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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey Hiiie Riya read this FF
n sorry dear for late commenting.
ohh, what veer have done😲
But I have doubt ...I don't think veer did anything...this could be probability dat That Bitch Tanya lied.just wanted to make veer blackmail..😡
Hope so aisa hi ho
par veer ki halat pe bahut bura lag raha hai
poor Veer 😭 n bcoz of Veer's behaviour , Neha bhi dukhi hai
n Hight Veer forgot His Neha's B'day
This only Bcoz of That Tanya...
...waiting for happy moments return back to our dearest Veer-Neha's life
update soon
love u
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sonalimurat

Hey Hiiie Riya read this FF

n sorry dear for late commenting.
ohh, what veer have done😲
But I have doubt ...I don't think veer did anything...this could be probability dat That Bitch Tanya lied.just wanted to make veer blackmail..😡
Hope so aisa hi ho
par veer ki halat pe bahut bura lag raha hai
poor Veer 😭 n bcoz of Veer's behaviour , Neha bhi dukhi hai
n Hight Veer forgot His Neha's B'day
This only Bcoz of That Tanya...
...waiting for happy moments return back to our dearest Veer-Neha's life
update soon
love u

thank u sona for such a sona sona comment😃
loved ur comment dear
yeah will ud very soon
love u too
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: tejjo

rashuuu🤗

i love u yr
thank u so much for such a sweet n lovely comment
i just love ur comment
n itni gaaliyaan sunkar tanya mar hi jayegi im damn sure😉
love u



but di vo maregi kabb...??
i hate her..

plz jaldi maaro usse.
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Posted: 12 years ago
part 72

veer kissed her forehead n gently slid her hand which clutched his arm n moved outside the room...after sometime she opened her eyes feebly n searching him next to her-''veer''she immediately got up n shocked to saw her room decorated with flowers n boutiques everywhere floor blowing with red balloons...she loved the lily n jasmine flowers which lying next to her side with a card she opened with a cute smile n her smile widened more to saw a note in card-''sorry jaan belated happy birthday...love u''she gain looked at window n doors but not found him...she stood up n walked towards the balcony when he hugged her from behind-''u like my surprise..''she nodded with smile-''very much love u too..yeh sab karne ki kya jarurat thi ek red rose de dete to bhi im more than happy''he kissed her forehead-''its important kyunki u r very special for me or mein apni special wife ka birthday bhool gya to punishment to milni chahiye na ..bolo kya karna h mujhe''she pulled his cheek lovingly-''u r so cute...u r best hubby in the world''

veer gave her a side hug-''n u r the best wifey in the world''she tightly hugged her...veer pulled his head back-''any punishment for me''she looked at him-''umm veer kuch din se tum bhot pareshaan ho na shayad isliye tum mera birthday bhi bhool gye...any problem ''veer boggled n looked at her with fake smile-''no nothing aisa kuch bhi nhi h''she nods conceedly -ok fine ab tyaar ho jao office ke liye late ho jayoge''

veer smiled at her again fakely ..he struggled with many of negative n positive thoughts he want to tell her whole story after all she was his wife she understand everything n forgive him..she trusted her alot but what he had done he just shattered their life by doing just a silly mistake..he remembered her words-''agar aisa hua to mein apni jaan de dungi''which made him weak even more than before...neha put his clothes on bed n looked at him confusedly-''veer office nhi jaana kya or han office jaane se pehle tanya ko airport chod dena''her name made him looked at her-''what??/tanya wapas ja rhi h''

neha made her face-''wo nhi ja rji meine uski tickets book kara di usse ab yaha e chale jana chahiye h na''veer thought for a while n went to washroom

