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Iamyself

@Iamyself

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Posted: 12 years ago

#391

That was AMAZING! Quite an intense chapter.

Now the healing process, that'd be fun to read :)

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Maddy1270

@Maddy1270

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Posted: 12 years ago

#392

another beautiful update... loved seeing that it was akash who made arnav realise why he was feeling so restless... the attack on khushi and arnav's anger were brilliantly written... the fear and need for retribution were tangible things... arnav having khushi in his arms and thinking of her curves in the midst of all his concern while having her in his arms was very realistic... he realises she needs him and decides to take her home... whose home is what intrigues me!

akash also beating the creep was a good move... he's no onlooker, that's good!

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sur91

@sur91

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+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#393

I knew it, it needed something of this magnitude only for arnav to realise and later repent his mistake. Amazing update and thanks for updating so soon

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Shobhana

@-Shobhu21-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#394

That was damn intense !

And now Arnav's gonna go through personal hell !
Oh yeha he will !
Thank god Akash finally managed to come and remind his brother about Khushi !

And Khushi !
Gosh ! She's so hurt and fragile now ! I just hope she gets well soon !
And I dont want her to forgive Arnav so soon, but I do want them both to atleast try and talk !
Ya, you must be wondering why this sudden change, cause last chappy, I was just hating Arnav, but now ya, its a bit different ! Cause I do know one thing, after this incident, Arnav's surely gonna loose his mind , think he's responsible ! Maybe he is, to an extent, but he doesnt deserve the self-wrath, not now !

Waiitng for the next one Shay !

Love you

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vittoriA Giardano

@kbtr

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+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#395

OK, I'm mad as hell. Where the hell is the f**king redemption of this asshole!? He really needs to learn a lesson! I hope you are not going to make Kushi into a wimp and give in to him! He needs to really realize that he took the best years of her life away from her. He can NEVER bring that back - the time that should have been her happiest time of her life - he STOLE that away from her!! Really, he should be shot for that!!! (Except that I do want them to be together at the end, but right now, he should feel the loss she did, he should go through the same thing she did!) She should not let him come near her, right now. Aaarrrggghhh! I HATE him for what he did to her!!!!!!

PLEASE, please do not make her give in to him, he should really realize what he did to her. And please don't end it by just saying sorry for a 2 sec apology. PLEASE!!!!

OK sorry!

I just finished reading chapters 7-10 after being away for a while from my inbox! Your writing style, as I have mentioned before, is superb. I always feel your chapters are so short (yes, I know they are not really!) and the flow of the writing as well the plot keeps me intrigued. I am dying to know how this is going to unfold. What's that ass going to do now? He has already killed her! Aaarrrggghhh!!!!!!!!!!!! OMG! I'm sobbing for her!

Thanks for the PM.😃 Dying for the next update!!!!

I never swore in my life, before coming to IF!!!!!!!