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.x-bumblebee-x.

@.x-bumblebee-x.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#31

Absolutely love it!! He killed himself for hurting her!!

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arhi__4ever

@arhi__4ever

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Posted: 13 years ago

#32

Arnav is dead

when i read he jumped my heart felt the pain man i have tears in my eyes...

Wonderful update

very intense

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serene_arnihrt

@serene_arnihrt

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Posted: 13 years ago

#33

Hey... Gud wrk.. I appreciate it... N ny at awl bullshit sweetha... Bt sunthng was so true.. He really broke.. Bt still luvd it...:)

thnx foh d pm deah..

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jinnutty

@ji600

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#34

Arnav is dead..no..bt I like it..

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rashgirl000

@rashgirl000

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#35

OH he's dead. very sad😭. not creepy. very bautiful os. when i read this os couldn't breath. and i hate sad endings too.😔.

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-JollyJabeen-

@-JollyJabeen-

Inactive

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#36

Awesome OS! Absolutely love it🤗

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fatima2603

@fatima2603

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#37

It wasn't creepy...it was just sad...depressing in fact!

Very well written...I hope he doesn't EVER do this on the show...but Shyam can! 😃

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Aarti

@aartipartyy

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+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#38

that wasn't creepy at all!!! that was beautiful. i have read a lot of OS's that have Khushi commit suicide but i've only read very few that have arnav commit suicide! nice job!!! 😊

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Abi

@PepsiGirl101

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#39

Wow that was written beautifully and the whole thing was so scary. Definitely sent shivers down my spines! and I loved it for doing that... cant believe he jumped. Do you think you can continue this? like write about how khushi feels when she finds out the news? because hes famous so im sure the news will be all over so...PLEASE DO CONSIDER THIS IDEA!!! its too good to stop right here! :)

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Pr1yanka

@Pr1yanka

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#40

nooo…why did u make him jump…u should have made him retreat when he realised the one thing he has not done for khushi…show his love….but brilliantly written

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