New OS: An Ocean Of Regret PART 3, Page 10 UPDATED

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asulpyaar

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Posted: 13 years ago

#41

supeeerb !! absolutely you have to continue plz plz plz plz plzzz

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Fari

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Posted: 13 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: asulpyaar
supeeerb !! absolutely you have to continue plz plz plz plz plzzz

Thank youuu sooo much!! You guys are so encouraging! Love you all! =D

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mimi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#43

it ws jst too good!!!!

pls update the nxt part soon!!!!

watng to see their reunion!!!!

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VIP.Life

@VIP.Life

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Posted: 13 years ago

#44

I LOVED IT!!!!!!

PLEASE PM THE NEXT PART!

luv.u

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ruby123

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Posted: 13 years ago

#45

Love it!! Please do continue :)

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Kashish

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Posted: 13 years ago

#46

Superb 👏

Its awesome

Plz continue Soon

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claireDD

@claireDD

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Posted: 13 years ago

#47

wwwooowww...such an amazing os ...

and the most important part is that u never bothered to pm it to me...

and now im feeling angry...😡
like really really angry...grrr...
i would eat u up alive if u ever do dis again... EVER !!!!!!

bt why on earth din't u continue with dis???
its such a sweet story...
u cud have made another part to wind it up...
anyways it was FREAKING AWESOME !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Vaishu

@arnavandkhushi1

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Posted: 13 years ago

#48

Amazing OS, like always... I really admire your writing and I especially liked this one! I loved how Arnav punished himself after learning of khushis inocence.. Keep up the great work! 👏

Edited by arnavandkhushi1 - 13 years ago

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Avi64

@Avi64

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Posted: 13 years ago

#49

that was beautifully written yaar! loved every bit... both the parts were awesome..😊

hope khushi is soon able to revive him from this self crushing guilt state that he is in...

PS: if it hadn't been for your index i would never have known you had written this too...
so thank you for making it and sending it as a pm to me...
Luv u 😊

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Fari

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Posted: 13 years ago

#50

Originally posted by: claireDD
wwwooowww...such an amazing os ...

and the most important part is that u never bothered to pm it to me...

and now im feeling angry...😡
like really really angry...grrr...
i would eat u up alive if u ever do dis again... EVER !!!!!!

bt why on earth din't u continue with dis???
its such a sweet story...
u cud have made another part to wind it up...
anyways it was FREAKING AWESOME !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Awww Thanks Dilru!! 🤗

Yaar actually this was my first OS ever, so I didn't even have that many ppl on my buddy list cos this happened before Asr Jr's Diary 😉 so yeah, I actually didn't PM anyone thinking my writing was absolute junk 😆 I used to be really unconfident abt my writing! But ever since I wrote ASR JR and ppl started giving me really encouraging comments, my confident blossomed and now look I send out PMs 😆

Yeah, actually you're right! I should write a third part to wind this up. Never thought abt that cos I thought this one was too stupid 😃