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sapna packed her stuff quickly -''tanya apna dhyaan rakhna agar koi problem ho to mujhe phone kar dena k''tanya standing near the window-''u also want na ki mein yaha se chali jaun''

sapna put her hand on her shoulder-''no i don't but tumhi socho koi nhi chahta ki tum yaha raho aise kya tum khush ho yaha or wiase bhi nhi chahti ki meri married life me koi problem aaye u know rudra bhot upset h mujhse''

tanya looked at her angrily-''sabko sirf apni padi h or mera kya mom dad ne bhi mujhe accept nhi kiya ab tum bhi''sapna locked her bags-''lekin sab ki responsible tumhi ho tannu...kuch din ke liye london chali jao mein mom dad ko samjhungi wo maan jayenge n fir tum wapas aa jana''

neha came inside the room sapna looked at her-''neha tanya ki tickets kaha h ein usse airport chod kar aati hun''neha gave it to her while smiling-''here''

sapna-''tanya jaldi niche aa jao mein tumhara samna car mein rakhwati hun''n made her way to outside leaving them alone...tanya looked at with rage-''tum apne aap ko sakjhti kya ho aise tum yaha se nhi nikal sakti na hi is ghar se na hi veer ki life se''

neha ignored her moved outside when she said-''tumhe bhot proud h na ki veer loves u but he still loves me..n poof is that ki he slept with me''this made her stp...she looked at with wide eyes...tanya came towards her with a smirk-''yeah he loves me...tum sab log jab pooja me gye the na that day he slept with me or ab yeh baat mein sabko btaungi aunty ko uncle ko dhruv n rudra ''neha slapped her-''how dare u''tanya put her hand on cheek-'mujhe pata tha ki tum meri baat ka vishwass nhi karogi to thik h veer se hi puch lo jaakar''neha stared at her angrily-'just shut ur mouth mein tumhari kya bhagwaan ki baat par bhi vishwass nhi karungi veer kabhi aisa nhi kar sakta ''tanya smiled wickedly -''lekin usne aisa kiya h ''neha looked at her-''which type of girl u r...i don't believe ki koi apne childhood frnd ke saath aisa kar sakta h...tanya or kitna girogi tum...u r just immpossible...accha h veer ne kabhi tumse pyaar nhi kiya accha ki veer ki shaadi tumse nhi hui u r such a ''n she stopped

tanya crapped with her words-''meine kuch nhi kiya jo kiya tumne kiya veer mujhse pyar karta tha but tum bich me aa gyi mujhe veer ko chinn liya tumne...he always loves ab bhi he loves me''with moist eyes-''or agar nhi karta hota to us raat ko wo mere saath''neha interrupted -''just shut up tanya ''when veer came to room n looked both of them-''tanya come mein tumhe airport chod deta hun''tanya came towards him n hugged him while crying-''veer mujhe kahi nhi jana ''veer looked at neha which staring at her questionably veer pulled tanya-''tanya listen to me dekho''tanya-''veer neha ko btao ki us din kya hua tha ...''veer shocked n walked towards her-''tum jana chahti thi na ki kya baat thi yahi baat thi us raat kya hua mujhe kuch yaad nhi h i don't remembered anything''

tears made her way through her eyes..which hurt him..he tried to wiped her tears but she stepped back..veer moved towards her-''neha meri baat to suno dinner karne ke baad kiya hua mujhe yaad nhi h''he said with pleading yes-''pls listen me tumhe lagta h ki mein aisa kar sakta hun''neha looked at him n wiped her tears-''tumne dinner kiya tha???''veer nodded with concern-''han but tum aisa kyun puch rhi ho..dinner kiya tha meine n then thoda headche hua or uske baad kya hua mujhe kuch yaad nhi h''neha smiled n hugged him-''i love u veer mujhe pata h tum kabhi aisa nhi kar sakte ''veer pulled her face-''i love u too '

tanya fuming with anger-''veer but i remembered everything us din ''neha came forward n crashed a tight slap on her face-''just shut up pehle mujhe vishwass tha veer aisa kuch nhi kar sakta but ab mujhe yakin h ki usne aisa kuch nhi kiya .''veer glared at neha confusedly

tanya moved towards the veer-''veer pls aisa mat karo kaho usse ki us din we slept together ..tum hi btaoab kaun mujhe shaadi karega kaun accept karega mujhe''veer turned his face annoyingly

tanya looked at him angrily -''ok fine ...''she moved towards neha-''ab tumhare husband par mein case file karungi ki he raped me''neha utter-''he raped u kaise neend me??''this made veer shocked n tanya looked at her surprisingly

neha continued-''veer ke dinner me mene neend ki tablets mix ki thi ...taaki wo rat bhar kaam na kare wo 3 tablets thi isliye usse headache hua or tumne uska fayda uthaya ab tumhi btao veer ke sone baad usne tumhara rape kaise kiya''

