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Maddy1270

@Maddy1270

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#451

painful to read yet all the more beautiful! arnav's realization as to the enormity of his actions and his heartfelt remorse were nicely brought out... his eyes spoke volumes and his silent apology stole my heart... however, like the fact that khushi isn't willing to forgive all so easily... her silent plea to him to wait for her was poignant! loved the feisty payal who tore strips from both akash and arnav... akash being intimidated by payal was fun to read!

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spuARHI

@spuARHI

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#452

Hey shay!
Absolutely beautifull the story is.. Your story keeps getting awesome every single time and i just keep waiting for the next time.. Every time i see that i have a pm, i wish Its your update:) i just love it..
In this i loved how Arnav and khushi s friendship blossomed through school and how he remembers the Promise. Highlight o this for me is the silent love visible between Arnav and khushi but onl both o them notice it.. I loved it in the end wen it said wait for me arru!

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angie_g82

@angie_g82

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#453

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zeedia

@zeedia

Navigator

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#454

Beautiful update
Loved the fiesty side of payal.

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vittoriA Giardano

@kbtr

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#455

Mmm... don't know what to say.

I didn't really feel his sincerity. I don't feel like he is sorry at all!

It's like the scene on the road when he was beating up the goon. He was so into it FOR HIMSELF (just like Aman) that he did not even remember about her! Akash had to stop him and remind him about Kushi. I feel this is the same way. He is doing this for himself. Not for her. He is sorry that HE is not getting what he wants. He is not sorry for her, for what he did to her, only in the way it reflects on him, and how he feels and how he is not getting what he wants! That's how I am feeling right now! I didn't like this at all! and I really did not like her asking him to wait!

But I loved the feisty Payal! Loved that whole bit with her. Was also happy that Arnav at least had the guts to face Payal!

Thanks for the PM.😃 Waiting to see what happens next!