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Posted: 13 years ago
#31
Nice story but y aadi is so annoyed with payal?? Is he forcefully married to her?? I mean itni sweet wife se to shayad hi koi dur rehna chahega
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Posted: 13 years ago
#32
Nice update dear...why aadi is behaving so ruthless? I like payal she is so calm and sweet a bit naughty too...but he got irritated on her sweetness too...weird he is.

about title you dint give any concept so its hard for me to predict the way story would proceed,still as per two updates I am suggesting...

'Imperfect love' or 'yet we are together..' or 'falling for Mr.wrong'

aur kuch yaad aayega to will tell you.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#33
hi guys thanks for ur sweet n lovely comments...loved ur comments always...love u all

part 3

adi already leave for office n payal sat on bed with a photo album...she saw his pics which was collected by her...she have about more than 200 pics of adi in her album...actually her album filled with his pics only...she collected his pics by newspapers,magazines n her mother in laws album...she was quite happy to saw his pic...she remembered her first day when she met with him

flashback
aadi was a very handsome n dashing boy...he was most younger n talented business tycon in country...he was very hard working n passionate about his work..which made him little rude towards the peoples...he loves only two things...his family n his work...

today a big day for aadi ...he got a award for best business man of year...he was the son of yash n rajni mathur n have a sweet n cute sister anita he loved her very much...


a party given by his father n gust arrived to wished him...he was busy with his clients n his father's friend...when a beautiful girl standing on gate with flowers in hand...ani welcomed her ...she was very happy to saw aadi...she went nearer n gave him bouquet -''hi''he turned to saw her n looked at her with confused face-''hi''

she was payal...employ in his company since 6 months...she smiled-''congratulations''he sake hands with her n took the flowers with her...she was happy...then he leave...she loved him since the first day of joining the company...bt he didn't know all his employ except some...

she still gazing him n he was confused with her continuous staring...

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next day

in the office

his father yash was very happy with payals work so he gave her promotion...now she was very happy with her promotion aadi in his cabin when she entered n said-''sir may i come in''

aadi-''yes''wothout looking at her then he looked at her once n said-''u''

she smiled-''yes sir mein aapki company mein hi kam karti hun 6 mahine pehle hi join kiya h meine or mein aapko acche se jaanti hun..par aap mujhe nhi jaante''

aadi-''ok ok kya kamm h ''she gave him some files for signature..he signed n said-''anything else''

payal-''mera naam payal h ''he growled at her-''kya mene tumse pucha h jakar apna kaam karo''

she nodded n leave...

after few hours

he returned from the office when he saw her standing in the shed ...he stopped his car -''tum yahan kya kar rhi ho''
she smiled n said-''wo mein ''he didn't listen her n said-''baitho mein chod deta hun''she sat happily n said-''aap ki car bhot acchi h...she enjoying his company though he sat silently but she continue -''aapko pta h mujhe music pasand but yeh nhi jo aapne chalaya h''he looked at her-''oh really yeh mene tumhare liye nhi chalaya''she smiled-''aapko aise gaane acche lagte h...''asked him..he irritated with her continous talk-''will u pls shut up''she sat quietly after sometime she leave for home

she was very happy this was first she talk to him

------------------------------------------------after one month

he leave for pune for a urgent meeting with payal...
he booked two rooms for 1 week stay...he was working in his room when she came-aap kamm hi karte rahoge kya chaliye na bahar chalte h ''

aadi-''mein yahan gumne nh aya hun kam karne aaya hun''she smiled n said-''han pta h par pure din kama karke aap pakte nhi chaliye na bahar chalte''she grasped his hand n moved towards the ground..there was heavy raining outside..she moved towards the ground n enjoy the rain she was all wet her clothes sticks to her body he looked at her n smiling to saw her dancing singing n enjoying the rain..he looked at her smiled..she hold his hand n moved towards the ground he was wet in the rain...she gazing him he looked more handsome...she came closer n kissed his cheek-''i love u aadi''gazing her n came more closer..he kissed her lips n her cheeks..she closed her eyes n embraced him...aadi lost in her aroma n kissed her passionately...

