kriyaansh- till death do us apart

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guys my first ff ever!

kriyaansh - till death do us apart

ok my ff starts with the scene where kriya has just left rey and he and swayam are sitting in front of reys car
rey- i cant believe ki kriya ne mere saath aisa kiya. i never expected her to do this.

sw- dekh rey kriya aisi nahin hai. there has to be a big reason behind this. kriya tere ko genuinely like karti thi aur hai. trust me.

rey- mujhe bhi aisa hi lagta tha bt usne mujhe bola ki usne sirf mujhe use karne ke liye yeh sab kiya . yeh sab sirf ek one sided relationship thi swayam aur ab woh bhi khatm ho gayi

sw- i still dont believe this ray. kriya aisi nahin hai and woh jo bhi kar rahi hai im sure there is a very big reason fr this.

rey- believe toh mujhe bhi nahin ho raha swayam ki meri baatcutter...i mean kriya mere saath aisa karegi

sw- rey chal yahan se

rey- kahan

sw- na tujhe believe ho raha hai na mujhe ki kriya aisa kar sakti hai toh we have to find out the truth. tujhe pata hai kriya apni sari baatein ek diary mein likhti hai. ab tak woh so gayi ho gi aur hum woh diary par kar sab sach jan lenge.

rey- swayam dekh tere aur mere believe yaan na believe karne se kuch nahin hota, the truth wont change so mein wahan ja kar dobara hurt nahin hona chahta and anyways kisi aur ki diary padna is wrong

sw- i kno rey that it is wrong but desperate times call fr desperate measures and kya tu apne pyaar ko ek aur chance nahin dega. im sure woh yeh sab ek reason ke liye kar rahihai aur agar aaj tu ne yeh nahin kiya toh zindagi bhar apne aap ko forgive nahin kar payega.

rey-okay swayam bt tu dekh lena ki truth wahi hai jo mein keh raha hoon

rey and swayam both reach kriyas house and climb up to the window by the pipe but they see that kriya is not yet asleep bt is crying so they decide 2 wait outside and hide

sw- see if kriya had used u wud she b crying

rey- i dnt kno swayam i dont want to believe anything without a confirmation. i dont want to go through the torture again.

kriyas bedroom

kriya(nt realising tht rey and swayam were listening} universeji aapne mere saath aisa kyun kiya aaj meine rey ko bohot hurt kiya, par mein kya karuun meri majboori thi maan ki shart ke wajah se ab mujhe rey aur dance woh do cheez jin se mein sabse zyaada pyaar karti hoon chor ke kal dehradun jana parega aur agar mein is tarah rey ko hurt nahin karti toh woh kabhi move on nahin kar pate. universeji plz rey ki zindagi mein dobara pyaar lana aur itna pyaar lana ki woh mujhe kabhi yad na karein.
sw- dekha meine tujhe kaha tha na ki kriya aisi nahin hai
rey- haan dude main kabhi apni baatcutter ko samajh hi nahin paye. mujhe lagta raha ki usne mujhe use kiya hai aur mein use hate karne ki koshish karta raha aur yeh bhi nahin socha ki what she must be going through but ab aur nahin baatcutter. here i come and i promise ki kal tumhara last day of college nahin hoga.

guys plz comment and like and add me on ur buddy list fr pms fr the next part

chapter 2...pg 1
chapter 3...pg 3
chapter 4...pg 5
chapter 5...pg 8
chapter 6...pg 11
chapter 7...pg 15
chapter 8...pg 19
chapter 9...pg 24
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Posted: 13 years ago
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yippee first one to comment loved d way swayum was taking kriya's side and kriya's dialouges were so emotional...d whole part was so beautifully written
Edited by suchitrabehera - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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This is awesum!!!! Hun!!!!! WOW!! Thanxxx fr d pm.. n PM mee nxt ttym too!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome update pm me whenever u update nxt post
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chapter 2

Swayam and rey are now in Reys bed room

Rey- im sorry baatcutter ki mein tumhein samajh nahin paya, tumhein hate karne ki koshish karta raha par kya karun, jab tum ne mujhe kaha ki tum sirf mujhe use kar rahi thi to I cudnt take it. Im so happy ki mujhe sab kuch sach pata chal gaya hai aura b koi misunderstanding nahin hai. ab tum jitna chahe koshish kar lo mein tumhein apne se dur nahin jaane dunga. We are meant to be together aur chahe kuch bhi ho this truth will not change. But I still wish kit um ek baar aake mujhe apni situation ke bare mein batati aur hum ise mil kar solve kar paate.

