SwaRon/TanHa FF ~Enigma of Fate~ chp 21 pg 142 - Page 107

Originally posted by: devil_rocks

I was finally able to collect the data from my lappy account...hopefully update will be soon :P

Originally posted by: Dazzlerdiva

The update is fantabulous. Every emotion is written beautifully. Plz update soon

thank you so much dear for the comment.

Originally posted by: -Marium-

When when when when soon? Abhi ke abhi soon! :P

abhi toh sirf adha chapter hi likha hai...so by tonight or max tomorrow :)

Originally posted by: megsy

WoW!!!!!!!!!!!!!! wow wow wow...😳

the story had soo much pain that i can still feel my heart wrenching...

the ways you've portrayed your characters is mindblowing...no doubt this is one of my favourite reads and i eagerly await its update......thank you so much dear :)

you've got a great talent as a story teller...👏...thanks once again thats a huge thing for me😳

i wish your story could be turned into visuals!...now that is an even bigger comment for me so thank you so much.

thank you so much for such an encouraging comment dear...loved it <3

Originally posted by: 8JSmileyFace8J

it started out so jollly and then it became so sad!!!

seriously amazing writing!!!

The end touched my heart deeply..

the way you showed her remembering the past and her thoughts was amazing..

I luved the little Swaron scenes with the sari..

those were really cute!!!

the best part about the update is how changed the mood of it from happy to grief...

really great job!!!

CONTINUE SOON!!!!

Thanks so much for the comment...absolutely loved it <3

Originally posted by: prateekdave7

Dude,the flow of u'r story is perfectly amazing..And this time u'r update was so so nice..i really loved it to read...Its so long update it means more enjoyfull for me..and i enjoyed a beautifull and emotional read.....I am very glad u enjoyed the update Prateek :)

I just loved the way u bring all emotions,hesitations in this update...The way u potraits the character of sharon and swayam is amazingly mindblowing for me...Thank you so much..So the begining part was emotional..sharon was feeling pain..and scared to loose swayam..but at the same time,she was little bit happy to have him once again in her life..Its true..sharon pain was unbearable..

Then i liked whole saari wearing part...Swayam want to make their first kiss special...Great...I really waiting for this...😊

Then loved the way u created dinner and dance part..But last one was really sorrow...Sharon was remembering her past...and the way u potraits sharon dance is corelated with swayam and her love..is beautifull...And she was shouting that i would not dance was really shoking..So update soon..

So at last,its beautifully emotional update..Each factor is amazingly described...and i really loved to read..Great....Thank you once again.

Thanx for PM..

Prateek

thank you so much for such an amazing comment.

Originally posted by: devil_rocks

abhi toh sirf adha chapter hi likha hai...so by tonight or max tomorrow :)

Originally posted by: DaShInG_DeViL

^^ I'll try my best :)

Originally posted by: raveena2807

Beautiful update!!! ..thanks...The way it began and all Swaron moments were all beautiful. But Sharon's wounds are still deep. She has suffered alone, suffered lot and suffered for long. ...yes, thats the whole problem... It will take more than few months to heal them. I want to see her happy, embracing life, happiness, love and moreover, Swayam. Having said that I did not mean to say that everything should go back to normal at the earliest. I understand that too much happening too soon just ruins everything. ...yup, thats the tricky thing...no wound heals within days it takes it time to heal properly...The story is going on in perfect pace. Take your time, because at the end, you will do full justice to everything....thank you

Raveena ur comments r always so amazing and mature...I love them and wait eagerly for them...thanks once again for such a lovely comment :)

Originally posted by: -Marium-

Yes, you should be as we are your honest readers! :P

lolz I am not promising anything as I am lazy and my mom don't allow me sit on lappy 24X7 :p