IPKKND FF:Perfection Th.3 (Chap 40 Pg 130)Upd:8/12

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MISTIE

@MISTIE

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#841

ur writing is truly fantastic

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DMGFan-2b-not2b

@DMGFan-2b-not2b

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#842

Loved the update & loved wherever you are taking the story!

May i add that this chapter is almost like a balm to my irritated sensibilities ESP after I read what's happening on the actual show.

Spot on - the part with Arnav's reflection. How long can one keep blaming your past for who you are? Everyone has issues and problems in their life - some terrible some not so terrible! How you allow them to shape you and whether you allow them to make you bitter or an uncontrollable animal is entirely in your hands. You become who you want to be!!

Poor Khushi, Arnav has a lot to learn, but does she have the resilience to survive while Arnav learns?

Just a thought - Arnav wasn't too different from Shyam in this instance, was he?

Edited by DMGFan-2b-not2b - 13 years ago

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Nazibah

@nazibah

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#843

waiting...everyone is waiting...I'm waiting...for Khushi to come out of her world...for NK to finally beat Arnav up...for Arnav to not be Arnav...wait scratch that Arnav will always be Arnav...wow I've written his name a lot!!! Have I said how much I love your writing...Well I do...love it!!!! thanks for the PM!!!

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arshia

@ashvez

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#844

The shattering realization of Arnav was epic.Thw wait for everything to break apart with the shuddering silence of the doom is deadly.Everything suspended..just before the crash.

Super!!! How will Arnav rectify...How wld NK kick his Ass...How wld Payal spit fire...?? My wait is killing me ...LOL!!!

Excellent update!

Ash.

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raina

@Girlabouttown

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#845

now this is called Perfection.

You are an amazing writer.

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smile1412

@smile1412

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#846

Girl... Where are you taking the story to???? I am simply amazed... I actually don't know how to describe how I am feeling after reading this chapter... Loved it... Will wait for the next update before the brilliance of your writing sinks in!!!

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Archana

@Iceflames

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#847

Uff this damned like button is not working.😡

After reading the update,i felt a sense of foreboding.It was kind of scary in a different way.Dear god Whats happening?? They all have to stand together for fighting Snake.

Napster your writing style is truly fabulous👏

Edited by archanavm - 13 years ago

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Samiya

@SamiyaIPKKND

Inactive

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#848

I just read the last two chapters and I love it totally... I'll start reading this ff from ch 1 when I get time... all I can say is

I'm loving it <3

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Peehu24

@Peehu24

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#849

amazing update. For me today, arnav stole the update!

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Farwa

@-Farwa_Ibrahim-

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#850

Beautifully written with almost PERFECTION everyones emotions r so beautifuly written almost in a poetic way seriously cant believe wht i have read is actually just a fan fiction it appeared to b a novel written by a much experienced writter really awesome