SwaRon/TanHa FF ~Enigma of Fate~ chp 21 pg 142

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stuti1995

@stuti1995

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#781

Amazinggg update
Read 5 parts together n couldnt stop the tears in the last two parts
Updarlte soon n plss doo pm

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prateek

@prateek.007

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#782

Awesome...really Awesome.. update..becoz this time we get a big..full of love..revealation of evil..and good news...wala update...i love to read long update...well..i love u'r starting part...u just give a beautifull explanation of sharon..heartly concern..for her love..her swayam..i am so happy to see her like this..she is also hurt to see swayam in this condition..well explained..first paragraph..i really like sharon's silent care...loved it..
its so good to see kriyansh is now back with their love..and the bond "kriyansh and swayam"..are back..they used to cared swayam..by a sweet and cute weapon... "adi"..well explanation of swayam and adi's bond...adi is so cute..loved this bond..and adi's role character in this ff..
then..their is revealation of that evil.."rohan"..its so great that swayam used to appoint an detective for sharon..for her hidden truth.. loved this action of swayam...he is now making a faithfull bond with sharon'dadi..i really like dadi in this update..she is so sweet..for swaron..and a hidden key for swaron's marriage...its sad that sharon was suffering from lot..poor girl..but no worry..swayam is here..
loved all the lines of swayam at sharon house...well done by swayam..to throw an equal amount cheque to that jerk..and what a strong slap..by swayam..to that evil... and police was on right timing..really great..
and then sharon's anger was natural..she was fuming with her anger..i.e.."hidden love for swayam"...
i cant understand the condition of swayam..but its great and happy..that swaron are going to be married..just becoz of efforts by sharon dadi..she plays an emotional drama..just for sharon's welfare and her love... and at last,we get to know this good news..sharon is now ready for marriage..and i hope that our swaron will be married in next update..
last.."all the best" part was really awesome..and well describe..loved it..
So,i just loved this update...keep updating..
and thanx for pm
prateek..

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Lassi_TanHa

@Lassi_TanHa

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#783

unresed my comment on pg 105😊

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rinku bathija

@rinkubathija12

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#784

Awesome update.. Not ony update but whole ff is rocking,, But wait, you know what (ofcourse you would know it but i can't help writting it) not only this ff but whatever you write is wonderful.. I love every piece of your writting.. WheneverI read your update i just wish it never ends!! it is beauty of your writting... and whenever i try to comment on your, endless adjectives and words starts spinning in my head and im just unable to put them in sentences, what i just do is open post reply window. stare at it for a while and always end in dropping idea of commenting (BTW its a compliment) :P.. I seriously don't know what im writting know.. Coming straight to the point, I loved update.. Loved how swayam proposed her for marriage, it was interesting twist and i didn't expected this kind of turn.. but there wouldn't be any fun if you write what we expect as swayam say PREDICTABLE IS BORING... and atlast whole mystery is sorted.. some of your updates in this ff also made me cry.. And i don't really cry scenes also if they are potrayed on-screen.. but your words made me cry.. that thing for me is really applausable... 👏

P.S. thanks for PM..

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sukanya.

@Lovenarbhi

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#785

BaZ i have to comment on three chapters now... Arey it is super se uper wala update tha. will comment fast

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Rohan :)

@RoHaNmAlHoTrA

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#786

what the hell yaar i'm the villan...hehe..

nice update..

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Sowmya

@Joshua_TANHA

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#787

unres my comment @

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/76876345

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BeulaSwaRon

@BeulaSwaRon

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#788

loved it...did swayam asked for marriage???? cant wait...sry a chotu comment...but i loved the entire story created...time for swaron to become one now..but still they have to confess a lot i guess...i hope they dont get separated again...i want them to talk talk talk out everything...waiting for the next update...please update it soon