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Posted: 13 years ago

#51

wow...it z awesome...
Pls pm me...

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Shailja

@---Shailu---

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Posted: 13 years ago

#52

awesum update aroma dear...

really loved it ...

So,pls continue nd PM me !!!!

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Surbhi

@..Surbhi..

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Posted: 13 years ago

#53

nice job.. keep it up..

its interesting

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prabhjot ARMA

@bluelashes

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Posted: 13 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: Angelic_Aditi
Res. 😊

***Unres***

It is awesome. Just great.
it's very well written :)
Ur FF is just so great. love it :D so continue soon :))
When will we get the next part. Please PM me.
Thank you so much. Tc. :D :)

Ps - I always knew that it was Swayam. :P

PPs - I want an update tomorrow. No request but an order. I hope I can ask for that much at least.

PPPs - Well, as for the room, I's say, originality at its best! :D It looks good and maybe best in the condition (color) it is now! :)

PPPs - Love you and the FF. Keep writing and smiling. Take care. :)

thanks ...

sure today i'll update

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prabhjot ARMA

@bluelashes

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Posted: 13 years ago

#55

hello guys i'm back ... again with my update ... update start karne se pehle hi bol deti hoo ashi na lge to marna maat ... ... ok ... and thanks all of u ...

chapter 3 ...

kriya in her bed room ...( bed room tum dekh chuke ho )... standing front of mirror ...

kriya : kya scah mein sab kuj badal chuka hey ... kya wo scah mein muje nafrat karte hey ...

kriya's shadow :ha wo tume nafrat karte hey ...or kare b kyu na tumne dhokha diya un logo ko ...

kriya : nahi mene koi dhokha nahi diya ... main majboor thi ...

k's shadow : tum majboor thi ... par unki kya galti thi ...

kriya : ha unki koi galti nahi thi ... par main kya karti main unse bohat pyaar karti thi ... or rey he is my life ... muje j sab karna pra kyu ki muje lga tha ki main kabi wapis nahi augi ...

k's shadow : ab in sab k kya fayda ... they hate u ... u get it ... u cheat them kriya ghai ...

kriya : no ... agar mera pyaar scaha hey to muje jroor milega ... tum nahi samjogi ... ( break down in tears ) ... jao jha sey please muje akela chor do ...

( guys j song mane or meri friend ne khud likha hey so ... please manage ha ... )

sari duniya b dekh li par nain tumhe tarse ...

unki jalak dikhade rabba itna to karde ..

tumhe apna bnau , ruthe ko manau ...

a ja le ja muje etna to karde ...

sari duniya ...

kriya fell on bed ...

tere dil mein kya hey j to main na janu ... par tumhe hi alla or rub manu ... sajna ishq to kar liya dukh b jar liya ... tere dua hi kru us khuda k dar pe ...sari duniya b dekhi peer nain tumhe turse ...

vo na muje bhoole jo pal tunhare saath gujare the , aaj tere bin hum jeet kar b hare hey ...

dusre logo ki trha sabi muje thukraye ... kese tume samjao kuj samaj na aye ... tu kya jaane tere liye hum kyu kuj karte ... saari duniya bi dekhi par nain tume tarse ...

( guys song khatam ... and kriya sleeping ... so lets go to rey's room without disturbing her shsss ... lol )

rey's room ...

(guys asha na lge to khud select kar lena )

rey : kyu . kyu main tumse nafrat nahi kar patta ...kyu main aaj b tumse itna pyaar karta hoo ...nahi main tumse nafrat karta hoo ... tumne kyu kiya mera saath esa kriya ...i hate u but u still in my heart ... par main tumhe kabi maaf nahi karuga ...

( guya again song ... but muje lga best hey rey k emotions show karne k liye so ) ...

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Wj129PaxsAY

next morning ...

swayam phone ring ...

se : hello...sharon ...

sh : kha ho kal se tum ...

sw : sorry busy tha ...

sh : to ek call nahi kar sakte the kyu ...

sw : bola na sorry ...

sh : thik hey is baar maaf kar rahi hoo next time nahi ok ... college a rahe ho na ...

sw : ha ...

sh : ok by ... i'm waiting ...

sw : aaj ek nyi suruat ... aaj kriya ko dhoondne ka kaam start ... or main use doond hi looga ...

in college RDX office ( guys RDX also back )

swayam & sharon ... tum log jante ho na is baar new york dance academy se head dancer a rahi hey hamare college se kuj dancers select karne k liye ... and i want ki hamari poori team select ho ... so r u ready ...

sw : yes sir ...

sh : but sir wo kab a rahi hey ...

RDX : today guys ... so get ready ...

sw & sh .. sure sir ...

swayam & sharon leave ...

precap : sab honge face to face ... kuj drama kuj reality ( age kya ho jaye dont know )...

(so mene apna promis poora kiya now u'r turn guys ... jesa b hey comment kardo ... agar next update chahiye ... next update on page no 20 i know jada hey par i want ... now tum logo pe hey ki kitni jaldi tum ;log update chahte hoo ...)

jin ko last time pm nahi mila sorry kya kru send nahi ho rahe the kisi ko teen teen bar sand ho gya or kisi ko ek baar b nahi so sorry ha ...

next chapter 4 : page 31

Edited by aromakriyaansh - 13 years ago

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aishwarya

@Dreamer3003

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Posted: 13 years ago

#56

Just nw read all ur updates...
Luvd it:):)
Pm me wen u update pls:):)

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Hera Flames

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Posted: 13 years ago

#57

Nice song aroma...
And update was amazing...
Me gussa wd u coz u didn't pm me...
Huh...
But koi baat nae...
Par agli baar nae aaya toh main bhot maarungi...

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prabhjot ARMA

@bluelashes

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Posted: 13 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: aditi061
Nice song aroma...
And update was amazing...
Me gussa wd u coz u didn't pm me...
Huh...
But koi baat nae...
Par agli baar nae aaya toh main bhot maarungi...

sorry ha pm send nahi ho rahe mene bohat try kiya ... abi b nahi ho rahe ... main to irritate ho chuki hoo ... par next time i try chahe ek ek ko kyu na sand karna pre ok ...