ArHi OS | Two Bullets

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Mahi

@Mahi1219

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+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#41

Wonderful OS! I really loved the part at the end! Great job! Thanks for the PM!

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ilive2laugh

@ilive2laugh

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Posted: 13 years ago

#42

oh so heart wrenching

i hope there is part 2 of it

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craziefan

@craziefan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#43

very very beautiful!!! Loved it!! U write really well!!!Oh btw thanks for the pm!! :D

and could U please continue it.. Pleasee!!!!

Edited by craziefan - 13 years ago

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Gunjan Mukherjee

@gunjanmkj

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#44

One bullet to clench his heart
one bullet to tear it apart
Two bullets,worded his tale
Two bullets,where words might fail.
Because when she was there,he had shown the hate which never was
And when she wasn't there.he showed the love which always had been---i dnt knw wat to say..m stunned!!!all d praises will fall short..these last lines broke d boundary of my tears whch i had been holdin frm d beginning of dis os..😔
amazing use of the heer-ranjha dialogue..cdnt hv been more appropriate..
unbelievable dat khushi was smiling evn in dis situation..
d irony was heart-wrenching😔
it was sad..bt vry well written..

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irene

@rennie

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#45

beautiful os...its so sad...hope nothing of this sort happens on tv...

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@debby_11

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#46

that was so so so awesome...so touching..

really heart wrenching..

lovely piece of work :)

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Moonlight1

@Moonlight1

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Posted: 13 years ago

#47

Awesomely sad OS.😭

RIsha I can't take sad things. It makes me cry uncontrollable.

Anyway, well written.👏

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BlueMystique

@BlueMystique

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#48

Heart wrenching, yet beautiful!

I loved the simplicity of it, and how you drew a connection between his mom's death and Khushi's.

I loved the last line, I hope that would never apply to ArHi. I want both of them alive and well when they realize their love😊