Oh yaaay! You wrote it was all so cute!
The way it started with him telling her to go out and her liking it!
Then him watching her out in the rain and when she turned away from his view he went and joined her!
I like the way their so in love and have gone past the hate and misunderstandings!
Then the end where shes not scared of thunder like he expected. The kiss on the neck was woow!
And when he told khushi to keep quiet and kiss him!
Shes so cute as well blushing and hiding her face against his chest
you deffo should write more like these their awesome!
Btw what did khushi make him go through? I think you should carry this on as a ss and show us since we wont be getting any sweet moments in the show :p
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