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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: DropofDew


Lmao Avi! Mwahaha It's not that easy to get rid of me 😉 :P



Haunting Ghost?

Edited by shay1990 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: shay1990



Pinks Pinks Pink... You've hit the nail on the head once again. The way you do this is so amazing.. It makes me so happy to know that it's coming across in the way i perceive it in my own head.

Because that's the bulk of it... All the problems; all this mess, is all because of his irrationality and selfishness. Whatever is at the forefront of his mind - he'll do that! Without thinking about anything else. He didn't necessarily WANT to do that to Khushi... But as we all know, he can't handle loss and pain in very apt ways
Things are going to change from this chapter though... But everything won't completely be sorted don't you worry 😉 Remember there's still his realisation of his love to come 😆

And AKASH! *sighs*
He's just so wonderfully wonderful... Avi and you both want him now LOL. Share share?
He doesn't like Khushi like that.. but he really does genuinely care for her - they've built up such a good relationship and from this point (spoiler alert) Arnav is going to be thankful of that fact. But it's obvs not going to stop the jealousy 😆😉

I'm so glad you commended the attack.. I wasn't sure how i was going to play it out. I didn't want to make her seem like a wimp... but i needed it to be quite gruesome at the same time. It was needed in the story for Arnav to realise.

It's going to be alll good stuff from now lol... Arnavs going to be so f**king sorry lol

Muaahahahahhaha 😈

Pinks! Thank you once again for your comments that leave me feeling so unbelievably happy. You are fully amazing. But you already know that 😛😉
And my aim is to update quickly this time as well lol 😃
I love you!!!!
X


Yeyy! I got the part on Arnav right! 😃
Aw of course lol such an stubborn idiot! Argh I just want to hit him! Lol

Hmm I dunnoo I'm sure I love Aakash more. Avi can have NK 😛 (let's hope she doesn't read this 😆).

Yeh like he cares for her in the cutest way possible. I love his concern for her and then all his efforts to get Arnav back with Khushi. Arnav deserves to go through this alone tbh and your spoiler makes me so happy! 😃 Aakash deserves appreciation for all that he is doing!
😆 Arnav? And not feeling jealous? Er when was that ever part of the plan anyway 😛

The attack part was just amazing! It was just perfect! She didn't seem like a wimp 😊. There could have been no other way that she could have responded to it.

Yey! Mwahahaha! Arnav must pay!

And yey for a quick update! I will be stalking as always! Lol

Lotsa loweee! xx
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: shay1990

Chapter Ten - Porcelain Doll


The office was eerily quiet when Akash stepped through the doors of AR Designs - the sound of his shoes echoing harmoniously throughout the building. He glanced down at his slightly lose watch, rattled it in to position and saw that it was almost 10pm. He had been at home waiting for his brother to come home for ages now. He and Anjali had been sat there since the afternoon, constantly looking at the clock wandering what had been happening for the whole day. Surely they hadn't had that much work to do? Or had Khushi gone ahead and just murdered him? With that last thought, Akash glanced around the empty building and its darkened stature

'This place gives me the creeps at night' he thought, shuddering as a slight chill made its way down his spine.

He had uncannily left his files there for the work that needed to be done by the next day... That and he was itching to see what was going on between the two 'friends'

He was pretty sure that they would still be at each others throats. But then why weren't there any sounds? He watched as the cleaner wheeled his trolley along the marble floors - the shrill squeak making Akash wince as it scratched at his ear drums. 'Everyone's gone home as well' he whispered, wondering where they were.

He chanced upon the dim light emerging from his cousins' office and quickly took the stairs two at a time, figuring they must be in there. Opening the door, a chilling uncertainty crept up on him as he saw Arnav sitting on his desk, alone - deep in thought as he gnawed at his thumb nail. He didn't know why, but a worry swept over him as he scanned the office for another occupant. Where was Khushi? He thought with a questioning urgency.

'Bhai?'

Arnav looked up - slightly dazed as he saw he cousin slowly walking towards him 'When had he come in?' He'd been so lost in thought that he hadn't heard him enter the room.

'Akash... What are you doing here so late?'

Akash was getting all the more worried by the minute, looking round the office still as he vaguely answered his brothers' question

'Bhai woh, I forgot the file I was supposed to work on tonight, toh hum bas usse lene aaye hai'

Arnav raised an eyebrow at him - watching in confusion as Akash glanced around the office, seemingly otherwise preoccupied. 'What is he up to now?' He thought - the amusement somewhat wilting away his previous distress

'You could have called me... I was just about to come home you know'

Akash looked at Arnav and began to explain himself

'Yea I know bu-'

He failed to finish his sentence as the curiosity got the better of him.

'Bhai where's Khushi?'

