SwaRon/TanHa FF ~Enigma of Fate~ chp 21 pg 142 - Page 70

omg omg omg:O

hillarious update yaar...

feeling really bad for swaron:-(

why did u end here???
please plz plz update the next part soon... cant wait...

loving the story:-):-):-)

Woah I am speechless...I had not expected the ending at all. I knew that Swayam would be hurt but I never thought he would be that spontaneous...I felt soo bad for Sharon this part and I was actually very angry at Swayam even though I know that Swayam only did that to save Kriya's name but at the cost of Sharon's. God, I felt soo bad for her. I really hope they end up happy. I know that there is lot more to her story which I am dying to find out. Anyways, it's an awesome update. So many emotions in one part. Please cont. soon. And thanks for the PM.

Sorry I couldn't reply after the last chapter. I seriously wanted to. But the day I read you updated the next chapter. Any way the way the last chapter had ended there was a deja vu feeling anf I had expected something big happening. And yeah I have expected that it won't good. So I was in one way pretty much ready for this chapter but still the force with which it struck me I was completely blown away. Marvelously penned chapter which I bet would have left everyone with a heavy heart if not in tears.

From the moment Sharon was introduced this feeling of something ominous happening with her , something too huge was growing in my mind. The cryptic conversation of her with grandmother was intriguing from the beginning but still I had not anticipated the scale of pain which she have to face. The entire conversation was gut wrenching leaving me completely numb. The way you penned the chapter, the way she broke down everything just left me completely paralyzed in a way. Great writing. Waiting for the update now.

*res*
*unres*
chap 15
i know i had pending res posts but can't help it 😳 (will ures them really soon sorry 4 late) this one was JUST SUPERB 👏
the pain & suffering of sharon as always beautifully penned down by u.Thank god atleast kriyaansh sort out there problem & they r together genuenlly helping swaron.
Love how u defined sharon's feelings HAPPY YET SCARED & the Word " HOPE" U described very true & nice way.
I thought this update will contain little romance but u surprised me with this rocking confrontation ⭐️ don't assume i didn't like it. I really appriciate that u put the situation realistic & exactly thats what i loved about ur writing.


oh god swayam punishing himself for hurting sharon, it reminds me computer classroom showdown of Tanha. & shantannu's brilliant acting of breakdown. But really last part was shocking & unexpected.

Eagerly waiting 4 next part.
P.s. About "HIM" I think u r acting like a queen of the story of arabian nights 😆 😎who leave story on cliffhanger to make king intrigue & save her life 🤣
but remember we love u baz 🤗 so pls update fast like really fast. I want to read u r SS & 'HOSTAGE' ff also 😳 what can i do u r writing style made me greedy 😳 😆

Are u a magician??
U write so beautifully..
I never read sad part twice but u made read it twice with tears in eyes both time..
Swayam tried to kill himself.. :o
i knw u r busy ..
But still i cnt wait for nxt update..
Awsm update ..

wow... amazing... updte... especially d part where sharon told swayam wat happnd wid her nd her family wen he left... it was reallie hurting... nycly expressed dose feelings in words...

Brilliant update...ur an awsum storyteller Baz and u prove it again and again...this is one of the best chapters I have read in this FF and the depth of Sharon's pain and helplessness of Swayam, his guilt at destroying her life, her inability to come to terms with the damage that it did to the lives of her parents, the utter hopelessness of the entire situation, is all so perfectly brought out...