Originally posted by: sjain
OMG I should be apologizing first for commenting so late well but also you too completed this chapter in 52639874581975236 months HMPHH I know you got your exam sand all I understand but as a reader I have right to be angry with you so I am an thodi si..
Now coming to VV , this chapter , update..SIGH seriously I feel as if I have forgotten all the languages & feel so lost at this moment WOAH ..crazy I was dreading ..yeah you read it right HUH.. I was terrified when finally I decided to put my thoughts about this chapter ..From where to start & what to write ..I am so attached to this story that sometimes I feel frustrated when I want to read update but don't have anything to read & what makes it so addictive is that it is so painful passionate sad & heart breaking too ..I am sure I have told you this before as well but can't stop myself from metioning it again..your writing has become different so much more polished since the start of V&V..& I am glad with this..you have started expressing Armaan Ridhima in a much better way..every line of this update pained me but it was worth..in my mind I was like "OMG the way Asma is building the intensity of emotions in this story the confession of AR will be breathtaking HUGE something that will make every reader cry with happiness" *giggles* the self-confrontation scene of Ridhima was lovely , her miseries confusion..felt every bit of it..Even I am satisfied the way you are handling this case thing ..quite amusing *smirks* & bringing fun friendship moments in between adds humor in it.. good to see Rohan gelling well with gang..coming to AR moments simply blissful so soothing & full of love How I get carried away with them HAYEEE..the way Ridhima gets angry on Armaan is so cute I love it..But everytime when reality strikes either Armaan or Ridhima it hurts deeply..Best best part of the update I read that part quite a few times..AR terrace moment heart wrenching , soulful ..for a moment I felt he will spill the truth HUH.. He was so disturbed OUCH I really wanted a hot romantic moment ..Ermm may be something like Ridhima comforting Armaan & may be a kiss or so *grins* But you toh enjoy torturing me PSHT..But one thing I was awed by Armaan's self control *giggles*..AAH that back hug was MUAAH & their conversation touched my heart so sweet..I just hate when either of them cry UHH so upsetting & had tears in my eyes thinking her concern, care for Armaan such moments gives me such weird shitty feeling How a fiction story affects you I really wish she shares her feeling with someone SIGH ..That chair thing was DUHH what kismat mann..this is all so complex..their way of showing concern silently is so adorable..But anyway what ever happens I love how easily Ridhima gets back in to her usual self & was successful in stopping Armaan
DAMMNN lord I am sure you were not expecting this BIGG comment & even I was not expecting myself to write something like this *rolls eyes* HUH Ab bas I am tired now I need break TADAA Go update I ain;t commenting on next chapter anytime soon.
PS just a thought about new installment Why I have this feeling that Armaan will see her in this kissing position OOPPSS
OMG!!
Such a long review.
*Faint*
You are so right in saying that I didn't expect such a long comment from your side.I was expecting a long one but this one is really huge and I love you soo much for this darling.
You have got all the rights to be angry for the delay in updates yaar.But what to do.I want to pack all my professors in a spaceship and send them to Mars for a while so that I can take a breath of relief and update this ff on time.😆
I'm really overwhelmed right now Mahua.You have got me all emotional,you know.
The feelings that I experience when I read such beautiful reviews can't be explained in words.
I know that you love this ff a lot but reading this in your own words gives me an immense pleasure.
Thanks a lot for such a mindblowing review jana.😃
You seem to beso engrossed in the whole story.
It's nice to know that I managed to keep you on the edges at the terrace scene when Armaan was about to confess his feelings for her.
I'm happy to know that you loved Ridz's self-confrontation and are enjoying the fun-filled moments of the whole gang.
It's great to know that you even noticed the chair thing that showed AR's concern for each other.
I'm glad that you loved AR's convo and are enjoying all the tits and bits of this story.
Kindly stay tuned and keep motivating me like this with huge reviews.😉
Love u so much
Muah!
A warm hug from my side for such a lovely feedback.🤗
Take care!
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