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Hey so your FF has seriously turned me into a stalker...lol...just read the last 2 parts...brilliant update as usual...amazing work!!

you know how much I love this FF of yours???

Wow.. I am so glad.. I was stalking the fan ficitions corner to get over my Arnav-less episode depression when I stumbled over here.. And I am so glad that I did... This is an A-M-A-Z-I-N-G ff... amazing!!! Just read it at one go.. in about 3 hours.. :D Kudos to thinking out of the box!!! :)

Arnav in a different light.. a bad but also a good one?... Just wonderful! At first I was not sure if I would like reading Arnav as a bad guy but hell your writing changed it all... First I thought, "Hell, Arnav as a mafia king. It's just not possible." But It slowly changed to, "Wow, he is HOT. I loovvee him'" Rofl' I am falling in love with this Arnav also I am slowly understanding why Arnav became the Arnav that he is... It like you have peeled each layer of his character slowly, effectively! Arnav's past has so much bearing on his current self. I actually hated it when he killed Karthik but I understand why he did that...

Khushi is just fantastic as usual.. her usual bubbly self.. I like it that there is no Payal.. Cheerful Khushi.. Has gone through hardships but still believes that there is good in life... Love her! Reading into her character up till now, on coming to know the truth.. Khushi would be very upset with him but later she would not leave him.. at least I hope.. After all dont they say love wins over everything :)

Lavanya.. Wow.. Her as Khushi's friend is wonderful. Although she is rich, she still values very good at heart.. I would love to see more of her.. I wonder what will happen when she would come to know about Arnav's truth... I hope her heart doesnt get crushed beyond repair, yaar.. and when she comes to know that he likes Khushi.. disaster.

Aman.. you included the elusive Aman.. :D He plays a side kick to Arnav.. Just like in the show :D His concern for Arnav.. like a brother.. :)

And Akash as a doctor.. I can totally imagine him like that.. I dont get it though whether Arnav is his brother or..? I guess thats another mystery that has to unveiled yet :D And also his unspoken feelings for Khushi.. hmm interesting! If ever Arnav comes to know of this... I wonder what would happen'

You have portrayed Arnav and Khushi in an awesome way.. so passionate yet so sweet, awesomely intense scenes and yet so cute... They totally complete each other.. There are some scenes which I loved so much..

1. Fountain scene... It was out of the world.. Arnav staring at her.. God, I could totally imagine the scene in my head.. and Arnav was rude to her.. :(

2. The first time Arnav dropped Khushi home.. although all their scenes are fantastic... but this was one of my favourites..

3. And their scene in Arnav's house.. I was blushing.. It was hot!

4. When Arnav came to her room... It was cute, hot and everything...

5. And their first kiss scene' I became totally red.. it was terrific!

6. The ice candy scene.. that was cute and atlast Arnav was telling her about his past'

Well before I go on pretty much listing all their scenes.. Its better if I stop this list here ha ha... :D Arhi scenes were terrific.. I loved all the crime part too.. Arnav as a sniper is HOT :D And I loved Arnav's childhood scenes... Some of them so sad.. He has gone through a lot.. very well portrayed!!

And this story is so unlike any other story that I have ever read... the concept of this ff is terrific and your writing enhances it so much!! It was like I had a movie playing out in my head. :D

I can understand your mindset tweeny weeny while writing this.. this story can have so many possible tracks :D I would have gone totally mind boggled :D I havent read any of your other stories, well relatively new here.. but I am definitely gonna stalk you from now on :D Your style of writing has won my heart :)

There are so many things in this that I am looking forward to see.. the way you would handle it.. Arnav's truth being revealed and Khushi processing that etc etc the list just goes on...The suspense in this story, love, friendship, crime, action, thrill' It has all the elements in the right proportions' Lovely story!

Phew.. Ill stop my rambling here.. or Ill go on repeating adjectives again and again.. :D In short, You are an amazing writer.. and this story is awesome! Eagerly looking forward to your next update'.(your new stalker) I have a feeling its gonna get intense :) Although I am extremely late but congrats on your new thread.. :) Lastly,sorry for this chatter (PS: Such a long post partly because I had to and I feel sad that I did not follow this ff before so..) :D

congrats for thread 2!!!!!😊😊😊😊😊👏👏👏👏👏

Hey dear, first of all congrats on the new thread..
Yeah I know I'm hell late. And not getting pms is another problem.

So finally read last 5 chapters..
Its really amazing..
So from now I guess I need to stalk this ff..

I won't sat continue soon coz I know you always will.
I'm just waiting for next.

u know what... love the pace
spending time. slowly getting to know each other..
very very realistic..
well done..

Im so good at stalking here too , that I staled your FF and found out that you've so nicely updated chap 22 !!

Amazing amazing amazing is all I can say babe !! i guess exma builds that kind of pressure on you to study but you're unale to and you end up writing such amazing things !!

So Arnav !! I must say he's damn intelligent !! He hit the bulls eye man !! Direct approach to Buaji was such a good idea , and she agreed !! She actually agreed to him !! I mean I guess no one can deny Arnav Singh Raizada can they ! And whoo Khushi is brave too, I mean ya even I go like her ! I watch those horror movies all laughing and slightly very slightly when Im alone I start getting scared !!

The convo they share after the movie is so serene !! I just loved it !! And he for the first time opens up to her about his mother !! Thats such a great change , I hope slowly he does open to her every secret of his and she also accepts him... And so the wedding !! And ofcourse how could Arnav not come and see her wearing the saree especially when he'd brought it for her !! i know the next chapter is gonna be amazing tooo !!

Im just waiting for more !! Loved the update jaan🤗

yes.. finally i found the 2nd thread nd yes awsum updates!! plzz update soon nd add me also in u pm list whenever u pm,...i have sent u a buddy requst!!👏👏👏👏👏👏😊😊😛..

OMG! 😲

updatee d nxt part soon...