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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome plzan of rey i loved it and second they became officially loved it
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hi guys im back with the next chapter of my ff. sorry fr the late update but my house was under renovation and i had a test comin up.
chapter 5

Reys plan stage 1

Neha- vishaka think something. How sending rdx sir home fast?

Vishaka- ya dude im also thinking the same thing. Hey idea. Chal follow me.

Rdx cabin-

Neha- may we coming in sir.

Rdx- haan haan come in. vishaka neha. You guys here kuch kaam tha?

Vishaka- sir aap abhi tak yahan pe kya kar rahe hain? Aap ko pata nahin ki aaj bad weather forecast ke wajah se college jaldi band ho raha hai? Hum sabh bhi abhi ghar jaa rahe hain.

Rdx- achcha mujhe toh iske bare mein kuch nahin patah aur bahar toh weather ekdum clear ha. Anyways mein principle sir se puchta hoon.

Vishaka- are sir aap principle sir ko kyun disturb kar rahe hain? Hum bata rahe hain na aapko, hum jhooth to nahin bolenge. Aur waise bhi weather ka kya hai, abhi sunny hai par baad mein definitely storm aayega.

Rdx- ok guys thankyou mein jaldi se apna pending kaam khatam karke jata hoon

Vishaka-ok sir

Outside

Neha- what mind you having vishaka, now kriya not having to go icalling up simmi and telling her

Neha calls simmi

Simmie- helo neha what happened

Neha- rdx sir leaving very soon. U tellin rey and kriya when he leaving cabin.

Simmie-cool. Well done guys mein abhi rinnie ko bata deti hoon.

Reys plan stage 2

Simmie , rinnie, bharat, amar, nilesh, Vicky, rey and kriya on conference call

Simmie- rey rdx sir apne cabin se nikal chuke hain. Jo bhi karna hai jaldi karo

Bharat- aur principle sir bhi kisi kaam mein busy hain, I don't think who aayenge

Rey- that's great guys. So time for stage three. Vicky and nilesh jaldi se rdx sir ke cabin mein aao, mein swayam aur Sharon ko bhi call karke bold deta hoon ki who rdx sir ke cabin mein aa jayein.

Reys plan stage 3

Rdxs cabin

Rey- guys are you ready.

Everybody yeah.

Rey- kriya apni mom ka phone no dial karo

Kriya dials and the phone starts ringing

Neha-all the best babu.

Smriti picks up the phone

Smriti hello

Vicky- haan hello ji kya mein ms.smriti ghai se baat kar raha hoon.

Smriti- ji haan boliye, aap kaun bol rahe hain.

Vicky- mein rdx… I mean mr ravi dixit bol raha hoon. Mein st louie college ka cultural head hoon. Who actually kriya hamaare college mein padti hai and aaj mujhe pata chala ki who yeh college chod rahi hai. Toh mein bas aapko bataana chahta tha ki who college nahin chod sakti.

Smriti-par kyun nahin chod sakti who college?

Vicky- nahin chod sakti bas

Smriti- are koi reason toh hoga? Dekhiye yeh decision mein ne bohot soch samajh ke liya hai aur mein ise change nahin karoongi

Vicky- reason…reason hai na mere paas…. Ek minute aap zara rukiye.

Vicky- reason kya doon swayam?

Swayam- bol who ags hai aur agar usne mid semester choda toh uske extra curricular scores gir jaayenge aur uske wajah se uski percentage drop ho jayegi aur use kisi college mein admission nahin milegi

Vicky- haan toh jee mein kahan tha, … haan reason. Woh kya hai ki kriya ji ags hain hamaare college ki aur agar college ki ags mid semester chod ke gayi toh uske extra curricular marks pe bohot severe affect hoga aur uski percentage gir jaayegi. Uska future danger mein ho sakta hai. Zara sochiye jab salon baad koi aapki beti se pooche ga ki usne kaunse college se padai ki toh who kya bolegi ki who ek college drop out hai. Who apni poori life aapko blame kareigi ki aap ne uski life barbad kardi

Rey- bas Vicky, bohot filmy ho raha hai

Smriti- theek hai mein kriya ko yeh semester khatam karne deti hoon…but iske baad who yeh college chod degi

Vicky- okay so then aap kriya se baat kar lijiyega.

