ArHi OS | Two Bullets

rishaaa---!!! beautifully written ya!!!😊 loved it

beautiful OS!!!a very sad one sure but still really well written...loved how you have expressed his thoughts especially the quoting from the heer-ranjha fits in perfectly...
loved how you shown khushi smiling even when she is in a critical condition...
and the irony of red being his then fav color on diwali but now him hating it was also very well done!!
loved it!!!:D

Awww..tht was heart wrencing but beautifully written👏👏 fabulous piece of work.. LOVED it!!!!

awsum... 👏👏👏 its really remarkable to pen down these emotions so beautifully 👍🏼 very touching ...

luved it😊

Beautiful & Heart Wrenching OS!😭👏

Beautiful and heart-touching!!!

so beautiful nd a heart wrenching piece of writing 👏
could imagine arnav's nd khushi's emotions 😭
bravo

Originally posted by: -Siaa-

Beautiful and heart-touching!!!

The pain, the agony of Arnav...poor guy!!

The last lines of it were THE amazing and not only in this but in most of your writings, the last few lines or might be the concluding's are just amazing!! not that I dont like the former part, they are equally good but the concluding lines..dil ko chu jata hai!!!

P.S all the best for your history test.. :) reminded me of those days when I used to rack my brains to get all the things into my brain!!!

Thankyou so much =) Well I really try to make the ending the best of all-because endings is what makes the reading complete so I am really glad you like the conclusions :D Lol thankyou I really need it right now =/ Hahaha thats what I am trying right now😆

i just dont have words!