tanya sweating badly n stammred-'yeh sab juth h''

neha-''dekho tanya agar 2 minute mein tum yaha se nhi nikali to mein tumhare upar case file karungi or is baar tumhari di bhi tumhari help nhi karegi choice is urs''tanya wiped her sweat n left the room quickly

veer hugged her from behind-''thank u ...n im sorry mujhe tumhe sab bata dena chahiye tha''neha turned to looked at him-''tum lagta tha ki mein tumhe akele chodkar chali jayungi h na isliye tumne mujhe kuch nhi btaya''veer nodded hesitatingly-'yeah ''

neha rested her head against his chest-''veer tumhe chodkar kaise jaa sakti hun mein tum kahoge tab nhi jayungi kabhi nhi''veer smiled n surprisingly pulled his head-''by the way tumne mere dinner mein neend ki tablets kyun mix ki this''

neha chuckled-''wo isliye kyunki jab tum nhi hote to tum apna bilkul dhyaan nhi rakte''veer grinned-''ok dr neha malhotra...umm tumhe fir se hospital join kar lena chahiye''

neha with a broad smile-''hmm...but veer shaadi ke baad badi maa ne sapna di ko hospital jaane nhi diya to mujhe allow karengi kya??''

veer-''mein baat karunga ma se''n hugged her

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after 2 days

everyone busy in their daily routine ...veer dhruv n rudra returned from the jogging n went to their room for freshen up...all the ladies were busy in kitchen n diya sleeping in her room...

neha went to her room with tea..she opened her doors gently n saw her messed room-''oh god bilkul veer ki behen h yhe ladki''she put the cup on table n managed her things one by one when she saw a pic which lying on floor..she saw the pic-''yeh kaun h ???ek ladke ki photo diya ke room me ??''she put it in book n moved towards her-''diya jaldi utho jaldi''she got up lazily-''gdmg bhabhi''neha gve her tea-''kaun h wo''

diya surprisingly-''kaun??''neha smirkly-''jo tumhare sapno me aata h roj''diya widened her eyes-''bhabhi aap kiski baat kar rhi ho''

neha-''tumhe nhi pata accha tell me uska naam kya h''

diya while blushing-''vishal''neha chuckled-''nice name u liked him''

diya nodded hesitatly -''hmmm''

neha-''u love him ''she nodded again lowered her eyes neha embraced her-''congratualtion baby so u r in love ''diya giggled-''bhabhi ''

neha-''he loves u na''diya nodded again-''han obviously ''neha grinned-''just joking baba ok mein veer ko btati hun han fir tum dono ka band bajenge''

diya shocked-''what??''

neha pat her head-''shaadi ka band ''n about to move when diya hugged her tighlty-''i love u bhabhi u r so sweet ''neha smiled-''u too very sweet abhi ready ho jao colg ke liye''n left the room''


veer combed his hairs when he saw her through mirror..she entered in the room n looked at him-''aise kyun dekh rhe ho pehli baar dekha h kya??''

veer smirked-''u looked more beautiful everyday to mein kya karu""neha hugged him-''i want to tell u something..veer looked at soft lips''"'what"'

she about to open her mouth when he kissed her lips..her eyes got widened-''umm''veer smiled while kissing..she pulled him back-''veer tum bhi na''veer giggled she made her face-''i hate u''

veer grasped her hand-''really ''he continuously gazing into her eyes which made her blush-''veer tum mujhe naaraz bhi nhi hone dete ho u r too bad''veer laughed n kissed her lips again
then they listen some noises came from the sapna n rudra's room..neha tried to free herself but he tightened his grip..neha -''veer chodo na ''veer frowned-''koi romance bhi nhi karne deta h''n they walked towards rudra room

veer neha shocked to saw rudra lying on bed n sapna hit him by pillows,flower vases,boxes but somehow he escaped by her attacks one by one''

neha tried to stopped her n veer silently sat next to rudra-''aaj kya kiya tumne manthra banke''rudra wince n nudged veer-''shut up veer mene kuch nhi kiya wo bas ...''veer continued his line-''bas bas ..''