Arnav stood there perplexed - an odd pang of jealousy pursuing his thought processes as he looked at his cousin in slight resentment.

'She went home about half an hour ago,'

Akash felt some of his tension ebb away; the relief causing an unexpected smile to form on his thankful face.

'Achha... You dropped her off home right?'

Arnav was getting annoyed now. What was his problem? He had warned him already to stay away from her.

'What? Why would I?'

That was it. Akash felt the nervousness pile back up on top of him as he looked at his brothers oblivious expressions. He had grown to like Khushi over the weeks - and had gotten to know her quite well. He felt almost responsible for her in some way now that she didn't really have Arnav looking out for her.

'Bhai you're joking right?'

He sounded almost hysterical as he carried on further

'Khushi doesn't have a car Bhai, and there aren't any buses that come round here at this time of night. That's why I've been dropping her off home when we work late.'

Arnav felt as if he'd just been doused in ice cold water. He hadn't even considered what time it was. He looked at the clock and realised it was past 10 - Surely she must have been home by now right? He felt an uncomfortable wave of nausea hit him as he thought about how just unsafe this area was in daylight let alone at night. He felt his heart thudding against his chest as Akashs' words echoed in his head 'She doesn't have a car'

'She must have taken a taxi' he convinced himself - his eyes widening as he realised that Khushi Kumari Gupta hated Taxi's - the fear of being raped was far too great for her to put herself in that position.

He shook his head and looked at Akash, hiding the gulp with great difficulty as he tried to reassure himself that everything was OK; that the feeling moving through him was just the cold air travelling around the room. He lifted himself off the desk and walked past Akash towards the office doors.

'I'm sure she's home. Come on let's go'


As they walked out of the building and towards their cars, Akash whipped his phone out and glanced nervously at his cousin

'I'm going to give her a quick call... Make sure she got home safely and all,' he finished lamely - looking at his brother guiltily as he held the phone up to his ear; knowing he was probably cursing every bone in his body for showing such concern.

Before the phone could even ring however, a distant scream resonated through the air surrounding them, shattering the peaceful night sky as its shrill tones pierced through Arnavs' every nerve and destroyed his so carefully placed walls. It rang in his ears; the wind encompassing his open eyes they began to water. Turning to face Akash slowly, there wasn't a doubt in his mind concerning what he had just heard. That very scream had been etched in to his memory for the past six years. His voice was barely above a whisper as he just stood transfixed - staring at his cousin.

'Khushi'

Within that very moment, he was tearing past Akash as he ran in the direction of his life - she needed him and he could sense it in his every fibre.

He could hear the taunting voices in his head as he skidded to a halt at every corner breathlessly, each time the panic hitting him more and more. This is why he had been feeling so restless! He cursed himself a million times for not knowing sooner - he should have known... he was clearly out of sync from being away from her for so long.

He heard Akash move behind him as he stopped for a moment and found his bearings - his erratic breathing mirroring the fear within him as he looked at his cousin pleadingly.


'Where is she Akash?'



~



She could feel the knife slide down the side of her neck - slicing it slightly as he applied more pressure to her throat; squeezing at it as she felt herself become light-headed.

His putrid breath was masking her senses as she inched towards an unconscious state - His sickening leer magnified as he brought his face closer still. He had her jammed to the wall, his every limb pressed against hers; pressing her flat against it as she felt the rough bricks protrude in to the black of her blouse.

She had sensed his intentions the moment she had seen that look in his yellowing eyes. Before he could even touch her she had punched him right between his eyes - following through with her knee as it collided with his most sensitive area. She hadn't had time to think of much else as she ran in the opposite direction, glancing back every now and then to make sure she was rid of him. In all her terror, she had failed to realise where she was going... She hadn't had a clue where she was in the constricting darkness. In that very moment she had never felt so alone in all of her life. Placing a hand to heart in order to calm the monstrous thuds erupting from her, she tried to reason with herself that it was OK; that she had lost him. She had slowly arched her neck to peep round the corner, making sure she had indeed taken him off course. She had closed her eyes and thanked Devi Maiyya for keeping her safe.

But in all her bravado, he had been too stealthy for her, inconspicuously padding behind her in the darkened alleyway as he grabbed at her from behind, tearing the sleeve of her blouse as she had screamed for her life.

And that was the last that was heard as his rough hands clamped down on her mouth; his nails digging in to her skin whilst silent tears rolled down her face as she shook violently - thrashing around in a bid to escape.

And by now, she was slowly drifting - his grip tightening by the second as she felt her hindered circulation pulsating under his hold. She could feel him move the knife lower, inching it towards her chest as he came forward and slowly licked the blood that was trickling down the side of her face. She clenched her eyes shut - the bile rising up towards her mouth as she made a futile attempt to unbind her hands from his strong grip


And then

A cold breeze was suddenly enveloping her as her attacker was pulled of her with a force so powerful she was brought forward with him and thrown back at the sheer force - her head slamming on the wall behind her.

