VIRTUE & VICE#3[AR]P 16C-Moved to 4th thread - Page 105

Originally posted by: Luvforever

Jst read both d instlmnt & both r jst awsum & emotional... Both AR r suffering due to dis distance bt i was stunned wen ridz asked rohan to kiss her bt thnk u ki she dint let him... :) bt lst prt was it real or dream..?? Kyunki u wont give us confession so easily & wid armaan's accident no ways... Pakka dream hoga... Cont soon wanna knw aage...

Originally posted by: Rozy77

hey dear

sorry for the late reply, was busy with a few things

loved part B

gosh, it was long

loved the bonding between every1

the song n dance with ridz-rohan-armaan was nice

nikki's proposal was awesome

i feel sad for AR, as well as some mixed feelings. i wont say anything yet, lets see how the story goes and then il decide.

thanks for the pm

take care

Originally posted by: LilApple

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Originally posted by: youth_showsfan

hey asma

it was an amazing update

i kinda liked riddhima missing armaan

wud love to see a jealous ridzy

nd for once i want armaan to search someone for his wife

nd ridzy getting jealous minute by minute rofl

y armaan had to call

i was enjoying reading ridzy missing armaan

nd aawww d song sequence was amazing

nd well written

it even reminded me of few scenes f AR

eekkss the update was awesome

waiting for part c

update super soon

btw sorry for late comment i was into asya n QH forum😳

Originally posted by: teenorchid

enough of my excuses... now coming to the part... it ws superb asma... i dunno how u guys manage to write so awesomely that we actually cn relate to the characters in thee ff:.. thats the best thing. i cn feeel armaans pain nd havbe tears in my eyes tooo when they re crying. i get too involve in the storyyy...nd the credit goes to u my love...well doneee... yaaar ab kitna tarpao gi doo ko... pyar kitna dard deta haina...:p ek dosre k same ho k b rasmon k bandhan apko milne nahi dete. so feeel fr them... now plz unfold the mystery who is behnd ridz case?? nd plzzz ab inko aur mat rulaaooo..i no likes rohan cox he is too sweeet. uska dil toot jaye hga yaaar.kchhh karooo asmaaa

Originally posted by: Redrose21

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will edit soon :)

****Edited****
Finally!!!
I am Really Very Sorry for the late comment

Now coming to the part,
The rain song sequence was too gud..loved it
I have the same doubt too..doesn't ridz have any other colour in her wardrobe other than red??? bechaara armaan..what can he do if she always wears red 😆
Riddhima's concern for armaan *sigh* I am waiting for armaan to tell her what is his problem & what is it troubling him.i am eagerly waiting what will be her reaction when she comes to know what is worrying him.
The gang's dares were funny..especially armaan's dare to muskaan.how can she spend two whole days without cursing rahul? come on yaar, if she don't curse rahul atleast twenty times a day and keeps quiet without her typical laugh, how can it be Muskaan??
Why did such a dare came to anjali's mind? Gosh..couldn't she think of anything else? armaan's pain, ridz's fear & both their helplessness during the whole kiss act was very hurting..dont do this to them asma..its really very hurting :(
And rohan..i Really feel sorry for him..he is such a nice person..he respects her emotions & is not doing which makes ridz uncomfortable. dont know what will he do when he comes to know ridz cant love him Ever & her heart belongs to armaan.
Thanks for the sitting positions diagram of the gang..it helped in understanding their positions without any confusion :)
Ridz was getting jealous of armaan & niki's closeness..Jealous ridz is always cute to see..her confusions about armaan & niki was well written
The top dare was Nikki & Abhi's..I was laughing so much reading it..niki's proposal was unique & hilarious 🤣
And then comes the dare to Officer Armaan Mallik. uff...i didn't expect ridz will ask that question. I am eager to know what happened after the game that night
The pain that followed ridz's question & armaan's answer was heart wrenching..it left me in tears
why r u doing this to them? :(
Ridz is stuck between her best friend cum fiancee rohan, her family & the love of her life armaan. rohan is very concerned about her..the more i read of rohan's friendship with riddhima & his love for her, the more i feel sorry for him. But i cant help the doubt if he has any connection with ridz's drug case.
Where is armaan now? is he nearing the drug gang? hope he gets something very useful for the case. Armaan-atul's phone convo was nice..loved how atul made armaan understand
AR's phone convo in the end & the song was So Painful
i guess the confession is not in the near future..but pls atleast clear the misunderstanding between them soon.
Altogether i Loved the part..It was Very Well Written, especially AR's pain & helplessness. You are too gud in writing them. Keep up the Good work
Take Care Asma
Love u & Miss u 🤗
All the Best for ur studies 👍🏼


Lots of Love
Madura

Originally posted by: crazy4KASH_AR

new thread dekha Ish?
Do check NSDT as well.
I need u there.

Originally posted by: LilApple

new threat kaha

Originally posted by: crazy4KASH_AR

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