SwaRon/TanHa FF ~Enigma of Fate~ chp 21 pg 142

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ABI

@ABBY92

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#771

I loved the beginning how Sharon carressed Swayam's hair and kissed his forehead while he was unconscious. That was a really heart touching moment especially cause Swayam could feel her presence even though he could not do anything at that time.

Thank God, the mystery has been cleared and this somewhat gives SwaRon a clean slate to start their relationship again. Even though Sharon is still carrying a lot of emotional baggage having lost almost everything cause of Swayam's one decision, it's a little easier for them to get together now cause there's nothing else holding them back from getting together except Sharon.

Looking forward to seeing how the marriage track will play out as I love the after marriage wala love a lot !!

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Crazy4AshVik

@Crazy4AshVik

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#772

Fabulous Update!!

Absolutely loved the ending😉

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zk456789

@zk456789

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#773

Thanks for the pm the update was awesome finally all the mu are clear do update soon

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spicyrays

@spicyrays

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#774

hey dear... its an amazng updte... nd dadi is playin act of being unwell rryt...good one...

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Asma

@-FrozenRain-

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#775

This is sa beautiful Update..
I did love each and every part of it..
Adi's love for Swayam looks beautiful.
It was fabulous reading it and a wonderful feel.
Rohan looks so cheep..
Thank god Swayam came to know about him at the last moment and came in..
And Finally Sharon agreeing to marry him with her daadi's trick did wonders..

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Sunil

@Suni1986

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#776

Hey it was superb update

sharon came to him n she can't avoid her feeling for him.
She love him lot n also disappear before anyone see

kriyaansh make him to away from all d danger. Thy take care of him like sone of them, nd thy don't want suffer him

adi n swayam bond was great n he so much worried for him. Adi sleeping with him n don't want to away from him

finally secret reveal of man who behind her nd also arrested by police
bt d end was fab
he want to marry her nd she also want to marry him bt she can't
though d way her dadi manage to convince her for marriage was superb

sharon ready for marriage bt damage done by swayam was too much
after their marriage swayam should heal her wounds by his love
lovely update

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Twinkle_d3

@Twinkle_d3

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#777

Finally suspence is out ..
Nd nw swaron marriage yayyy..
Dadi love her :p
Time for more nd more swaron scene
waiting ..
Waiting ..
Waiting ..
Great update..

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Anu_TanHa

@Anu_TanHa

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#778

Awesome update baz👏

Finally the mystery of He that beep is revealed & i was right he is a beep actually super duper beep🤬 how dare he misbehave with Sharon but Swayam came on time with those superb line yaar " Stay away from MY GIRL" loved it majnu is back in the town with the bang😃.

After so much gloominess, sorrow, pain & tear i got something to smile on😊thank you. That beep found his real place where he truly belongs to i.e. jail thanks to Swayam, he must thank Swayam😆.

Swayam hired a detective to know about the Sharon's life hmmm intelligent person. you disclose the mystery of beep in this update otherwise i was also going to do the same to know about this beep😆.

Swayam propose Sharon in the most weird situation but i like it😳 Sharon's dadi is so cute & sweet. She emotionally blackmailed Sharon to marry Swayam(emotional attyachar😆) but only for her good & bright future.

But Sharon is really hurt & hiding so much pain inside her blaming herself for her parents death😔. i hope Swayam will able to heal all those wound & vanish her pain with his love let just hope for the best or may be after their marriage we'll get something in which Baz is expert & genius your trademark haan😉😳 you know na what i'm talking about 😃 .

Sharon also cares for him & really love him lot so i know Swayam & Sharon become Swaron very soon😃

Rohan name remind me of Hostage Swayam's cover name😊

Thank you for wonderful update Baz🤗

P.S. you made this Swaron /TanHa ff thanks dear😊

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swapna

@shan16

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#779

finally secret of mistery man revealed ...woah... goood one...

But now new twist...swaron marriage deal...hope it turns to be interesting...

u r good writer ...keep it up

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Meera

@MirageSwaron

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#780

Baz tum ekdum drama queen bani hui ho abhi.😊..itna saara action pack kiya hai tumne iss ek chapter mein...but end result toh SwaRon saath mein, so sab kuch acceptable hai uske liye...definitely luking forward to how ur going to approach this part (I smell a climax happening) and what is cuming up next