on the other hand neha tried to console her relaxed her but sapna made her face...dhruv n pooja also approached them..-''kya hua''

pooja looked at sapna-''sapna are u ok''while dhruv looked at rudra -''aisa lag rha tha jaise koi pit rha ho ??he said while looking at him wickedly

rudra-''mein pit nhi rha tha''veer said quickly-''han rudra pit nhi rha bach rha tha from attacks right??dhruv n rudra giggled under his breath...rudra growled at them-''ab who playing the role of manthra here u both''he pouted

veer n dhruv giggled again

pooja -''kya hua sapna tell me\\''

sapna made a puppy face-''pooja neha tum hi btao kya mein itni moti ho gyi hun ki ek elephant ki ride lene se wo mar jayega...''veer n dhruv burst into laughter n rolled down on floor...pooja n neha also laughed but after seeing her face they somehow controlled their laughter n gave stern look to veer n dhruv...they also stopped but after a while again they burst into laughter ...

sapna looked at them n made a sad face..pooja cupped her face-''sapna kisne kah tumse aise tum bilkul bhi fatty nhi lag rhi u r beautful as usual''this create a soft smile on her face-''thank u pooja yeh dhruv hmesha kam mein busy hota h aaj mene kaha ki beech par gumne chalte h saath me dinner karenge ..but he said no to me i hate u''by looking at rudra...

n she continued-''mene itne din se riding bhi nhi ki mene kaha ki mujhe elephant ki ride karni to rudra ne kaha ki me itni moti hun ki bichara elephant bhi mar jayega''once again dhruv n veer laughed at rudra's condition

rudra hit them with cushions ...n they tried to escaped fro it

pooja-''koi baat nhi rudra ne mazak me kaha hoga h na rudra''rudra looked while smiling-''han wahi to mein kehne ki koshish kar rha tha itni der se but tumne suna hi nhi''

sapna turned her face pooja staring at rudra-''jao sapna k dinner ke liye lekar jao n no work today samjhe''rudra got up from the bed n came closer to her-'pakka aaj koi kaam nhi karunga ok fine''sapna looked at him-''riding bhi karenge''rudra nodded n everyone felt relaxed

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veer-''neha ''she came quickly from the kitchen-''kya hua''veer gave phone to her sonia ..neha smiled-''hello sonia tumne to kaha tha ki tum 2 din baad hi india aa jaogi but abhi kitne din ho gye h kab aogi tum apne fiance ko bhi lekar aana han tum kab aa rhi''sign at last she breath...veer looked at her n chuckled-''use bolne to do''

sonia-''neha hum india aa gye h shaam tak mansion phuch jayenge don't worry or han karan bhi mere saath hi h''

neha felt awkward to listened his name-''karan???ur fiance''she said yes-''han karan or mein dono shaam ko aa rhe h ok''

neha disconnect the phone but thought something-''karan..kahi wo karan hi to nhi h jo''veer put the phone-''ab thik h na ho gyi baat''

neha-''koi or bhi to ho sakta h na''veer cupped her face-''kya hua mein kuch puch rha hun tumse''

neha-''han its ok mujhe kuch btana h tumne diya is in love with someone''veer shocked-''what??''

neha smiled-''hmm his name is vishalll''veer -''vishall yeh naam to suna h mene''

neha-''mere pass uska photo h''she showed to him by seeing him he tore his photo n said angrily-'fir se iske baare mein mujhe koi baat nhi sunni ''

neha-''lekin ver she loves him''veer-''no...kabhi nhi diya use pyaar nhi kar sakti wo diya ke layak nhi u don't know ki kis tarah ka ladka h wo mein jaanta hun usse''

neha-''but wo''veer stopped her-''mene kaha na uske baare mein koi baat nhi ''

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precap

karvachauth special

''veer leave me na koi dekh lega''he kissed her neck n removed her hairs from the cheek-''tum kuch nhi kar sakti tumhare hatho me mehndi lagi h na''he smirked


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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow its awesome update abd loved the way neha had fought with tanya and her trust in veer..
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Posted: 12 years ago
NEHA NEHA NEHA NEHA...! Shittt... I Love Her,

NEER! What a Lovely, Romantic, Cutest, Understanding Husband-Wife ;

Just Made 4 Each Other,

NEER! The Perfact Jodi!

N The full credit goes to you... Riya Di,

Thank you so much... 4 giving us Neer!

