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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetsanyo

DV wali spirit aa gyi, ekdum..
but di, mujhe shera/ananaya nhi mili kahin bhi,

mujhe chahiye shera ananaya jaldi se, plz...

sahi kaha, veer dekhata tho itna sweet n innocent h ki koi bhi dhoka kha jaye ki voh sharat bhi karrr sakta h,
but he is still hero of our mugdha/ shera/ ananaya...

i m excited for stry to proceed..
twists n turns...
n rtmc/ veer - shera/ananaya lov stry too...yeh point tho sabse pehle...

jai - agni, sach main serr main dard h yeh dono. :P
i dnt like dem :P

ud soon, lov u


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awww...sooo sweet of u..

yep she is gonna be here soon...

luv ya too...

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Posted: 13 years ago


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Posted: 13 years ago


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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sonalimurat

Nice part

loved it u wrote it very nicely .
liked Nivitrutti n DV relation
N also Ver's nughty features .
Loved their fighting
ohh veer got injuries .
n Where is our Ananya ...
I m waiting her to colloid wid Veer
update soon
love u


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thanks again..

well ananya is coming soon...

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: tejjo

nice update anu

teeno princes ki entry ho gyi...dv to mujhe bhot pasand.,..bt agni.i hate him n his father
mere ff me bhi ulte seedhe kam karte rehte h or ab yahan v aa gye...bt hmare dv akele hi kaafi h sbke liye

loved his mother...nivi dv mein bhi mujhe wo bhot acchi lagti thi uska costume bhi ekdum queen jaisa tha
perfect 4 veer's mother role

she is so sweet na...oh veer ko apni maa ke hatho ki kheer khani...he loved kheer...kash mujhe v pasand hoti

superb part tha dear
ud soon

luv u


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thanks for the lovely comments..

arey u dont like kheer...but yeah our hero loves it...

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: swetha10

Awesome update...

awww luved Veer...
continue soon


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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: shruja

beautiful update!!
loved dv's entry
veer always rocking!
jai n agni's evil mind started
where is our princess!


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princess is coming soon,...

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Posted: 13 years ago


Chapter 1: page 32.


Chapter 2:


Raj mahal is filled with happiness as the rajkumars are back all taking care of them and making things ready for the pooja to be done today for the prince's. Nivriti after giving the instructions to the maids regarding the pooja moved towards Dharam room to wake him up but when she entered she saw her son already ready for the day. Wearing white royal dress and having all the ornaments on, Nivriti entered the room and stood behind him.

Niv: Aaj tu mera beta bohat sundar lag raha hai.

Dharam: arey maa ap kab ayie 'turning around and hugged Nivriti'

Niv: bas abhi aayi, sach mein..mein bohat khush hoon ke mere dono bete mere saath hai mere pass hain.

Dharam: aab tu humesha hi aapke pass raheingae maa. Acha yeh sab choriye aur bataye aapka ladla jaga ya abhi uski subah nahin hui. 'Giggling'

Niv: Dharam 'showing fake anger' acha chalo chal kar dekhte hain mein bhi pehle yahin agaye thi.

With that they proceed towards Veer room and saw him sleeping with a sweet smile on his lips blanket half on bed and half lying on the floor. Nivriti sit beside him and gently carress his head to wake him up. Veer feeling her divine touch put his head in her lap and smile.

Niv: chalo bacha uth jaoab subah hogai.

Veer: sone do na maa 'hearing him Dharam remembered that he had applied some herbs on his wounds which might have the effect and he is sleeping till late so Dharam move towards the bed from the other side'

Dharam: Veer chalo utho subah ho gayi hai. 'he pulled the blanket from him making Veer scowl'

Veer: maa isse kaho na sone de 'hugging Nivriti from waist'

Niv: Veer subah ho gaye hai aur sab uth chuke hai maharaj ne dekh liya tu gussa hon gae chale uthiye.

Dharam: Veer hato humari maa hai aur yeh humaro jagah hai 'pushing Veer away'

Veer: nahin meri jagah hai aur meri maa hai 'determined to not give space to Dharam and on this both started fighting'

Dharam: meri maa hain.

Veer: nahi meri hain.

Dharam: dekh Veer mein tujhse bada hoon, tu meri baat maan.

