5 pages past ... But chalo koi nai, agli zindagi vich, we will see ;)
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OK, so basically, yeah. I read this update, and I read your note and all I could think of was: đ
LOL jokes aside, Asha you just get better and better and just more and more brilliant :')
There was a perfect mix of everything; from that cute little moment Arnav and Akash shared, to that intense confrontation between A and K.
I like the way you're subtly developing/establishing each of the other characters - the story is not just about Arnav and Khushi; it's about reshaping old relationships, as well as moving forward and making new ones. I think it's in this update that I personally felt that the title was more apt than ever; that little interaction between the brothers was representative of what was lost for all these years - 'Broken Strings' in the sense of them being slightly distant all these years, but in this you get to see them starting to try and bridge some of their differences.
And I think I'll have to go back on my statement where I said I didn't like Anjali - I'm definitely warming up to her now! đ She's too cute, really :')
And then there was that Payal-Khushi moment - I like how it was almost like a bit of a parallel; there the two brothers had their moment, and here the two sisters had a moment and it was just sweet and cute :and myeehhh :')
But yeah: again the title ties in here - Payal also had some kind of inevitable bond with Arnav, and so when he just disappeared like that, she too was hurt and she too suffered. It could even be argued that she suffered more because she saw what an impact it had on Khushi.
And when she talked about apologising to Akash! AWW :') There's another couple I'm rooting for! #TeamPayAshAllTheWay đđ¤Ł
The problem with me is that at first, I'm all for Arnav suffering; I say let the bas***d get all the pain/misery coming his way. And then you'll write a sentence or two describing the torment he's clearly going through and it just makes me wanna give him a huuugee hug and telling him not to feel so miserable #FickleHeart đ
But wow ... that was a pretty powerful interaction between them ... I'm still glad though that Khushi's not easily going to forgive him - as much as it pains me, he needs to work hard for his redemption đ
And now, I suppose, the games have begun - let him try and woo his lady love back to his side ... this is gonna be gooodd ^_^
In the terms of ... well, le me: Let the McLovin' begin đ
Idiocy aside, brilliant, brilliant chapter and you have to stop depriving us of your genius for too long, wokaayyy??
I LOVE YOU â¤ď¸ đł
Edited by MsIPKKNDManic - 12 years ago
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