IPKKND FF:Perfection Th.3 (Chap 40 Pg 130)Upd:8/12

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Sonia

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Posted: 13 years ago

#831

my goodness what a stunning chapter! I feel so so bad for khushi!

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arushi05

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Posted: 13 years ago

#832

Wow an intense chapter. Poor khushi she is always at the receiving end to arnav's insecurities, arnav's anger, arnav's mood swings.
I am sure after this arnav will curse himself like anything for hurting khushi.

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Sonia

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Posted: 13 years ago

#833

my goodness what a stunning chapter! I feel so so bad for khushi!

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JerryTheMouse

@JerryTheMouse

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Posted: 13 years ago

#834

Whoa!

It felt as of I was looking at a snap shot, of their pain and hurt, of their demons!

Thank you! For the awesome update and the PM!

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nam_adi

@nam_adi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#835

Perfect chapter...loved Arnav and his thoughts in front of the mirror. NK being the true friend...he is heartbroken but not selfish and is putting khushi's needs in the front! Have loved him in thos FF.

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Mira

@kyunki_iloveu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#836

amazing..
u could feel for each of the characters..
:)

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Shruti

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Posted: 13 years ago

#837

Quite a whirlwind of emotions but the one which touched me the most was khushi's n NK
NK is being the best frnd and still standing by her side I loved that
Beautiful portrayal of emotions great work

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daljeet

@daljeet

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Posted: 13 years ago

#838

this was the perfect chapter in this tale of perfection.i dont knw what ot say.it was just a glass piece for me.i will only knw if it will shatter or hold on in nxt chap.but i knw,the title of this story is perfection n u r a perfect writer.im sure u'll bring perfection to the story whatever it is.n one thing is always a truth,arnav cant live without kushi n kushi can nvr live without him too.if they cud,then they wud hv been on different paths of life now.bz there was enough hatred,misunderstanding,hurt,sorrow in thier relationshp n their way to each other.if they had climbed all tht gracefully n reached here it wont be a waste.i trust u frnd,though last two chaps was quite depressing n shocking.

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inspiringstars

@inspiringstars

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Posted: 13 years ago

#839

Sorry for the late comments, here are the comments for all recent updates!

Chapter 36:

Shyam's story made me understand why he is what he is. So thanks for elaborating on that.

Sonali was a woman in love, and yes she chose somebody else over her son, and that destroyed everything for Shyam.

Arnav's obsession over Khushi is just another trait lovers have, where you see nothing but your love, and are always aware of what, why, and how of their doings.

Chapter 37:

Payal is so smart, she sent a text to Arnav regarding Khushi's plans. And Khushi is again acting as a sacrificial lamb, not thinking

about her own safety.

arnav's panic about Khushi and her plans seem so realistic, any husband in love with his wife would do the same. Damn his plans right now.

Wow, another freaking secret revealed, Dhruv Mallik,...is hidden somewhere...in Lucknow!

Chapter 38:

Why did Arnav do that? Its crazy...Poor girl, going from heartbroken to scared, to lifeless all in an hour...and she is in love with him...

it hurts to see your own loved one, hurt you that way. The final Khushi's confession was just beautiful that she was going to ask him to join her and NK.

Chapter 39:

Beautiful chapter, all 4 point of views, Payal's, NK's, Khushi's and Arnav's beautifully written. The best part of yur writing is how yoy differentiate between everybody's personalities by giving each of their perspectives. I would like to mention Arnav's self realization that indeed he was the one to cause so much hurt to a woman he loves and not anybody else, not the shadow of his father.

Very very brilliant story Naveen, and its written with Perfection.

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Anamika100

@Anamika100

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Posted: 13 years ago

#840

Why is Payal going to leave Akash? Or is she?

Loved Arnav taking responsibility for his own actions and also totally understand Khushi trying to find some peace and self healing by escaping I to memories of a time and place where that essence was in her life.

So glad NK is there to support her.

This chapter felt like it was moving in slow motion.