OneShot:Jannat-I will wait for you

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Aishwarya

@Naina...

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#51

oh shit!!! Very sad...thanks for the pm...by the way it's not creppy but it's beautiful...if this would happen in serial then kushi would suerlly save him...and there would be thier confession...hahahha stated dreamin witj this now ritu

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simran

@Laters_Baby

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#52

Itz vry emotional nd sad .thnx fr da pm

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Shruti

@...shruti...

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#53

Arnav suicide hey Bhagwan
Great work ritu not creepy at all

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mishti_17

@mishti_17

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#54

Well written...

My heart broke towards the end.. He jumped off.. 🥺

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Ginaginny

@Ginaginny

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#55

Awesome... And certainly not creepy or bullshit!

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ruku25

@ruku25

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#56

well written...it was emotional😭

thnx for the pm

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priya

@priasweet

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#57

so nice and wonderful writing

it was so sad and emotional

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goguma

@goguma

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#58

I so do not want to see or imagine this to happen...
Its just soo sad..

I dont know if creepy is the word, but
this is just totally unexpected...

Tks for the PM.
Because of it, i actually read the ending first. Lol

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M R

@rubys07

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#59

Ya it was a bit sad n touchy but not creepy at all!!n honestly..not all stories have a happy ending ryt??(though i dont lyk sad endings either😔)but u v penned it down really well👍🏼.thanks for the pm.