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ag0502

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Posted: 13 years ago

#441

Never I imagined that Akash & Payal shouting at each other.

They will fight for Khushi & Arnav

Wow! getting excited to read further.

Please update soon.

TQ😛

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Swetyz

@Swetyz

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Posted: 13 years ago

#442

Beautiful...loved payal today.
She stole the lime light
Khushi should forgive him that easily
Thanks for the pm

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esmeralda111

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Posted: 13 years ago

#443

hmmm...so Khushi is proved to be what she is after all : kind hearted, forgiving and loving.. but Payal did the job of elder protective sister very well and treated Raizadas as they should be...Looking forward for more of her fire in up coming updates ...👏

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horizon123

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Posted: 13 years ago

#444

simply fabulous, emotions well portrayed, loved it. Pls cont soon.

Thanks for the pm.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#445

Oh myy! That was simply amazing Shay!

The flashback of a younger Arnav and Khushi was so heart warming, especially to see how protective Arnav and even NK was of Khushi.

And later when Khushi woke up and Arnav finally understood her point of view, all of it was described magnificently!

Beautifully written hon!

Continue soon :)

Thanks, Pria.

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--BumbleBee--

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Posted: 13 years ago

#446

That was awesome.

Love Payal.

The flashback was so fitting. Arnav finally realizes his mistake. The scene between them was written beautifully.

Can't wait to see what happens next.

Please update soon..'Thanks for the PM..

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Posted: 13 years ago

#447

That was really ethreal. Such a unique way for Arnav to realize his mistake...his 16 year old promise to Khushi that he would protect her and how he broke it👏 there is such derp regret now...ooh the way you should him staring at a sleeping Khushi was spectacular😃

And finally, a feisty Payal and Akash's irritation was simply too cute😆 love how protective she is toward Khushi and Arnav's silent hatred towards himself again😲

His genuine "I'm sorrys" really had my heart breaking but Khushi's silent forgiveness gives me hope!

Wonderful, Shay!