IPKKND FF | Broken Strings (ON HOLD) - Page 56

i can't believe that i found your ff only now!! such a great story you have written there, i read all parts in one go!! 😊

Originally posted by: Hot.Pink.Heels

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Oh myy, I've managed to comment first again?! I seriously have a connection with this story 😆

What can I say Shay, this was a lovely chapter! Arnav and Khushi are finally taking baby steps forward to fix their broken relationship. That was a pleasure to read!

And Akash and Arnav's little tussle there was absolutely adorable!

Although I know Arnav is truly regretful, I too feel Khushi shouldn't give in too easily! She has had to suffer for 6 years, Arnav better work to make things right for her! Lol.

Don't keep us waiting so long next time (;

It was a wonderful update and you already know how I love this story so continue soon! - Pria

Originally posted by: KKKA

SHAY ZEE ...WONDERFUL UPDATE ...

LET THE GAME BEGIN

DO NOT LET THE FIRE BRAND KHUSHI GIVE IN EASILY

ARNAV MUST UNDER GO SOME PAIN TO KNOW HOW SHE MUST

HAVE FELT WHEN HE DISAPPEARED INTO THE THIN AIR WITHOUT A

TRACE

THANKS FOR THE PM

KEEP ME ALERT

KKKA

Originally posted by: LoLo

Glad she didn't give in. He needs to understand her pain. What is the "uh oh" at the end? Are his feelings more than just friendly????

Originally posted by: --BumbleBee--

Shaaayyy!!!!!!

So sorry for the late comment!!

My internet decided to take a walk yesterday!

Just got back and I log in and I see- Broken Strings chapter 12!!

Awesome.

I love how you have made this real. It's not possible for Khushi to forgive him because he apologized. Because despite that, if he was that sorry, why would he do something like that back then?

Her feelings on what she means to him stem from the same place she has been going to for the past few years whenever she thought of what they shared.

Love how she composed herself and came up and spoke to him.

Arnav's point of view was also brought out really well. His hesitation, confusion. His need to be with her. His emotions.

Beautifully penned.

Lovely chapter.

Definitely worth the wait.

Akash is adorable. Love the character you have made him out to be. Can't wait to see PayAsh here..

Please please update soon..

Waiting!!

Thanks for the PM..

P.S- UPDATE SOOON!!!😆

Love.