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Posted: 13 years ago
#81
Aww it was chhooo cute
awesum update😊
luvd dat pendant wish i had one it was ddammn beautiful
ty fr da pm :-)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#82
aweee that was soo cute part...loved it very much
it was superb...kriyansh are soo cute and bueautiful pandent
loved it very much
waiting eagerly for next part
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#83
Wowww Luvd it:):)
Rey presenting her a dress and necklace!!!
Sooo cute:):)
can't wait for d next part
update soon:):)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#84
Wow that was a amazing update.
Thanks for the pm.
The gift by Rey was cute and the shock of coming home at 5 to give her a dress was cute.

Update next part soon.



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Posted: 13 years ago
#85
lovely update ❤️
the dress and pendant r so beautiful
plz pm me
Edited by anjalijayan - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#86
woww its amazing suprlyk kriyansh date was mindblowing,,,,,,n d dress n pendent r bful,,,😃😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#87
nice update ... update next part soon :P
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Posted: 13 years ago
#88

guys this chapter is my favourite cuz i always imagined kriya and reys first date 2 be like this. so plz do like and comment


chapter 7

As kriya looked out of the window, she saw the city of Mumbai slowly disappearing, they had been driving for nearly an hour now but rey had said that it was important to cover the distance. She didn't mind though, with the cool breeze hitting her face and rey by her side she felt complete, like she could live her entire life like this, just the two of them together.suddenly the car came to a stop.

Rey(opening the door for her)-so are you ready?

She nodded eagerly, she couldn't see anything but she could here the waves hitting the shore and could smell the salt in the air which indicated that they were near the sea. she could even here the faint sound of a violin playing one of her favourite melodies nearby She accepted the hand rey offered her and started walking in the direction of the sound. They had barely been walking for 2 minutes when they reached a deserted beach decorated beautifully with millions of strings of fairy lights and white roses. It was so breathtakingly beautiful, so flawless that she forgot to even breathe.

Kriya-its beautiful rey. Yeh sab aap ne mere liye kiya?

Rey-im glad ki tumhein pasand aaya, par yeh toh kuch bhi nahin hai. Jitni beautiful tum ho uske samne toh yeh sab kuch bhi nahin hai. Ab andar chalein.

She held reys hand and slowly moved toward the entrance taking in the beuty and capturing it forever in her heart. As they approached the sound of the voilens steadily grew. As they entered the entrance hundreds of white petals fell over them as if from heaven. That's when she noticed that the entire path was covered with beautiful white petals leading to a table covered with a dozen of scented candles and five people playing the voilen. She walked slowly rey always by her side as if even a single wrong step would end this beautiful dream.as they reached the table rey pulled a chair for her to sit in.

Rey-toh kaisa laga mera surprise?

Kriya-bohot achcha hai rey. Mere pas words nahin hai describe karne ke liye ki mein abhi kaisa feel kar rahi hoon.

Rey-tumhein pata hai, yeh beach meri family own karti hai. Jab mein chota hua karta tha tab mein aur meri mom yahan bohot aaya karte the aur jab mein bohot khush yaan dukhi hota hoon toh mein yahin aata hoon, aur aaj toh mein sabse zyaada khush hoon aur is khushi ki wajah tum ho kriya, isliye mein yeh jagah tumse share karna chahta hoon.

Kriya-rey thankyou, mujhe nahi lagta ki jitni khushi aap ne mujhe is din mein di hai utni khushi kisi ne mujhe apni zindagi mein di hogi, but kya mein yeh sab deserve karti hoon? Meine aap se jhoth bola, aapko trust nahin kiya par fir bhi aap mere liye yeh sab kar rahe hain

Rey-kriya purani baatien bhul jao aur waise bhi mein toh yeh sab kab ka bhul chukka hoon. Waise bhi mujhe pata hai ki jitna dard mujhe hua hoga utna hi tumhein bhi hua hoga. Isliye aaj se hum beeti hui baton ko bhool kar ek nayi start kareinge. Aur ek nayi start karne ka ek sath dance karne se achcha tareeka kya ho sakta hai? Toh miss kriya ghai may I have the pleasure of dancing with you?

Kriya(blushing)-yes you may

As they danced to the music created by the voilens their bodies always touching as if this dream would end if they let eachother go even for a second. Under the moonlight twirling to the music with rey by her side kriya felt as if she had to be the most special girl ever, as if this moment was the perfect and she never wanted it to end.

Rey-kriya

Kriya-hmm

Rey-keep looking up okay. 5,4 ,3 2,1 ………

And with that thousands of firecrackers shot up illuminating the night sky, and suddenly they arranged into a message which said

I LOVE U KRIYA, WIL U BE MINE FOREVER?

Kriya had tears in her eyes and felt as if she had lost her capability to speak. Rey looked at her expectantly and smiled. She couldn't –stop herself from falling into his arms suprising herself as much as him.

Kriya(whispering)- yes forever.

And at that precise moment kriya realised that no matter what happened she would never ever let go of rey, whatever may come their way they would face it together cause at that minute she realized that this was where she belonged……….. with her rey!

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Posted: 13 years ago
#89
awww it was soo beautiful..<3<3 *wish mere liya bhi koi aise kare😆* the upadate was wonderful... luved d way u described evry thing..<3😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: awesomeabshu

awww it was soo beautiful..<3<3 *wish mere liya bhi koi aise kare😆* the upadate was wonderful... luved d way u described evry thing..<3😳

thnx

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