SwaRon/TanHa FF ~Enigma of Fate~ chp 21 pg 142 - Page 108

Originally posted by: lassipriya

Ausum update..

beautifully written and well balanced.. d best part of ur stories is dat u make me feel all emotions just by ur writting.. keep it up!!👍🏼

swaron scene with d sari was cute.. 😳 all four friends having a gala time.. 😃

den d last part sharon rememberg her past she has suffered alot..😭 i could feel it..

swayam is really tryg hard to win sharon back.. wating to c how is going to make her dance again..

Thank you so much for such an amazing comment...totally loved it :)

Originally posted by: sree_123

Amazing update the way u expressed Sharon's pain was just beautiful.Keep up the good work!!!!!!!! 👍🏼😊

thanks for the comment.

OMG!!!!!!!!!!! Am i dreaming? Hurry up, make a new thread now.. all u have to do is copy and mistake Baz! Make it now.

Originally posted by: tannu_swayam

An excellently penned update Baz....thank you so much Uzma...Went thru an emotional ride in dis write up. The update was filled wit bth happiness nd tragedy. Nd bth were wonderfully written. Well I luvd how d story tuk dis turn nd just at the right moment.😊 I ws waiting wen dance wl cum bak in the story. Dance being an integral prt of SwaRon...Yes it was an important part of their story and I wanted to play this card at the right moment just when everything was starting to be on track but one big part was missing...The lst prt where Sharon is shown missing dance is beautifully written....thanks once again..Jst wen she ws trying to accept the changes she got another shot of reality check. Where dance is no longer a prt of her. Dance which went awy from her due to the pst events. Dance which ws an extention of hers. Nd Swayam. Lets c how he brngs bak dance in Sharon's lyf. Nd Sharon bak to his lyf once again. Beautifully written update Baz. ...thank you once more

thanks a ton for those kind words of appreciation dear...means alot.

Originally posted by: -Marium-

OMG!!!!!!!!!!! Am i dreaming? Hurry up, make a new thread now.. all u have to do is copy and mistake Baz! Make it now.

hahah it sure feels like a dream...my first ever FF which crossed a thread. will make a new one today itself and the update is written will be updating within two hours...dekh le main teri baat man li :P

Originally posted by: arch2012

Awesome update Baz👏

Beautiful swaron moments & Swayam teasing Sharon was mind blowing actually the whole saree moment is cute.Now Swayam is showing his feeling openly & loud enough this is good for Swaron.

Dance is always an integral part of Swaron love story Dance is related with every memory of Swaron their first meeting in auditorium & their first dance together on stage, Dance challenge weakling Vs Dazzling, aww priceless memories & In flash back the way you describe Sharon's dance in full aggression, sadness of losing Swayam & incompleteness of her dance without Swayam was just mind blowing👏..thank you... You beautifully penned down each n every emotion of Sharon's hurt, loneliness & then Sharon decided that she will never dance again & for the first time i really did Beep for Swayam sorry .😆

Sharon is so hurt oh god poor soul & Swayam please do something😡

Hey Baz i've a request i just wanted to read the swayam's pov his inner turmoil what he is feeling right now his hurt whenever Sharon try to push him away & avoid & specially his guilt & his devotion to get Sharon back & win her love once again so can you please write something on Swayam pov on next update just a request but as you are the writer so it's completely your decision to write on this or not as you know better than me what is good for story understandable.😊

update soon & take care

Thanks so much for the comment as always loved it...I always love ur comments and wait for them :D...u will see swayam's POV in next chapter.

Originally posted by: Suni1986

Baz, It was awesome update

Sharon lost in thought of swayam
how much adorable he look, when he playing wit adi.
Then they have to go to kriyaansh place for dinner.

Then another swaron lovely nok jhok where he convinced her to wear sari.
Sharon insulting him continuously bt his smile never left him. Then there romantic where they swayed in dance.

Swaron intimate moment when sharon not able tie d knot nd they swayed in moment.
At kriyaansh place, Sharon once again mixed with them, there teasing to each other, laughing, masti with each other like older times that made sharon pain to lessen bt

Sharon pain, her hatred for swayam once again rosed up due to dance
which she left when swayam left her
all d memories of past once agin increased her pain nd she left that place immidiate

lovely update

Thanks so much for the comment means alot.

Originally posted by: 1D_D3-Crazy

Awesome update :-) love ShaRey friendship and aww SwaRon as usual were so cute

thanks for commenting.

Originally posted by: SilverStar01

Hey there...I read ur ff and it is awesome totally love the story...update soon and plz pm me...

thanks for the comment.😊

Originally posted by: DaShInG_DeViL

hahah it sure feels like a dream...my first ever FF which crossed a thread. will make a new one today itself and the update is written will be updating within two hours...dekh le main teri baat man li :P