SwaRon/TanHa FF ~Enigma of Fate~ chp 21 pg 142 - Page 71

i m dumbstruck...by d END ...

For chapter 14
Lovely update,now the things are in a good direction... rey and kriya.. and sharon and swayam.. well turn in story...its awsum to look forward.. so keep update asap..
thanx for pm..
prateek...

Baz, figuratively it is a reserve. Remind me on 15th to edit it, exam time! (:

Baz I thought to comment on this wrk of urs aftr my xamz but dis update had me.. U r rly one outstanding nd skilled writer Baz.. Nd dis piece of work is one of ur finest piece of writings.. As a reader im alwys awestruck bout how ur each updtes r so intriguing nd so rich.. Nd d bst prt bout dis whole piece z how u r letting out d truth in bits in accurate proportions in each updtes... Nd making us grind our head as to wat wl happen nxt.. :p Nd here u gve i thnk d mst emotional(accrdng to me) updte of dis story btwn all dis revelations.. Just wen we r thnking maybe now evrythng wl b on trck u gave anthr mindblwing twist.. A vry skilled work by u Baz... Eagerly waiting for d upcoming updtes.. U r rly one f d bst writers of forum...

It was mind blowing update

kriyaansh locked swaron in a room

sharon pretty know what coming in her way bt she want avoid this
but swayam try show her how much he love her
nd she love him to bt how can she forget worst six years of her life
bride who marriage cancel before two weeks of her marriage
how much her family will listen from soc, her relatives
nd finally her dad died cuz accusation take on her family nd her daughter

sharon started accusing her for her dad murder nd her business also not good. Her mother try to support her business bt not saved by her nd she died too
sharon feeling responsible for her mother as well as fathers death
she feel like she kill her parents
nd ran towards door after swayam shout kriyaansh open d door who heard everythink

swayam started to feeling immense guilty for his mistake
what was her mistake why she suffer in all this
swayam marry kriya to save her, kriya marry him to save d name of her family nd reys child
bt what was her mistake

those agony came over to him nd started to think straight nd stab in his stomach
lovely update

I'm commenting! See!
It's going to rain gold today. 🤣

I'll give you comments for both this update and the update before it. Here goes..

Sharon is in a very confusing are of mind. She's happy that what they held was never fake and on the contrary, very much real.! But she's also sad that it had to be real. Because now there's noway she can let go of Swayam and his memories, when all she really wants is to do exactly that.

It's nice to have the friendship come back between Kriya and Swayam. I'm glad things are back to normal between KriYansh at least SwaRon have only their own problems in the way of them now.

I also like how Kriya and Rey genuinely want their friends to be happy again and are contributing towards it in whatever way they feel fit. :)

A locked up room is seems "cursed" for them. Every time they are in such situations things go wrong. But I'm glad Sharon got a chance at letting out all that pent-up frustration, even if it was only partially.

Although, I hadn't expected that last part. I didn't think Swayam would be grief to stricken to such lengths that he would take such irrational decisions. Well, let's see what happens. I'd really like to know what this leads to.

Even though the chapter was only fights it was required and I liked the way it happened.

Thank you for the PM and sorry for the time take to unreserve.

P.S See, I do listen to you (sometimes)! 😆

res

Amazing Update Bazz..
Just loved the whole stuff.

The way Sharron finally let her heart out was too emotional..
Perfect blending for the emotions...

And Swayam hurt himself..Hope the whole mystery solves up..