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angie_g82

@angie_g82

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Posted: 12 years ago

#531

happens to all writers I guess. :) I'm in the same boat. Good update though.

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Fatemah

@KC294

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Posted: 12 years ago

#532

brilliant chapter... Please continue soon

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733619

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Posted: 12 years ago

#533

Uh oh indeed. Glad they are taking small steps to try and get everything back to normal.

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casker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#534

Nice update.

I don't want to Kushi to forgive him so easily.

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anumadduri

@anumadduri

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Posted: 12 years ago

#535

Oh my !!!!!!!!!!! This is one heck of a story . It is so power packed . Simply amazing . It is so raw and so touching that it literally breaks your heart . You have done a Fantastic job :) That's all I can say . 👏

PS : Boy is payal a firebrand or what !!!!!!!!!!!!!! Glad that you have given her backbone in this story ;)

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Maddy1270

@Maddy1270

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Posted: 12 years ago

#536

this update was well worth the wait... simply beautiful... akash and arnav fighting like kids... anjali angered by arnav's unthought actions... payal worried about khushi's wellbeing and warning her to consider what arnav truly feels for her... payal realising her mistake and deciding to apologise to arnav... khushi taking the bull by the horns and laying out her decision as to how their relationship will progress

looks like arnav fears the intensity of his feelings for khushi... was this one of the reasons he decided to stay away from her all these years? the future really is intriguing!

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blablabla_mo7

@blablabla_mo7

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#537

Nice.. Khushi taking baby steps and Arnav repenting. Akash and payal, they're definitely sth. So different and like fire crackers. Love them too.
Update soon

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--BumbleBee--

@--BumbleBee--

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Posted: 12 years ago

#538

Shaaayyy!!!!!!

So sorry for the late comment!!

My internet decided to take a walk yesterday!

Just got back and I log in and I see- Broken Strings chapter 12!!

Awesome.

I love how you have made this real. It's not possible for Khushi to forgive him because he apologized. Because despite that, if he was that sorry, why would he do something like that back then?

Her feelings on what she means to him stem from the same place she has been going to for the past few years whenever she thought of what they shared.

Love how she composed herself and came up and spoke to him.

Arnav's point of view was also brought out really well. His hesitation, confusion. His need to be with her. His emotions.

Beautifully penned.

Lovely chapter.

Definitely worth the wait.

Akash is adorable. Love the character you have made him out to be. Can't wait to see PayAsh here..

Please please update soon..

Waiting!!

Thanks for the PM..

P.S- UPDATE SOOON!!!😆

Love.

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Venicestar88

@Venicestar88

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Posted: 12 years ago

#539

hahahaha akash and payal aka the fireball!!! and payal feeling bad about him? SIGH! i'm sure you'll give us more on that

as for Arnav and Khushi... i'm going to patiently wait and let the story unfold! i love it that you are keeping things real and not making Khushi into the Bl***y doormat that the CVs made her

thanks for the PM...:)

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Rhysenn

@Rhysenn

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#540

I love it! Please continue soon!

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