Veer: han bada hai sirf 2 minute 'hearing him Nivriti started laughing and hugged them both'

Niv: mein tum dono ki maa ho 'n kissed their heads where as they hugged her tight that's how maharaj Arya found them and smiled.

Pooja and Havan were to be done in the evening as per the mohrat and all were making arrangement where as Jai and Agni was busy making plans against DV.

Agni: apne kya socha hai pita ji kya karna hai DV ke saath.

Jai: tum khud tu sochte nahin aur mujhe sochne nahin dete 'he said in anger as Agni broke his concentration'

Agni: maaf kar dijye pita ji acha mein ne kuch socha hai kyun na DV ke khane mein kuch mila dein 'n he received a slap from Jai'

Jai: khane mein kuch mila dein tum rasoi ghar mein jao gae kaise aur kuch mila pao gae wahan tu Nivriti hoti ai humesha nahin tu uski dasi Kamini aur koi bhi insaan tumhare liye yeh kaam nahin karega samjhe tum 'he was damn angry hearing the flop ideas of his son'

Jai: mere pass ek yojna hai suno 'n tell him abt the plan'

Agni: arey wah pita ji ab Dharam Veer dono nahin tu ek zaroor gaya kaam se 'n both laughed an evil laugh'

Here the preparations were going on and our dear Dharam and Veer were busy in playing game [u can imagine the DV intro game where both Dharam and Veer were introduced im not describing it just not the shramiks standing there watching it.]

Dharam Veer ran to get hold of the sword and both picked it on the same time and trying that one among them has it and completely forgot about the pooja interested more in the game.

Scene changed

All are present in the raj mahal pooja house pandit ji making preparation n getting things ready for the havan. All are already present there sitting for the pooja but DV were not present and Jai and Agni were waiting for the moment they say something wrong about them.

Arya: Nivriti Dharam aur Veer kahan hain 'he asked looking around'

Niv: Bas ate hi hoon gae maharaj, tayar ho rahe hon gae 'she sounded worried and looked around reason is she already went to check on them and came to know they are not in the mahal'. Jai and Agni smirked hearing it.

All the preparation done so maharaj again questioned.

Arya: Senapati ji Dharam aur Veer ko bola kar laye.

Senapati {SP}: ji maharaj. 'he was really scared now he knew both have ran away from mahal as he had tried to stopped them but they didn't listened to them. Finally he moved out of mahal.

SP: Sainik jao aur dekho Rajkumar Dharam aur Veer kahan hai.

Sainik went to check on them whereas SP himself went to fetch them he was in the Aryanagar street when he saw two horses running towards him and both the riders had their hand interwined holding the sword. He was thinking that he'll surely gonna hurt as they were approaching him with a speed of light and instead of moving away he closed his eyes but the hurt never came.

When he opened his eyes he saw the horses standing nose to nose in front of him n took a huge sigh of relief and then looked up to see both Dharam and Veer looking at him curiously and Veer with a mischievous grin.

Veer: kya baat hai SP ji marne ki badi jaldi hai.

Dharam: Veer 'passing angry look' SP ji aap teekh hain na lagi tu nahin.

SP: Rajkumar hum to teekh hai lekin aap dono ka pata nahi.

DV: matlab.

SP: matlab yeh ke aaj aap dono ke liye mahal mein havan aur pooja hai aur aap dono hi gayab hai maharaj kab se aap ka poch rahe hain aur maharani bhi bohat pershan hain.

DV: pooja

This came as a shock and realization on DV as they both forgot completely about it and pace their horses towards the mahal knocking SP in b/w, which got up after them with a back pain n dusting his clothes ran after them and smiled at the two princes and their puerility.

They reached on time and settled down for the pooja and maharaj didn't get time to enquire anything whereas Jai and Agni's plan was failed as they thought to D'grade Dharam and Veer, after the pooja maharaj summoned all in the darbar for some announcement.

Arya: aaj mein ne aap sab ko yahan kisi khaas maqsad ke tehat bolaya hai aur mein jo elaan karne jar aha hoon asha karta hoon usmein aap sabka saath mile ga. 'he looked towards Nivriti who nooded she looked towards Veer and was waiting for him to explode as she knew what the reaction he will show hearing the announcement'

Arya: tu sab se pehli baat hum ne yeh faisla liya hai ke Dharam aur Veer ke liye unke jeevan saathi chune hain aur woh hain humare mitar Sumaina ke Maharaj Angad aur Maharani Anjali ki beetiyan Rajkumari Sia aur Rajkumari Ananya. 'this came as a blow on both DV specially Veer and he looked towards his mom with a look of betrayal and she averted her eyes.'