Ish update ka comment serf Neer k naam,

unki aj tak ki journey bohat enjoy kia hum sabhi readers ne n hum bilkul ready ha aur bhi enjoyment k liye...

Kisi ki jaan bachate huye dono k car wapas mein takraya...dekhte hi dekhte dono do dil ek jaan bangeye!

Lekin yeh rah nehi thi asaan,bohat muskilein aye,dene parhe bohat saare imtehaan,ferbi dono ne kabhi nehi choda ekdusre ka saath!

Kabhi kisi k beta beti kabhi kisi k bhai behen kabhi kisi k dost saheli kabhi kisi k dewar dewrani kabhi kisi k damad bahu tho kabhi kisi k jiju bhabi Bankar NEER ne rakha har ek Rishtein ka Maan, Pati-Patni bankar dono ne apne aap ko kia ekdusre ko Samarpan,

Safar aage aur bhi ha, muskilein bhi kahan hui ha khatam, rishtein ab banenge kuch neye, dekhte hai ab legi konsi moor,

NEER ki kahani HUMTUM
Edited by Arpimugfan - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
this was an awesomely awesome update...
Humari Neha kitni smart hai...evil Tanya se Veer ko bacha liya
And Sapna..Rudra...part was sooo funny!!
Hmmm...ab yeh Vishal kaun hai??
And Karan wapas...
Loved the romance
great update...eagerly waiting for next update
Cont soon
lov u...
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Posted: 12 years ago
ou la la superb part riya
tanya chipkali ka chapter khatam,i m proud of u neha,ise kehte h bhartiya nari,waise toh sati savitri abla nari but zarurat pade toh sab pe bhari :-D
n rudra-sapna part was too hilarious...*manthara*...*koi pit raha tha*...*pit nahi bach raha tha*...*haathi mar jayega*...ha ha ha maza a gaya by god
n this @&%#*$ karan is back god ek prob. solve nahi hoti dusri a jaati h n veer knew this vishal gud for diya n nice precap
update soon
luv u :-)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thanks 4 pm dear nd loved it but was unable to comment 4m cell nd thanks once again 4 all pms
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Posted: 12 years ago

O jjii!

Aaj mei bhott ache mood mei hun..

So plzz..

Lets hav a party sharty….disco deewne, aahaa!!...

Tintokali chali gyi, wow!...vmp chali gyi..though temporarily..

But chali tho gyi…!!phewww!...

Tintokali chali jaa,

Baaj gya tera baja..

Na aioo vapas kabhi..

Nafratt karte h tujse sabhi..

Wah wah! Kya poem banai h meine…

Tintokali u r so lucky – d rashmi the poet ne tumpr poem banai..

Wowdi, aapko pata h, neha band bajaying tintokali scn meine kitne baar padha.. ek dum spirit mei padha…

Neha- kya bahadur biwi…

Phewww!.. chalo veer ki dinner ki tablets ki vajah se veer is safe.

Tintokali, sachi mei aur kutna giti by god..she is a black bada wala dhabba on name on a girl.

S@@LI, H@R@M!...K*T!Y@...bitch,

Pheww!.. but di ye tho galat baat h- ek daayan gyi tho do do danavo ki entry ho rahi h- VISHAL N KARAN…

Haaye!

Di, tintoakli ko aapne daant paadvayi..

Neha n veer ka romance diya.

Ek funny rudra sapna scn diya…

Lekin vishal n karan ka naam include karke sab per paani pheerr diya.

Haye!..sab gud gobar ho gya…

Its mixxy mixxy update- sad, happy.

Lovely poassionate..

Veer cnt resist neha , so sweet na! belated happy bday hoa uss tintoakli ki vajah se.

Baharupiya vishal n lost property local raddi quality karan…

O no!

But ye galat baat h- sapna n neha dono docs ghar per h- hospital mei patient ka dhyaan kaun rakhega.

Oops!..rudra, I knw mei hamehsa tumhari team mei hoti hun,. But dats not gud..

Tum ladke, agr hum ladkiyaan hodi sib hi cellutite le leti h tho cmnt karte ho, n khudd thok thok ker khate ho… :P

Kya naaisaafi h :p

Lovely shovel ud di, thnx fr it.

Lov u, miss u

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