Smriti- ok

Vicky hangs up the phone

Everybody- kya hua

Vicky- guys we did it! Who maan gyi. Unhone kaha ki kriya is college mein reh sakti hai.

Kriya- yeah mom maan gayi.

In her excitement she hugs rey, rey is urprised but super happy and hugs her back.

Everyone-awww!

Kriya realises what she was doing and immediately pulls back blushing

Vishaka- oh my god dude, kriya are you blushing

This makes kriya blush even mor and she looks at rey and passes him a smile.

Suddenly rdx enters the cabin

Rdx(super angry)- guys what are you doing in my cabin?

Nilesh- ab toh mar gaye.

Rey- sir aap yahan?

Rdx-haan who actually mein apne ghar ki chabi yahin bhul gaya toh wapas lene aaya tha, but tum log yahan kya kar rahe ho.

Sw- sir who actually hum bhool gaye the ki aap aaj ghar jaldi jaa rahe hain toh aap se permission leni thi ek charity fest organize karne ki.

Rdx- not bad guys, you guys meet me in my office tomorrow aur hum discuss kar lenge.

Everyone-yes sir absolutely.

Rdx leaves.

Neha-bach gaye, kya idea tha swayam

Sw-thanks guys but the good thing is ki ab kriya humaare sath hai aur ko usko dehradun nahin jana padega.

Suddenly kriya phone starts ringing.

Kriya- maa ka phone hai.

Picks up the call

Kriya-hello maa. Kya hua.

Smriti-beta tumhare college se phone aaya tha ki yeh semester tumhein yanhi khatam karna padega, par mein ne already transfer ki application de di hai toh mujhe aaj sham ko hi dehradun ke liye nikalna padega.

Kriya- okay mom mein abhi ghar aati hoon.

Kriya-guys mom ka phone that oh unhein dehradun jana padega toh mein ghar ja rahi hoon, mom ko station bhi see-off karne jaana hai.

Rey-guys even ill leave see you tomorrow in college.

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Rey-kriya! Ek minute ruko.

Kriya- haan rey bolo

Rey-ab jab humaare beech mein sab sort out ho gaya hai toh kya tum mere saath date pe chalogi? Waise bhi ab toh hum officially couple hain.

Kriya(blushing)—theek hai

Rey-so ill pick u up at 7, okay.

Kriya- okay.

Kriya leaves for her house while rey has a big smile on his face.

Rey(to himself)-toh miss baatcutter, get ready, apne life ki best date ke liye


precap

rey-apni aankhien band karo baatcutter.

kriya- par kya hua

rey-tumhare liye ek surprise hai. ab apni aankhien band karo.

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kriya-oh my god rey, mein kabhi soch bhi nahin sakti thi ki koi kabhi mere liye yeh karega. maine apni life mein kabhi itna special nahin feel kiya. thank you rey.

rey-baatcuter, tum bohot special ho, kabhi yeh baat bhulna mat.

kriya-jaanti hoon, tabhi to mere life mein aap ho.

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Posted: 13 years ago
#43

Awesome update..


Eagerly waiting for d date..

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Posted: 13 years ago
#44

awww soo cute mann tootaly to nycc man kya baat kya baat kya baat

dying to read on the date lets seee wat u got planned for thnx for pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesum update 😊
eagerly waitin fr da date...
ty fr da pm :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#46
awesome part😊
waiting for d next part😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesum update!!!! :) !!! Thanxx fr d PM!!! PM mee nxt tym too!!! 👍🏼 👏 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome update...loved it very much
waitingh eagerly for the date
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow!!! Rey's plan was super duper hit... but RDX sir cums in all of a sudden... thankfully Swayam had a excuse... Kria's mom leaving for dehradun... n Kria all alone at her place... Kriyaansh 1st date... waiting for it...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome finally smiriti agreed
kriyaansh date super exicted
waiting eagerly

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