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Reader_Hobby

@Reader_Hobby

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Posted: 12 years ago

#571

Hey!

This was beautiful and emotional all at once.

Emotional because Khushi had to in a sense, relive what she went through her younger years with Arnav ... his behaviour ... the loss of uncle and aunty, who mind you were like parents to her ... on top of that she learnt that Arnav didn't die, he was alive, well ... and hiding or keeping away from her ... whatever you prefer to call it. I don't blame Khushi for saying to Arnav that she wants time. He should be glad that she is even talking to him after what he has put her through ...

Beautiful because this is the first time Khushi has actually had a good laugh. A genuine smile playing on her lips. Perhaps that twinkle in her eyes. She deserves all the happiness she craves for. 🤗

As always, well written and descriptive. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Love this chapter ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

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9424976

@9424976

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Posted: 12 years ago

#572

Oh wow I don't know what to say. This was one of the best chapters ever. The way Khushi was talking about the past was heartbreaking. The way Akash was truly behaving as a really good friend was heartwarming. And Payal, wow I love your Payal. This update was just so good. You've managed to make me fall in love with these characters even more! And Arnav, oh gosh I cannot believe he was hiding from Payal and then spying on them. And truth be told I'm so glad he felt jealous! And the flashback..did the Train blast right in front of Khushi's eyes? While she was present? Did she feel guilty about not stopping him earlier?

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733619

Hibernated

Posted: 12 years ago

#573

Yup I definitely liked it. Thanks for updating so quickly.

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sakthi25

@sakthi25

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Posted: 12 years ago

#574

Finally, Aakash gets to know the entire scenario...

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PARVATHY44

@PARVATHY44

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#575

A very good long update.Khushi opensup her past to akash.Loved paayash.Thanks for the pm

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ManmarziyanTeri

@ManmarziyanTeri

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#576

You updated?! Nahin! Two updates to catch up on! *panics*

okay Res... I promise to comment as son as I get back from this resort 😔 xx

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723461

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Posted: 12 years ago

#577

Oh my...what can I say? Lovelovelove this!

This was like a closure chapter. It wrapped up and cleared so much. I love the Khushi- Akash part to bits. Really. He's the same- compasionate and caring person. He's not stuck in the past like Arnav. Can I even express how much I love this Khushi of yours?

She's so levelheaded, having all these different emotions swirling throught her...the hurt and nostalgia of her past and then laughing so freely with her Jiji and boss and thinking of ways to tease her. So admirable.❤️

Hayyye, coming to my Arru. I think the best thing you can ever tell a girl is that you'll never leave her side. And he's made up that resolve so, Yayyy!

I loved how you put it, "being on the outside, looking in"

Delicious chapter as ever, Shay.🤗

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Samyxx

@Samyxx

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Posted: 12 years ago

#578

Absolutely Wonderful update!!

the way you write their feelings... *sigh*

LOooved the update!!!!!

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sur91

@sur91

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+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#579

This update was very heavy emotionally. Finally someone apart from khushi and her family knows what she went through and I sure akash will be of great help in kicking some more sense Into arnav.

Arnav ducking under a table in the fear of payal. I guess this is the best thing I have ever read. ROFLMAO. I simple love payal. She is a firebrand and so unlike the show

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anumadduri

@anumadduri

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Posted: 12 years ago

#580

Oh my that was a fab update . The past is out in the open now . Seriously 🤣 at Arnav's reaction to seeing Payal in the office . I mean LOL .. Loving the dynamics of Khushi and Aakash's relationship !!!!!

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