Sw- mr. romeo yeh sab tabhi hoga jab tu apne dreamworld se bahr niklega aur kuch sochega. Humein kuch aisa karna padega ki tu aur kriya kale sath ho aur kriya tujhe sab kuch khud confess kar de.

Rey- haan we have to do something jaise mein kriya se akele mein mil sakoon, kahin aisi jagah jahan humein koi disturb na kare

Sw- par kahan

Rey- firexit

Sw- kya

Rey- fire exit who jagah jahan kriya aur meine apne best moments share kare hain, hum dost wahan se bane aur humari relationship bhi wahin shuru hui thi.(going into dreamland remembering those moments)

Sw –okay toh hamein kuch aisa karna hoga ki kriya kal firexit mein aaye aur use tu wahan mile. Right?

Rey- wrong humein nahin tujhe. Mein kal jaake fireexit mein chupne wala hoon jaise sab ko lage ki mein aaj college aaya nahin hoon warna kriya kabhi fireexit nahin aayegi

Sw- theek hai mein kuch sochta hoon. Bohot raat ho gayi hai toh mein abhi ghar jar aha hoon. Ill meet you tomorrow

Next day at st louie

Kriya- universeji, plz aaj mujhe strong banana ki mein rey ko face kar sakoon. Mein jaanti hoon ki who mujhe hate karenge but unke sath bitaya har moment mein apne heart mein treasure kar ke rakhna chahti hoon aur aaj shayad mein unko life mein aakhri baar dekhoongi (tears come to her eyes as she says this but she quickly wipes them and tries to plaster a smile on her face)

Kriya enters the rehearsel hall and finds the rest of the gang except ray there

Kriya- hi guys

Vishaka-dude kal rat ko u went home in such a hurry. Everything is okay na?

Neha- ya kriya neha also worrying

Kriya- nahin kuch nahin guys( starts scanning the room for rey)

Sw(with a smile)- kissi ko dhoond rahi ho kriya?

Kriya- mein? Mein kisi ko kyun dhundungi? Mein kisi ko nahin dhoond rahi

Sw- ok ok. Waise kriya ek kam kar sakti ho. kal rat ko meine rey ko college mein ek file dene ke liye bulaya tha but pata nahin uske bad who fire exit kyun chala gaya. Keh raha tha ki upset hai aur thoda time akele spend karna chahta hai. Aaj subah mujhe uska phone aaya aur usne mujhe kaha ki who file fire exit mein bhool gaya hai kyat um who lake head office mein submit kar dogi. Mein khud hi kar deta but mujhe principle sir ne bulaya hai, ray college nahin aaya hai aur tum ags ho so tumhein us file pe access hai.

Kriya thinking- meine ray ko itna hurt kar diya ki who aa j college nahin aaya.

Kriya-par mein

Sw- haan kriya plzz

Kriya- ok

Kriya walks to the firexit and stops in front of the door and thinks about all the time that they spent together

Kriya- mein jaanti hoon ki meine aapko bohot hurt kiya hai par agar mein asa nahin kart toh aap life mein kabhi aage nahin bar paate

She then takes a deep breath and enters the fire exit.

precap

will kriya confess?

Keep reading to kno more

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome ff...plzz pm me wen u update
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wonderful update!!
thnx 4 the pm..


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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thats grt...am happy that rey knew everything...and am sure vo apne baatcutter ko kabhi nahi chodenge...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome part..update soon and do pm me
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Amazing concept.
Lovely one.

Do conrtinue and pm me.


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