OS-MY BLESSED LOVE (MG)

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HEY BUDDIESS..BACK WITH ANOTHER OS..HOPE U LIKE IT..DO COMMENT...PLEASE...VERY NERVOUS..





~MY BLESSED LOVE~

Here is stand in colleage campus..moving towards the auditorium...my mood is already not good..i have not eaten anything...from 1 days..imagine 1 days..because of karvachaut...it doesnt mean i am married..i kept it for my love my maan...but the things is if he propose me..tahn only i will say yes for marriage but no..he is so shy...that haar baar he came to me..and due to nrevousness...he does something stupid...i wonder maan dreamy hota...like prince charming..mujhe saari duniya ke saamne propose karta...but the this i am expecting some things form maan singh khurana...and that is pretty too much..but yaar seriously i am craving for food...imagine geet handa..not able to eat...i said to him that i am keeping varat..he said no you are not doing such stupid thigs..i said are u scared of opening my varat in front of my family...he said no..but the reason is i am not there for that day...but being geet handa..how i can i back off with my words..i said i will keep it no matter what...till now he sholud have got information that i am fasting tll now..i know he will come...

iarre i forgot i have to go to auditorium..i entered the auditoruim...it was full...i was walking i centre..when i felt spot..i felt like a star..i thought that may be its wrongly done...but suddenly whole hall turned black..and only spotlight was on me..and light on big white screen...

i heard song..

lamha lamha doori yun pighalti hai

jaane kis aag mein yeh shabnam jalti hai

ho lamha lamha doori yun pighalti hai

jaane kis aag mein yeh shabnam jalti hai

khwaahishon ki shaam dhalti hain - 2

jaane kis aag mein yeh shabnam jalti hai

la la la ...

then i saw my photo..playing with orphan children...someone some spoke

"their was a girl...her eyes were magical...i first saw her..i n an orphan..i was their because of some work..but when i eyes fall on her...i was totally blown off...she was wearing pink kurti and jeans...and playing catch and catch with children...i was totally lost in her eyes...i felt strange...when i saw a self-less person like her..totally lost in the children..i saw child falling..i saw her worried..like she has some type of great bonding with them..she took him to nurse..and was hell-worried for his health..i wonder does these type of girls exist??...so pure,so kind, so self less...i went away..but she had something..which made me fall for her"

teri aankhen dikhati haihamein sapanen sitaaron keho ho hotere hothon pe likha haijo tum bole ishaaron meinho ho hokhwaabon ke karwaan mein raat chalti haijaane kis aag mein yeh shabnam jalti hainla la la...

i saw second photo..it was when...i was fighting with vegetable man..

i heard the voice say " i saw her again...near the signal stop...she was sitting on her scooty and mummuring some song..suddenly her eyes went to the vegetable man..who was weighing some vegetable..her made her scooty stand and went near the vegetable man..she saw him curiously...i really wondered what happened to her...i saw the lady who was their to buy vegetable not able to understand her...i saw her signally the vegetable man...about the weigh...the vegetable man..was sweating..like he was caught..i looked her as she took out the magnet near one end..i smiled...the lady was very angry and so was she...the lady thanked her..and she went near her scooty..how selfless and pure she was...she shared no relation to that lady..but still she helped her...and i went away"

behakti shaam aayi haitujhe lekar ke baahon meintujhe chhu loon ke rakhu mainchhupakar ke nigaahon meinsharmati ithlaati hai machalti haijaane kis aag mein yeh shabnam jalti hainho lamha lamha doori yun pighalti haijaane kis aag mein yeh shabnam jalti haikhwaahishon ki shaam dhalti hain - 2jaane kis aag mein yeh shabnam jalti haila la la ...

i saw next photo of my cousin sister marriage...and my playfull act their...

i heard " and i meet her again...in my cousin marriage..she was there...playing her trick..her naughty trick..that was the first time i talked to her..her voice was magical...she tricked me..she made me sit on papar...and they laughed...but i was totally lost in her magial laugh..she said sorry and went away and slowly and slowly we became friends...and she fell in love with me..and i tho always loved her...i love u geet..will u marry me...marry ur maan??"

i didnt know this part of story..i felt so blessed ..i thought i am also great..but after knowing him..i felt so so small in front of his love...and this was my "blessed love"..i nooded in tears..he came to me and hugged me and whispred "i always loved u geet"...and he took out a choclate from pocket and broke my fast and said "sry...meri vajah se u have to kep this fast.." i knw he was guilty..but no mistake of his..he said not to keep this fast..but i kept..i kept my hand on his mouth and nooded negatively...we heard a plause from the people present their...i here i am so happy...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thnx for the pm dear
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nyc os...

But me confused whts there for geet to feel soo small infront of his love??

He just proposed her nothing gr8 isint it?!
Its not like he sacrificed his life 4 her...

Apart for tht line i like the rest of story
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Its very cute.Just simple theme but lots to say.How Maan proposes Geet in front of gathering that was too good.And pictures it means he clicked her every time she did some thing unusual.He was secretly in liv now openly.Love u for this lovely work



Lov U


Tamanna ki smiley for u from me.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Beautiful OS.
Loved it.
Thanks for PM.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wah isha muaah for ths os..it was simple yet beautiful..hayee maan proposd her in auditorium explaining their meeting,geet kept vrat 4m hm n finally broke it..also proposd 4 marriage..waise chocolatd dairy milk thi kya?he he he
lookng 4 ward 4 mre such wrks
love u
mona
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow!that was so cute...
Loved the way he proposed geet..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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superb os

loved it

thankx for pm


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