur sunna chahti thi?

Kriya(disappointed)-nahin aisi baat nahin hai. Mein toh bas aise hi

Kriya(to herself)-itni der se teyaar ho rahi hoon aur bas yahi bola ki theek lag rahi hoon.)

Rey(smiling)-kuch kaha tumne?

Kriya-meine? nahin toh.

Rey(seeing kriys disappointed face)- main toh mazak kar raha tha. Aaj tum itni beautiful lag rahi ho ki chahe jitney compliments de doon kam hain. Bas ek cheech ki kami hai ?

Kriya-kya?

Rey-aankhien band karo.

Kriya- kyun?

Rey-tumhare liye ek surprise hai. Ab apni aankhien band karo

Kriya close her eyes and rey goes and makes her wear a necklace with a dancing girl

Rey-ab apni aankhien kholo.

the necklace

http://www.kaboodle.com/reviews/sterling-silver-cubic-zirconia-dancing-girl-pendant-w-chain-necklace

Kriya(with tears in her eyes)- oh my god rey. This is just so perfect. I don't have words to describe what im feeling.

Rey-jab meine yeh dekha, toh mujhe sabse pehle tumhari yaad aayi thi aur meine socha tha ki mein yeh tumhein valantines day ke din doonga par tab toh... anywaystum jaanti ho ismein special kya hai? Yeh bhitumhaare jaise hi bohot beautiful hai aur ek mindblowing dancer bhi, sab ke jais but still sab se different.

kriya-oh my god rey, mein kabhi soch bhi nahin sakti thi ki koi kabhi mere liye yeh karega. maine apni life mein kabhi itna special nahin feel kiya. thank you rey.

rey-baatcuter, tum bohot special ho, kabhi yeh baat bhulna mat.

Kriya(full on blushing)-jaanti hoon, tabhi to mere life mein aap ho!!!!!!!

precap- the date begins!

Edited by medhasainanee - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#65
...aww kria rey k liye full on ready ho rai hai...and naughty rey ...kria ko compliment karne mei bhav kha raha hai...all in all a sweet and cute update...eagerly waiting for date to begin...and our kriyansh romance...awesome work dear...update nxt part soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#66
i wish i too had such a beautific pendant...and da dress selection is also nice...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#67
Amazing update
the dress is so beautiful and pendant is awesomee
thanx 4 d pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#68
aww so cute again rey did an entry from the window 2 gve her a gift as expected loll
love da kneclce and dress cn imagine kriya init too weel cnt wait for next update so update fast and thnx for pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#69
tabhi toh aap meri zinadgi mein ho..
oh man.. cant tell u how much i LOVEED that line!! =D
it was an awesome part!
great job!
do try to continue as soon as you can!
<3
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: aishasully

aww so cute again rey did an entry from the window 2 gve her a gift as expected loll

love da kneclce and dress cn imagine kriya init too weel cnt wait for next update so update fast and thnx for pm

thnx i really looked hard for that dress.

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