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Posted: 13 years ago
part 55

as he embraced her from behind her heart skipped for a sec...she quickly turned to saw him-''veer dara diya tumne mujhe''

he smiled n tugged her in his arms-''meri jaan mujhse hi darr gyi..koi baat nhi mein abhi darr ko bhaga deta hun''he kissed her cheeks n about to kiss her lips when she pulled him back-''veer mujhe pooja karni h''

he gazed her lovingly while she arrange her thali...she was very happy today n he knew that...her face glowed more becoz of happiness n joy..
she did his aarti followed by tilak on his forehead...n touched his feet when he moved backward-neha kya kar rhi ho''he lifted her...

she smiled-''tum mujhe aashirwaad nhi doge'''he kissed her forehead-''tumhe yeh sab karne ki koi jarurat nhi h''

neha-''ok chalo ab khana kha lo''

they sat on chairs she looked at him n put a bite in his mouth-''tumne subah se kuch nhi khaya na''he looked at her strangely-''tumhe kaise pta''

she fed him-''sab pta h mujhe tumne mere liye fast rakha na''he smiled-''han meine socha try karta hun'she smiled with tears-''veer''

he came nearer n fed her with his hands-''tum mere liye itna sab karti ho to mein tumhare ek din bhuka nhi reh sakta''she embraced him..veer pecked her tightly in his arms...


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wo apne aap ko samajhti kya h mujhe ghar se nikal diya idiot''tanya said to herself while gulping whole bottle-''i just hate her wo mujhe ghar se to nikal sakti h par veer ki jindagi se nhi...kabhi nh''

she drink one after another when agni came with his friends...agni saw her n went nearer-tanya tum yahan kya kar rhi ho''she turned n saw veer standing front of her...she felt very happy n embraced-'mujhe pta tha ki tum jarur aoge''he was surprised..she continue-'' i love u''

he was very happy n embraced her-''tanya tum mujhse pyaar karti ho mujhe laga ki tum she stopped him-''han mein tumse pyar karti hun par tum to us neha se pyaar karte ho na''

he was little comfused n thought about her girlfriends-''yeh neha kaun h ...who cares ???

agni-''mein kisi neha se pyaar nhi karta tanya''she smiled n kissed him

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veer gazed at her lovely face when she shyly smiled n moved...but he grasped her hand...he put her hairs a side on the shoulder slid the diamond necklace around her neck..she surprisingly looked at it n smiled happily-''its so beautiful''he put his face on her shoulder-''ab or bhi beautiful ho gya h''

he kissed her shoulder n neck...she felt nervous n closed her eyes -''veer'he turned her towards him n kissed her closed eyes..she embraced him...he tugged her tightly from her waist...she felt more protected in his arms...she smelled his aroma n kissed his exposed part of chest from the shirt...he smiled n pulled her more closer...he kissed her hairs followed by ear n temple...she curved her hands around his back...he pulled her face to saw her...n kissed her rosy lips...this was long n passionate kiss...she also participate in the kiss n kissed his lips gently...he remove her hairs from her cheeks n kissed her lips again

after sometime they shared a wet kiss...he kissed her face with shower of small small kisses...soon he reached at her neck...he kissed her neck n chin...she enjoyed his every kiss but felt nervous with his touch...he moved his hands towards her back...


she clutched his shirt tightly...he looked at her eyes...she smiled n said-''kya dekh rhe ho''he put his palm on her face-''u look beautiful today''

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Posted: 13 years ago
Res me first me first
itno dino baad first aakar I m feeling much better 😛
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Update is very nice loved it
and very Romantic also😳 😳
Hayee Loved Veer - Neha's scenes
n I told u na Veer also kept fast for Neha .look my predection become true 😃
Mere n Tumhare thinking kitni milti julti hai na ...Same Pinch ⭐️
n That Tanaya n Agni dono milkar jarur kuch khichdi pakayenge Veer n Neha k khilaf 😡
Do Do Dusham ek sath .God save that from that evils
Veer brought Necklece for Neha 😛 N the moment after that was ☺️
update soon
love u ⭐️
Edited by SonaliDhone - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
chalo ji, sonali di 1st, tho hum second...

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yeh tho bhott chota chinnu minnu tha...
di yeh kya,
poora romance bhi nhi dekhaya..
aise point pr na kiya karo bandh plz...
dil tut jata h, ab main yahi sochti rahungi ki aagr kya hoga,
padai kaun karega phirr??
socho socho...

😭

agni tintokali ko veer dekh raha h..
zameen asmaan ka phrak h ...
sahi kaha h, piiker log ludak jate h...
tintokali is a living example of gareebi main aat gheela n uor se sirr ka screw dheela...

pagal,

terrace scene, kya bataon.. main jyada nhi bolungi,
verna saari di's yahan pr bhi shoro ho jayengi...

mujhe chidhane..
bhoot mushikil se tho kamm hoa h..

ud soon, meri padai k liye plz.. kal hi de dena...
at least yeh scene poora kr dena...

lov u di🤗
Edited by sweetsanyo - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
beautiful update..
but a small one..:)
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: SonaliDhone


n I told u na Veer also kept fast for Neha .look my predection become true 😃
Mere n Tumhare thinking kitni milti julti hai na ...Same Pinch ⭐️


mujhe matt bhulo plz,..😭
maine bhi bola tha😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
Romantic part but small one, its ok
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Posted: 13 years ago
a very nice and sweet part...i too felt veer will fast for her.
ya we forgot abt agni that taniya is more better witrh him only, but both combined i feel may create difficulties for our love birds.
it was just a small part ...plz continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice ud riya...
aww veer ne bhi neha ke liye fast rakha...luved there scenes...
n tanya ko agni me veer dikh raha hai...lagta usne do nahi dus bottle chadayee hai...
waiting for their 'to be continued' romantic scene...n tanyas reaction when she will get to know abt agni...
ud soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetsanyo

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