she pulled her face n kissed his lips...after sometime he tore a kiss n lifted her in his arms n moved towards the room...she curled her hands around his neck n sticks to his chest...he moved inside n pulled the doors from his leg...then he laid her on bed...she smiled shyly n turned her face...he turned her kissed her neck n throat...she enjoying his touch n embraced him...he switched off the lights n kissed her passionately


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next mrning

aadi wake up n looked on his other side...he was shocked to saw her..he stood up immediately from the bed he was sweating badly he picked up his shirt n wore it quickly as he turned he was shocked to saw red marks on his temple.cheek n chest...he was very nervous n remembered the incident of last night...



Edited by tejjo - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#34
reso jii

di aap ne bhi pehle res kiya h na...
issliye maINE BHI YUHI KR DIYA

~~**EDITED**~~
((di yeh comment maine chote bache ki tarah likha h...ek dum totalate hoe!...samjhana!)))
ooiii, ae kaya o gya, ???
mekko acha nai lagta jab payal anuty ko adi unkle jor se dant h,
meri mom jab mujhe danti h maintab jool jol che rota ho...
but phirr mummy mekko kissi karke mana leti h...

lekin adi uncle is velly velly bad,
i hate adi uncle...

melli payal aunty ko rola diya,
melli aunty bhott achi h,
main chotta bachu ho, lekin mujhe bhi pata h ki payal aunty uncle ko bhot pyaar katti h...

wow...
aunty unkle pehle se hi sab jante h, wow...

uncle pehle bhi kitni rudy the,
inni beautiful aunty ko ignore mate h,

wow, uncle ne payal aunty ko lift diya, but bollling cha muzzziccc sunaya...

bollling uncle...

yeh last main kya hoa tha!,
main bacha ho na!,
mujhe itna pata nhi h...


okay, ab bacha isse pehle bigad jaye main badi bann jati hoon.

di last scene, sizziling, ekdum toddo...

sooperbo jii.
maaze aa gye

adi control hi nhi kr paya, n n n n n nn n nn n n n...
ahem ahem ho gya...

lovely ud di..

isssliye adi ne payal se shadi ki n voh usse gussa rahta h...
but ismain payal ki kya galti thi,
galti thi tho, adi ki bhi thi...


loved the ud di

lov u too.

ud soon.

Edited by sweetsanyo - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#35
Oh so dats d reason he married to her... :| :| he spent one night with her nd he married to her just for d sake but not in love wid her, if dis is d reason to get angree with her den it was not her fault only, aadi i mean u wer also responsible 4 for wat all happened between u two...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#36
So he married her because he spent one night with her?I am not understanding if he dint have any feelings for her then how could he loose his chastity just because of ambiance?

and how could she marry with him knowing that he is doing all for compensating his guilt?

continue soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#37
Lovely updates... loved last two😊

Aww Payal is so damn cute, and oh so naughty ...😉

Bichare Adi ki to band baja deti hai😛

Aur haan title ka naam to dimag mein nahi aa raha, but haan kuch naughty sa, khata meetha sa, masti wala mast sa tiltle dena😊😊😊😊

Plz update soon😊

Love
Prachi
Edited by samantha1987200 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#38
oh this is the reason for the marrage..
great part..
pls cont soon..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#39
all d uds r amazing !!
luv d story !!
flashback xplns a lot !!
b does Adi thnk dat its just lust ??? so he marrd her out of guilt ??
or does he luv her but doesnt noe it ??
very intrstng !!!!
do ud soon...plzz...dont mind me not commmnt properly...vo xams...
luv u...

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Posted: 13 years ago
#40
lovely ud dear...continue soon...😊
n abt d title...muje teen naam suje hai...
'' Mr. or Mrs. right'' or ''saathiya'' or ''adha ishq''...😊
Edited by mddmayuri - 13 years ago

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