She felt herself sliding down - the rough bricks grating at her bruised skin as she collapsed in a heap, pulling her legs to her body as she buried her head in her arms - The image of Arnav flashing before her eyes.


~


Arnav didn't need to think about what he was doing, or what he needed to know. All he knew was that the second he had seen this piece of filth clawing at his Khushi; pressed up against her - watching with sick pleasure as he carved her with a knife... he wanted to kill him. He had him pressed up against the wall within the instant - his forearm pushing against his throat as he shoved him with such force that the slight crack of his bones was just about audible. His mouth turned up in to an evil snarl as he watched the dirty bas***d writhe in pain. It wasn't enough for Arnav. No. He jabbed his arm in to his throat once more, replacing it with his hand as he brought his head towards his ear and whispered menacingly in to it.

'You touched her. And now you die'

He let him go and watched as he fell to the floor. Laughing, Arnav growled at his retreating form and picked him up by the collar, throwing him back against the jagged bricks only to watch him fall once again.


It still wasn't enough.

Arnav's mind went blank - a purposeful ring ricocheting through his ears as he fell to his knees and pummelled the attacker right through the pile of rocks beneath him - the image of Khushi plastered across his every brain cell as he saw the blood dripping down his face. He got up, clenching his fists once more as he turned around to sneer at the man below him; looking him straight in the eyes as he unleashed his full force.

'Time for round two'



~


Khushi felt an unfamiliar touch somewhere on her head - the pain drumming against her insides. She looked up in to the concerned eyes of Akash and snatched her hand back as she moved further back in to the wall upon reflex.

'Hey, hey Khushi, it's ok - it's me Akash'

This failed to reassure her as she shook her head slightly at him, cowering away in to the corner as the tears trickled out from her eyes and down her blood stained cheeks. Akash could see the fear so clearly in her eyes, making him sick to the stomach at the thought of how scared she must have been feeling in this moment in time. He could see her eyes opening and closing as she held her throat, the red rings indented upon her as she strove to rid herself of the searing pain emancipating from her whole body.

He jumped up and rushed towards Arnav, holding on to his arm to stop him as he urged him to look at the broken girl on the floor.

'Bhai stop it, Khushi'


At the mere mention of her name, Arnav lashed his head round to see the mess he had inadvertently caused, dropping his clenched fist that was bunched in the f**kers' shirt; he rushed towards her, sliding to his knees as he came to a halt in front of her

He lifted her head gently so he didn't alarm her, his thumb stroking her scraped chin. He blocked out the chaos behind him as Akash finished off what he started and managed to call the police in the process. All Arnav saw, was his best friend - his Khushi, trembling in front of him as she just stared right in to his eyes as if trying to seek out some sort of comfort within them. He felt his breathing restrict as the tears rolled down her fright-filled face

'Khush?'

That was all she needed to hear. Khushi fell forward in to him as Arnavs arms automatically slid round her waist, holding her close as she clung to him. He could feel her shaking as hot tears trickled down the back of his neck. He closed his eyes and sat there with her for a few moments; squeezing her to him as his hand rubbed up and down her back.

'Hey shh. Shhh It's ok Khush I'm here. It's ok.'

He looked down at his hand, feeling a sticky wetness - her blood was colouring his skin, trickling off his fingers as he looked up at the wall above them. It was stained with the fluid that should have never even left her. He clenched in fist, cursing himself for not being there on time; for letting this happen in the first place. He felt Khushi move away from him slightly in his arms. He looked at her carefully - her tear-stained face emanating such beauty, even now as her whole body was wracking with choking sobs. He held her face in his hands as he bowed his head a little to look right in to her eyes - silently letting her know her know that she was safe. She opened her mouth slightly, wincing as the cut split open, releasing with it a fresh burst of pain. She spoke out - her voice coming out in a breathy rasp.

'Arnav... It hurts'

He nodded at her, not trusting himself to speak as he felt a choking lump at the back of his throat. He helped her up slowly, struggling to keep her stable as she buckled under the pressure of her aching body. Her arm was firmly latched on to his - craving his every support as he felt her waver a little. He looked down at her as she stood still for a moment, her eyes closed as a painful frown made its way upon her wounded face.

Her head lolled back - finally succumbing to her dire state; her legs giving away as she fainted in front of him. He caught her weight with his one hand, lifting her arm around his shoulder so he could lift her up... it felt wrong to take pleasure in the feel of her curves resting against his body as she lay there unconscious - but she felt so blissfully good. He shook himself out of his ridiculous thoughts and hoisted her further up in to his embrace - holding on to her tightly as Akash rushed over to them both whilst mentioning something along the line of 'taking Khushi to the hospital'

Arnav took one look at her beautiful scarred face and felt himself break completely under his sickening guilt; her words resounding through his head, 'You really don't understand do you Arru?'


