HUMTUM (RTMC FF) COMPLETED... - Page 3

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Posted: 13 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: sweetsanyo

reso jii... (shivji)


hum h chalak bacha...

di, tpic main no. 2 bhi mention karo.
cofusion ho raha h

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i noe sabse pehle rs kiya tha
n sabse last main editd kr rhi hoon...

sry di,
mujhe yaad tha ki mujhe karna h unres, but bar bar kisi ka phn yah phirr koi kaam aa raha tha.

ud ws as usual sooperbo jii
maaze aa gye

i love neha ki voh kudh hi phn karti h n then kudh hi baat bhi karti h, veer se mahnat bhi nhi karwati h
phn kaat deti h.

sachi kaha red hi accha lagega...
mc pr sab jachta h
she is so perfect for evrythng thing , especially veer...

thn baari h,
veer ki shaitaani ki-

tho ek baar bolni h issi pr.-

''bade shaitaan ho tum, but neha ki jaan ho tum!''

last scene, uff, kya kr diyaa aapne di,

aap sab di's milkr is bachi ko bigad rahe ho bol rhi hoon main riya di aapse...

thnx di for sauc a wondo ud
ud soon
lov u

thanks rashu dear for ur lovely n very first comment on this new thread😃
loved ur comment😛

keep commenting on maa ff 😆will update soon dear

luv u
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Posted: 13 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: geetap

congratulations for the new thread 👏

thanks dear😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: glossyglassy

1st of all congrats on ur 2nd thread!

the update was awesome...
I have always loved Neer's phone convos...love the way how Neha starts talking the moment Veer picks up the phone...and then tells him tum kuch bol kyun nahi rahe..ANd Veer is like tum bolne kahan deti ho...too good!👏
And this time Nivi pickd his phone...Neha's reaction was too funny😆
And of course the romance was sooo cute and mushy...😳
thx for PM
Luv u...😃
P.S I suggest u post the link to this thread on ur 1st thread also...in case ppl miss ur Pm...then also they will be able to find the new thread!

thanks dear for ur beautiful comment

loved it😃
lov u too
thanks for suggestion dear..abhi karti hun😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: geetap

thanks dear for updating...awesome update, continue soon

thanks dear...will update soon😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: dhwanimehta23

Congrats for the new thread!!!!!
Very Romantic Update!!!!

thanks dear for ur comment😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: SonaliDhone

congrats dear for your New thread

thanks dear😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: shruja

congratulation for 2nd thread!!
loved beautiful journey of Veer-Neha continuing!!

thanks dii for ur comment😛
love u😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
#28

Originally posted by: ridzzi

first of all congo n a big hug for the new thread...🤗

loved the update...👏
poor veer got tired n neha is asking about her dress...poor veer koi sone bhi nahi deta...😆
n neha u r caught...nivi ki voice sune ke baad neha ki condition...by god...😆
n veer didn't pay any attention to that chipkali...o poor chipkali...waise us chipkali ko make up karne ki zarurat nahi...u know why...couz wo gusse se hi itna lal ho jaati hai ki use kisi aur cheez ki zarurat hi nahi ...aur neha ko bhi nahi...wo bas ek baar veer ki taraf dekh le...aur wo waise hi lal ho jayegi...😉
n yes neha is right veer is getting naughty day by day...😉
continue soon...
luv u...😊

meri taraf se bhi ek bada ala hug🤗
loved ur comment...thanks for ur comment😃
will update soon
luv u too
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Posted: 13 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: SonaliDhone

first of All

Congrats Riya 👏 👏 👏

now about the First update on the very first page of your second thread which is continuosly entertaining us from the first thread of your most Romantic and our one of the favourate FF " HUMTUM "
really thank you dear for making such a beautiful and cute story
Now update
very very very Nice update 👏
loved it thoroughly 😛
today's update is soo Romantic
thaks for starting it from Shaddi session
I m waiting for to start shadi
because I knew from begning " shadi ka Mauhol " means lots of fun
n sweet moments of Neer we gonna see
hey vo madst tha bichari Neha apne dress ko lekar itni confuse thi ...
Red .. Blue ... Green ...nahi Green nahi ..di ko pasand nahi ...isko pasand nahi ...usko pasand nahi
ufff 🥱
par akhir kar pehna to veer ki pasand ka hi na 😉
ooops mother- in- law ne phone uthaya 😲
jara puch leti kaun h ...😆
loved their scene in her Room
It's so much...😳 😳 😳
update soon
waiting
love u ⭐️

thanks dear for ur beautiful comment😳
will update soon
luv utoo
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Posted: 13 years ago
#30

Originally posted by: rashi.rose

Ayee Hayee What a LOVELY update yaar:-):-) BEAUTIFUL:-):-) I LOVED IT:-):-) I m your fan now dear Your Writing style is jus SUPERB:-):-) The Dialogs are AMAZING:-):-)

thanks dear for liking maa story...
love u😳

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