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Posted: 12 years ago
Love It :) Happy That Arnav Is Realizing & Wants To Explain Khushi That He Is Guilty 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb update🤗
now arnav will repent like hell
oh payal is surely a feisty person...oh poor akash😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Madafterarhi

That was really ethreal. Such a unique way for Arnav to realize his mistake...his 16 year old promise to Khushi that he would protect her and how he broke it👏 there is such derp regret now...ooh the way you should him staring at a sleeping Khushi was spectacular😃


And finally, a feisty Payal and Akash's irritation was simply too cute😆 love how protective she is toward Khushi and Arnav's silent hatred towards himself again😲

His genuine "I'm sorrys" really had my heart breaking but Khushi's silent forgiveness gives me hope!

Wonderful, Shay!




Disha!!! ❤️

Thank you, thank you!

I'm so glad you like Akash and Payal in this bit... They're going to get even more interesting lol.
I really wanted Arnav to realise his mistake in the most dire way possible... He isn't a man of very many words, but when he says something, he means it!

Once again, thank you!! 🤗
Shay X



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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: angie_g82

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Ahhh!!!!!

This actually made me grin like a crazy person! 😆
THANK YOU!
I'm glad you loved it 😉

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Hot.Pink.Heels

Oh myy! That was simply amazing Shay!

The flashback of a younger Arnav and Khushi was so heart warming, especially to see how protective Arnav and even NK was of Khushi.
And later when Khushi woke up and Arnav finally understood her point of view, all of it was described magnificently!
Beautifully written hon!
Continue soon :)
Thanks, Pria.



Pria!
Thank you once again!
I'm glad you liked the flash back... I really wanted it to emphasise the intensity of the situation! So i'm happy it was received so well 😃

Hugs are being sent your way, right now 🤗
Shay X

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: AparnaKrish

That was awesome.

Love Payal.
The flashback was so fitting. Arnav finally realizes his mistake. The scene between them was written beautifully.
Can't wait to see what happens next.
Please update soon..'Thanks for the PM..



Thank you so much!!! 🤗

She's not going to forgive him right the way... But get ready for more fun now that the majority of the sad stuff is over. 😃
I shall try and update quickly as well

Shay X

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sakthi25

Read all the parts in one go...
Such an interesting storyline.
Lovely potrayal of emotions and situations...



Thank you so much! 🤗
I'm so glad you're liking it!

Shay X

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Well Aman was a bas***d. But then I've never been for people dating at the age of 15.

I'll admit that I got confused. I didn't know that Khushi was Aman's girlfriend. But again. [my opinion] Dating at 15? Get outta your diapers first -.-

Anyhoo, I liked the whole flashback, showed Arnav's instinct to protect her. Nicely portrayed.

Arnav's feelings were a roller coaster and Im glad he finally realizes what he's been putting her through. The anger, pain, disappointment. It was there and very well done.

Lets hope that he gets it right this time.
Edited by dreamyshadows - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
This is page 69.


*chortle*chortle* 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
I love it!!

U are a GREAT writer!!!

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