D3 FF-Its To Late Too...(ff name changed)note pg31 - Page 20

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Posted: 13 years ago
awsomeee!!!!!!!!!1 akshu
love da update alot
kria is 6th dancer nw wow
waiting 4 flashback
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update akshu 😊

Luvd it very much 😊

Waiting for d next part 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
Amazing update...!!!
Loved it...!!!
But wats kria's secret???plz tell soon
Rey angry...
Swaron talk was nice...
Waiting for next part...:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
it was just awsome akshu...i like this concept of yours very much...and this update was also very amazing...i loved it...

thanx for PM...and update soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Luvd the update...luking forward to the next update what with the promising precap 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: dmg_mjht_d3_rox


CHAP 4
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princi's office
princi:6th dancer mil gayi??????
neha:ha sir aur woh kria hai kria ghai!!!!!!!!
princi:kria ghai new student !!!!wow kria m very impressed coll main entry marte hi tumne weakling team main entry maar li m glad!!!!!!!
kria was was happy n sad both happy tht other were happy n sad cuz...(secret)
princi said,"yaya toh tum log aj se rehershal shru kardo !!!!!!!!!!!book karke!!!!!!!but use pehle main pure coll ko hamri 6th dancer se milana chatha hoon so swayam tum A.CS ho toh pure coll ko atrium main ane ko inform kar do in 5 min!!!!!
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everyone gathers in the atrium well swayam had not annocunced that wht was the meeting for!!!!!!!!
sharon said in a very eargerly waitng for the announcment voice,"aisa kya hua!!!!!!!kya announce karna chatha hai princi ?????
nil answers,"god knws sharon hope sum hud news n not bad!!!!!!!!
Princi came n should on the stairs on the platform type !!!!!!!!!
vicky sees sumthing n says,"guys wht are the weaklings dng there on the stage with princi???????
simmi replyed,"no idea dude wht happ????.
princi started,"i knw u all must be very confused tth why i called u all here!!!!!!!but there is a gud news !1!!!!!!hamri weakling ko uni 6th dancer ml gayi hai !!!!!!!!
the dazzlers were too shocked !!!!!!!!!
rey was too shocked,"wht?????6th dancer!!!!!so early!!!!!!who is she?????
rinni replies,"rey me too i wanna knw who is the 6th dancer.
princi said,"so the 6th dancer of the weakling team is KRIA GHAI!!!!!
rey looked at kria n said,"ohh kria!!!!!WHT!!!!!!!!!!!!!1KRIA !!!!KRIA GHAI rey screamt loudly the whole coll heard it
vicky who was next to rey whispered in rey's ears,"rey shut up ur too loud i understand teri zindagi ujad chuki hai🤣
rey wh was in a shock heard wht vicky said n reacted,"wht rubbish zindagi ujad vicky are u dumb??????
vicky replied,"dude are u mad!!!!!i knw u hate her aur agar enemy tumare gruop ke rivalry team ho na toh aur bhi badi musibaat ban jati hai
rey goes to flashback n remembers where kria had tld him tht she dosent like dancing n all he was angry !!!!!!!,"why did she lie??????"he thoght
sharon looked totally not intrested as she cared for her team n wanted to give their best in footloose
all the other dazzling were too shocked bt they too ignored!!!!!
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the weakling enter the rehershal hall
vishaka looks at kria n says,"kria aj tum reherse mat karo aj tum hamaar rehershal dekh so u will have an idea how we work!!!!!!!!!
bharat agreeing with vishaka"ha kria tum kal se shru karna .
kria nodded her head
weaklings started their rehershals!!!!!!n kria was sitting n watching!!!!!
kria was very happy seeing their passion for dance dance was thier passion just like dance was her passion!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
she closed her eyes n went into flashback where she saw she talking to her mom n next scene she was learning how to dance n then the flashback goes very fast n we see kria crying!!!!!!!!!!
she opens her eyes as amar calls her
amar says,"kria rehershal aj ke liye itna hi hai hum jaa rahe hai tum bhi jao kal ajan practise karne
kria smiled n said,"yes amar main ajaungi!!!!1bye guys
swayam interuppted her n called her name,"kria ek min i wanted to ask ki tumne dance learn kaisekiya i mean youtube se ya training n all!!!!!!!
kria replied,"hmmm woh mom mujhe dance classes lekar jati thi from the age of 14!!!!!!!!!!!!n as i gerow up main obvio khud hi jati thi so m a trained dancer!!!!!!!!!