He looked back at Akash and shook his head. She didn't need a doctor... She needed him


'No... I'm taking her home'

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My quickest update till date! 😆

Hope you enjoyed this one!

Shay X

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Posted: 13 years ago

Nahi Avi didn't get to me, she got confused in her sleep and got my flatmate instead. Thanks Avi! :P
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Posted: 13 years ago
This is one of the most interesting stories i have ever read on if. I don't know how i missed it . Just read all the ten chapters and thoroughly enjoyed reading such a different take on arnav and khushi. Hope you update soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: DropofDew


Yeyy! I got the part on Arnav right! 😃
Aw of course lol such an stubborn idiot! Argh I just want to hit him! Lol

Hmm I dunnoo I'm sure I love Aakash more. Avi can have NK 😛 (let's hope she doesn't read this 😆).

Yeh like he cares for her in the cutest way possible. I love his concern for her and then all his efforts to get Arnav back with Khushi. Arnav deserves to go through this alone tbh and your spoiler makes me so happy! 😃 Aakash deserves appreciation for all that he is doing!
😆 Arnav? And not feeling jealous? Er when was that ever part of the plan anyway 😛

The attack part was just amazing! It was just perfect! She didn't seem like a wimp 😊. There could have been no other way that she could have responded to it.

Yey! Mwahahaha! Arnav must pay!

And yey for a quick update! I will be stalking as always! Lol

Lotsa loweee! xx



LOOOL!... It's Ok, Avi can can NK and you, my lovely, can have Akash 🤗
Besudes... NK is just as adorable


*looks around in case Avi sees*

I was never here

*runs away*

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: shay1990



LOOOL!... It's Ok, Avi can can NK and you, my lovely, can have Akash 🤗
Besudes... NK is just as adorable


*looks around in case Avi sees*

I was never here

*runs away*


Haha yasss! Thank you! 🤗
Yes yes NK is equally as cute! 😃

*goes back into hiding*
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Posted: 13 years ago


Di!!!!!
This was one of the fantastic updates till time,not that the others are not...
AKAASH!!!!! I Love You yaar...😳I Want to jump into BROKEN STRINGS and hug u right awayHis care for Khushi was so evident in the first half!
And from where the hell did that bloody F**ker come from?
awesome description for that guy too!😉
And Khushi... That poor soul! I was literally crying when I read that Part
The way she moved away when Akash touched her and the way she nodded her way in negative,The fear evident in her eys...A PORCELAIN DOLL she is...
The Arshi hug was picture-perfect and then the sudden dawning of that namesake anger and hatred...Di...U are one fabulous writer I must say!
And YAYY!!! Redemtion on its way!!
Arnav...come here baby...I know u are hell guilty for having done that even though unkowingly...

On the whole... A Stupendo Fantubulous update...👏👍🏼

Lots of love❤️
Yash
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ForeverArhi



Di!!!!!
This was one of the fantastic updates till time,not that the others are not...
AKAASH!!!!! I Love You yaar...😳I Want to jump into BROKEN STRINGS and hug u right awayHis care for Khushi was so evident in the first half!
And from where the hell did that bloody F**ker come from?
awesome description for that guy too!😉
And Khushi... That poor soul! I was literally crying when I read that Part
The way she moved away when Akash touched her and the way she nodded her way in negative,The fear evident in her eys...A PORCELAIN DOLL she is...
The Arshi hug was picture-perfect and then the sudden dawning of that namesake anger and hatred...Di...U are one fabulous writer I must say!
And YAYY!!! Redemtion on its way!!
Arnav...come here baby...I know u are hell guilty for having done that even though unkowingly...

On the whole... A Stupendo Fantubulous update...👏👍🏼

Lots of love❤️
Yash




THANK YOU SO MUCH YASH!!

Arnav is going repent like a bitch now 😈😆
But don't worry, i won't be too hard on him... He is our precious after all lol.
Once again, thank you so much... It's because I'm getting to good parts that's why i'm updating more quickly as well.
I'm so glad you're enjoying it, you know it means so much to me!

I love you Yash! 🤗
Shay X


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Posted: 13 years ago
had akash never come looking for them he wouldnt have been here to save khushi from that pervert
oh god i shudder to think what would have happened had he not come
she managed to get away from the man but he caught her and even sliced her throat a little
man am i glad that his rage had the correct intender
the way he bashed up that man for doing what he did to his best friend was what we expected of him
why didnt he realise how much trouble she could get into arnie that was too close for comfort

Edited by chavvi16 - 13 years ago

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