OS: Sweet punishment.

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snoopy84

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Posted: 13 years ago

#71

That was really cute loved it

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Simran

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Posted: 13 years ago

#72

That was awesome Haffie...and im sorry for the late comment...i still have lots of pms to unread lol... anyway that was really romantic and definitely a sweet punishment...hell it didnt even seem like a punishment?:D... al right i gotta go and unread all the other pms...and continue my babble there...love you...

-Simran- ( ur woman and esha's cinnamon)

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Homeslice

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Posted: 13 years ago

#73

Haffie,

It was awesome could you make a part 2?

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BlueMystique

@BlueMystique

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Posted: 13 years ago

#74

Very different than your other works, loved it! It's great that you can write both dark and sweet OS's.😊 I loved that Arnav was behaving like his usual tough self, but he was also giving Khushi something she loved. The dance was so romantic. Why don't these things happen in real life? Why!? *Bawls*

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anam munir

@anamunir

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Posted: 13 years ago

#75

SO NOW!!!!!

Woah Woah Woah fr de OS you screwed us totally ...

very nice OS dude , i'm convinced u'r one ov de best writers on forum!!!!

keep the gud stuff comin' !!!!!

love ya!!!!

anamunir

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riti4u

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Posted: 13 years ago

#76

this was awesome...loved your writing...👏

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Banginbengali

@Banginbengali

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Posted: 13 years ago

#77

OMG I LOVVVEEE!!! God so freakin adorable!! This definently was a sweet punishment for all of us Eviffie after what is goin on in the show..this is such a breath of fresh air!! :D

Arnav is so sweet he totally knew Khushi loved the rain...n he loves watching her in it...God what a punishment for all of us...I loved how they both were playing each other!! To cute!! N God the way Arnav got angry Khushi turned away...ufff my freakin brooding hero ;)!!

Loved how you clarified that they knew everything about eachother n have forgiven eachother!! Them swayin in the rain...n lmao Khushis not scared of the thunder *i loved this part...not every girl is filmy...gettin scared of harmless thunder* ;)...n awww Arnav wantin her to get scared so he can kiss her lol!!

The way they were swayin n the kiss...Khushi hidin in Arnav like a newly bride...to damn cute!!

Lovvedd lovved the OS!! Super adorbs Eviffie!!:D