neha went n hugged kria n said,"glad ki ur in our team bye kria "
vishaka too hugged kria n went to take her bag
bharat n amar swayam say bye to her n were dng sum work
kria turned away from where they were these ppl were standing she closed her eyes in pain trying her best not to cry!!!!!!!!!
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sharon entred the rehershal as she had a meeting with swayam
swayam enters behind her!!!!!!!!1
swayam who was behind sharon says,"hey sharon!!!!!!"
sharon turns around to him n says,"swayam???sorry i dint see u!!!!!!1
swayam replied,"itss kkk so lets start!!!!!!!"
"yaya",replied sharon
they both sat side by side
sharon spoke up,"waise swayam congo tumari 6th dancer "
swayam saidin a very czlm voice,"thank u sharon waise kal tumhe kya hua tha why were u crying!!!!!!!
sharon looked down n then slowly looked at swayam n look look hawa hawa
sharon still looking down said,"woh kuch nahi bas its my persnal life so just...
swayam replied,"chill sharon hum freinds bhi nahi hai so i wnt force u to tell me i wnt even think of forcing u!!!!!!!!!!!but remeber koi bhi problem ho toh kisi se share karna chahiye
sharon was very happy she thought swayam act toh kata hai humhe pasand na karne ka bt stil cares for ppl!!!!!!!
swayam looked at her expression n said,"sharon main itna bhi bura nahi hoon"
n sharon looked at him n smiled both were smiling at eachother!!!!!!!!!!
sharon again in her mind thought,"tum bure nahi ho main janti hoon "
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kria reached home n went to rey'd dad's room !!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
rey entered the house in anger n went to his dad's room from outside he saw kria n his dad hugging!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
kria came out of the room rey cathed kria ka hand n took her to his room
rey closed the door n looked at kria
he looked very angry kria thought !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!11
rey:wht do u think of ur self kuch bhi karogi tum?????dnt forget yeh tumara ghar nahi hai!!!!!kya kaha tha tune mujhe i hate dance its nt my style aur yaha pe akar sidha weaKling team join karli!!!!!!!!!!!!wait a min kahi yeh tumara plan toh nahi tha na !!!!!!!!!
ki tum mujhe bologi u hate dance aur mujhe neecha dikahne ke liye meri hui rivarly team join karli!!!!!!!!!!ek baar bhi dad se pucha nahi tumne how dare u!!!!!!
kria was pissed now so she screamt,"ek min!!!!!!!!!main tumare dad se permission le lihai he has no problem!!!!!!!!
MAIN itni cheap nahi hoon ki badla lene ke liye ya neecha dikhane ke liye yeh sab karungi plzzz!!!!!!!!aur kuch bhi ho i knw hum enemy's hain patr main kabhi bhi umare sath yeh nahi karungi rey!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
n kria walks out of the room
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kri walks out of the room n goes to her room closes the door n reste her head on the bed means she was sitting down n she remmembers the scene when she enterd rey's dad's room
FLASHBACK!!!!!!!!!
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it was mindblowing

kriyaash as usuall fantastic

loved them
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome part...loved it very much
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow. . .awsome update. . . .jaldi se nxt part update krna. . .
M egarly waitng. . .n dnt 4get to pm me wen u update the nxt part. . . .
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Posted: 13 years ago
Meri mahaan chudail behena!! 6 ka table ho Gaya! 30 pages ho Gaye ab update kar!! Jaldi kar asap! Mujhe nahi pata kese! :P and and and update bhi acha hi tha bas Teri spelling mistakes! Uff! Typical YOU! :P
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Posted: 13 years ago

hey guys!!!!a note for this ff too!!!!chill this ff m continueing😆😆😆😆

as i said before that m planning to change the ff's name!!!!yes i have changed it!!!!
it is its too late too...
the ...will be filled after the story is done😆😆😆
n one more thing!!!1
after the next chap of this ff there will be a leap of 6 months!!!!
yes thats cuz i really have no ideas what to do n nor i have tym!!!!
i have to finish my ff in this year cuz next year is my 10th n m gng to leave IF for a year!!!
so i will continue with an update and then i will take a leap!!!!
hope youl understand sorry!!!!
n ishu maharani m really sorry maine 6 ke table ka record todh diya sorry 😆😆😆

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