Aur doosri baat yeh ke hum chahte hain ke Dharam aur Veer Mata ki Yatra par jaein aur apne hone wali jeevan saathi se mile aur unhein jane. 'now both are really shocked and not only them Jai and Agni also passed worried looks to each other and after that the court was adjourned.'

Dharam and Veer in their room and Veer was moving to and fro in anger huffing and puffing where as Dharam was sitting completely shocked Nivriti entered the room knowing she has to pacify them specially has to calm down Veer.

Niv: Dharam Veer.

Dharam: aye na maa 'where as Veer just looked angrily in her direction but didn't said a word'

Niv: mujhe aap dono se kuch baat karni hai.

Veer: baat karne ke liye kuch baki hai maa, sab kuch tu pitaji ne pehle se hi faisla le liye hai humari zindagiyon ka pocha tak nahin.

Dharam: Veer'angrily' yeh kya tarika hai maa se baat karne ka, mana tum gusse mein ho.


Veer looked ashamed of his words and act and looked apologetically towards her and she called him towards her. Veer hugged her n laid his head in her lap.

Niv: hum jante hain aap ko is faisle se takleef hui aur aap dono ke liye yeh baat ek jhatka sabit hua hai lekin yeh bhi tu ho sakta hai yeh aapke liye sahi faisla ho.

Dharam: han maa aap sahi keh rahe ho pitaji humare liye koi ghalat faisla nahin lein gae.

Veer: lekin mujhe aapne pasand ki larki se shaadi karne hai aur mujhe is baat se farak nahi padta ke woh rajkumari ho ya nahin, bas humare tarah hone chahiye aur jo humein samajh sake.

Niv: kya maloom Veer yeh Rajkumari Ananya wohi hoon apke sapnon ki rajkumari aur unse milne bhi jana Yatra pe.

Veer: Teekh hai magar agar who humein paasand na aye tu aap wada kijiye humse zabardasti nahin karein gae.

Niv: Wadda. Hum appke pita se baat karein gae agar aapko apne sapnon ki rajkumari mil gae aur who koi bhi ho.


Though Veer was not satisfied with all the happening and Nivriti knew he has all the ability to protest and go against his father she knows Dharam will blindly follow his father but Veer is a different case. After Nivriti left senapati entered their room.

SP: rajkumar humse aapse kuch baat karni hai 'he sounded worried'

DV: ji kahiye.

SP: Rajkumar kuch din pehle Aryanagar ke seema par kuch ajeeb sa hua humein logon se sochna mile ke wahan par kuch logon ko hathyar Aryanagar ke andar aur bahar jate dekha, jab un logon ne poocha tu kaha gaya ke who vayapari hai. Kuch samay baad yeh cheez phir se hui aur hum logon ne unmein se ek ko pakar liye lekin who humein kuch batane ko razi nahin na jane kya hai.

Dharam: aapne is bare mein pita ji se baat ki

SP: nahin hum pehle khud janana chahte hain ke kya baat hai aur kahin who such mein vayapari hi na ho.

Veer: chalo hum chal kar dekhte hain.

On the other side

Jai: yeh kya DV yatra par jaien gae, humara poora khel bigad jaein ga.

Agni: khel kaise khel pitaji aap ne koi yojna banae thi kya.

Jai: haan tum tu kuch karne se rahe 'he taunted him once again n then started telling him about the plan he made' ab tumhein ek kaam karna ahi DV ke saath us yatra mein jana hai aur unpe nazar rakhni hai khayal rahe humara khel bigadna nahin chahiye. 'to which Agni nooded' ab tumhein mujhse kaun bachaye ga Aryavardhan ab Aryanagar ka naya maharaj mein hoonga 'n laughed evily'

Dharam Veer reached the prison cell and asked the person they caught about what is happening n what he is doing here he don't seems to be a trader and after getting tourtured he revealed something big happening against Aryanagar and in the yatra, so Dharam and Veer decided to join yatra on the pretext of meeting the rajkumari's but will do some other work too.


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Rajkumari's in the next part...

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Edited by anumeha_rajat - 13 years ago

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